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for Prize of Victory 2

by NovaAlexandria

person Catori
schedule January 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nova, you are one of the best writers I have ever read on this sight. I love theses stories.
schedule December 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow at all the pregnancies. Lots of mini-Arrancar to wreak havoc. XD

At the risk of it being next chapter anyways, when will Ajuga and Diaemus be "shown"?

Loving this and can't wait for the next update!
person Kain
schedule December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Random question but, if Aaroniero had survived in this, would you have had him claim Rukia? Just a random thought that came to me.
person Shelby
schedule December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi;

I would just like to say that this story is brilliant. It is the perfect balance of everything in a story. I find myself looking forward to each and every update.
I adored Prize of Victory and can't wait to continue with this one.
Keep up the incredible work.
PS. I can't wait for Yammy and Aizen to die. (bonus points for writing characters I can honestly hate. my blood boils whenever a chapter involves them.)
person Bright
schedule December 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've enjoyed reading what you've written since I stumbled across your "Crossbreeding" series. I've followed this story since around when you started it, usually reading one chapter and then waiting for the next. I don't review often, but I've enjoyed the vast majority of what you've written here. (not into M/M) I hope you'll keep writing through to the finish of this story, and you might enjoy trying something in one of the different anime, might get you some new readers.
person Mystify
schedule December 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay another wonderful chapter! You guys are doing an amazing job on this story and I love you guys for your hard work.
person About the A/N
schedule December 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
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Statements like this one in your author's note are just one of the reasons I don't review after each and every chapter I read.

I definitely understand the desire to receive praise (in this case in the form of reviews) for one's hard work. I think it's only normal to want to be acknowledged for our hard work.

But at the same time your statement almost makes it sound as if the only reason you write is to see your 'review numbers' go up and get as many 'pats on the back' as possible. Is the only reason you write stories to receive praise from readers? You should write because you love to write no matter how many people are leaving reviews. And I really think that you DO love to write, because it shows through in your style.

So....I don't really know what else to say except it drives me nuts when authors toss threats of quitting a story or make obvious attempts at 'guilting' readers into leaving reviews. I normally DON'T leave reviews when authors make statements like that. But it's worked to your benefit this time, yeah? Hopefully you're a bit happier with the number of reviews after this most recent chapter.

PS: I did actually enjoy this chapter very much, but the vibe was spoiled for me after reading the A/N. I'll just skip those from here on out....assuming that you don't actually drop the story now.
person Avi
schedule December 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter as always! I love this story and I'm so excited and I can't wait for the next one! You and Black Fox keep up the great work!!! Oh I wonder what Toshiro will think about Soi Fon coming in as a claim spot but we'll see what happens soon I'd imagine. I wonder of we'll get to see how our two trouble makers are doing after kidnapped by the swarm. Also what about Soi Fon's child and how is Ggio doing and Yumichika. (I've probably spelled all their names wrong I'm sorry) I can't wait for the next chapter and have a great holiday and great work as always. I'm disappointed to see The Real King end but it was bound to happen and I enjoyed the story as well. Consolation Prize was awesome too I told you this before but I want to make sure you all know that you and Black Fox write so well and I love all the stories you two write!!!
person Anon
schedule December 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
after reading your authors message yesterday I was compelled to respond.I began reading POV1 when you announced you were pregnant. I would think POV1 was about 3/4 of the way posted by that point and i think in all that that time I think I may have posted I, or maybe 2, reviews. how unfair of me! I truly owe you and Black Fox and sincere apology. You both have provided me with hours upon hours of enjoyable reading and now, as POV2 is just getting very interesting. Unfortunately, I agree with you, there are poorly written stories out there that get hundreds (plus) reviews merely because they have graphic sex while you are getting the "hits" just not the actual reviews -which IS what the muse needs.

That all being said.... In this most recent chapter I particularly enjoyed the exchanges between Stark and Haribel.

I love the direction you are now going in.
person Rawthorne
schedule December 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
:) Merry Christmas. SOrry for lack of reviewing...I hate the feel of constantly waiting on chapters so I only check back about once a month so I can get a few in one sitting! Love all the drama that has started to fill the packs and the general hate headed towards Aizen. You are part of the reason I am such a bleach fan now, Besides Szayel and his sexeh butt. I hope you keep updating regularly and feel the love this holiday season. I would offer criticism...but I cant find anything to pick on! (except my full sense of denial that Real King is over...I hope there is a sequal or something..I love that universe!)