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for Prize of Victory 2

by NovaAlexandria

person gollumsfriend
schedule March 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Exciting escape and battle, thanks for the updates!!!!
schedule March 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh I loved it! Can't wait to see how Aizen reacts if/when he finds out about all the secret Royal blood. Reeeeaaally can't wait to see Ichigo's reaction to being an uncle. XD
person vixenexiv
schedule March 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh!!! Excellent!
2 chapters in 2 days. You are spoiling us miss hehe.
Although, I am not complaining in the slightest.
Very nice chapter, things are starting to really heat up!

Well I dunno about you, but us over here in australia are heading for
Winter soon, time to rug up for us hehe.
Hope you guys get a serious defrost going on though. It's sounded pretty
Harsh over there with the snow :(
person Kain
schedule March 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Favorite part was when byakuya made that awesome save. After the battle is concluded will you show what has been going on in the soul society since the forces left?



Well.....looks like I spoke too soon on Stern ritter V......unless he survived Yachiru's attack and activates his Vollstandig. Happy too see just how much Yachiru takes after kenpachi lol.

-waits patiently for next chapter-
person Shatter the Sky Comes Quietly
schedule March 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Things are approaching a head, and it's looking dicey. Love the bloodline comment.
person Lilibet
schedule March 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say how much I love your story. Your storyline draws me in each time I read.I look forward to reading your new chapter every week. I feel so happy every Wednesday when I leave work and can finally have the time to read the latest development. Your creativity and dedication to your work is to be applauded.
person Kain
schedule February 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Pressed for time so very very short review.

Very lovely chapter that sets up for a big fight. Nice to see that Karin i goint to try and reason with Zee but if push comes to shove, she will end him.

As for stern ritter V......well I think Kubo will FINALLY let us see what Yachiru is made of. It will be interesting to see if her and Isane will double team him or if she will face him alone. Although at the rate Kubo is having the Stern ritter get killed off and lose their hype, he may just have this one last long enough till a captain class fighter arrives,. hell he may even have this be Kenpachi's debut kill after his training.
person Kia
schedule February 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved it as usual. Can't wait for every Wednesday :)
person Shatter the Sky Comes Quietly
schedule February 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Looking good. Never thought I'd see the 4th say anything like that. I like it, Orihime's been good for him. Will Zee consider their agreement broken now that the nest is under attack? Hope things settle down for you and can't wait for the next update.
person Shaun
schedule February 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Have been keeping up with this story since halfway through the first part now, and its still proving a pleasure to come back to every now and again. The plot is one of the best developed I've read, that and the worldbuilding for a Bleach fanfic is hands down my favourite. Second only really to Vathara's Embers. It devolves into just the right range of angst to real pain to small, found joys in what I imagine an occupation turning into. The version I originally read on fanfic.net just really carry the weight of the full deal, I still haven't gone back for a second warned off scene with Byakuya. :(

The characters I sometimes think go a bit out from where they would be on the human morality scale, but you structure it cleverly and the situations they are put in and the company they keep make the changes realistic, and a lot of fun. Nnoitra is my favorite in that regard. He's still mostly a dick but there is more to his character and it shows from beginning to now as he gives a little more when he takes. High definition moral greyscale. The OC's. Yes. Diminutive, ginger Ulquiorra. :3 You never really miss Ichigo through the story.

I'm kinda surprised to see Orihime hasn't just repaired Szayel. It's a deus ex machina fix, but then see: Orihime. Though there may be something waaaay back explaining that I've forgotten...

Plz continue. Much loves. :3