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for Prize of Victory 2

by NovaAlexandria

schedule February 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I keep getting the feeling that everything is about to start coming together quickly. Probably wrong, but I'm excited to find out either way. Also can't wait until Soi Fon has her baby! Great chapter. :)
person vixenexiv
schedule February 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh!!! I just cannot get enough of your writings.
Excellent I do have to say. One of the biggest highlights of my week is coming home after work & reading the next chapter :)
I am especially loving how you have developed each character uniquely.
It's superb.

Ummm jelly beans ahy. Well it would be awesome of each flake was a different flavor. But are the flakes the same color? Just different flavors? Cause if they were different colors, that could be interesting & terrifying at the same time haha. Brown snow for chocolate, black for licorice, red for strawberry. Would be some crazy food weather from cloudy with a chance of meatballs *a movie I love btw* hehe
person gollumsfriend
schedule February 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update!
person Kain
schedule February 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
in before new chapter gets posted.

Holy

shit

RUKIA!!!

they had better show just what the hell kind of training the royal guard gave them lol. This is reaching hyperbolic time chamber levels. I mean I am happy that Kubo is finally letting a female really shine but I jut want to see how quite literally JUST a few days a training got her to jump up so many levels.
person snowflower sister of toshiro241
schedule February 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i gotta say that szayel needs to get out more. and two, good scenes with yoruichi. i think it was clever no more like brilliant to have her hide in renji's hood
person mykalg88
schedule February 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love every word of this story. Its actually a highlight of my day when I see a new chapter. Moar! Moar!
person Lilibet
schedule February 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow your work is so great! I can't wait to see what happens next.
person yukihana hitsugaya
schedule February 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
grimmjow would get a boner while on a mission to save his daughter lol
person Mofaf1
schedule February 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story so far. Can't wait to see how Nnoitra acts when the babies finally start coming. Personally I think he's thrilled and will be even more gloating & excited about his babies than Grimjow was. It is good to see Byakuya away from Yammy; hopefully far enough to break the claim temporarily. I need to reread the last few chapters to see if Renji knows about the revolt being secretly planned or not. I know Szayel does and if Yorouichi will trust him enough to convey the start of the plan back to the refugees. If worst comes to worst I suppose she will talk to Karin when everyone meets up. I will say I'm curious if Ajuga was better cared for after the escape & if the conspirators & the bugs will find a way to coordinate their attacks to take out Aizen at last. I know Karin can talk through Mushi but if the the bugs can ease up on the refugees or use their raids on patrols from the Soul Society as a cover for covert coordinations with the refugees for a three prong strike it could make the coup a bit easier (not that it will be easy in any real way).

Mofaf1 aka MomOfFluffyAndFluffier
person Rawthorne
schedule February 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/biweekly

I know what I meant. And I'm glad to hear that you may increase the updates eventually. I loved all the points of view and plot movement in this last chapter! Im so ready to see the villains get what's coming to them. Also very excited about nnoitra being a father for some reason, I hope you cover that part and delve into some details there.