AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Prize of Victory 2

by NovaAlexandria

person Avi
schedule November 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have to guess maybe Orihime maybe she'd be quiet enough before freaking out or maybe it could be his dad oh the options it could be. I'm glad that she went to gin and found out what was going on and oh is that hint to possible diemtris and Aguja relationship ness in the future maybe it could be. Another great chaper as always I adored it!
person Kain
schedule November 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ah and now we switch to Orihime. I take it that the next chapter is when kids or at least her son learns that his father dabbled in quite a bit of rape with his mother?

I will have a longer review perhaps tomorrow or on friday, my power got cut so I am using the local library's wi-fi and thus am pressed for time and cannot type everything I wanted to at the moment.
person April
schedule November 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please please please don't make me wait a whole week for the next chapter!!!! The suspense is killing me!! On a side note, this story really is phenomenal, you are a great writer. :) but I don't do well with waiting. :(
person Sarah
schedule November 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
There are two things I look forward to on Wednesdays. Bleach manga updates and a new chapter of prize of victory! I love how it has become it's own story in a way, and a long way it has come. Your updates never disappoint. I don't have anything specific to say for this week other then I'm getting more and more anxious as the end comes! Love it!
person Brittany Spicer
schedule November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So, this week's double chapter had me on edge the entire time while squealing and jumping around. Aizen is such a terrible ruler that I wouldn't be surprised if everyone rose up against him and kicked his ass so bad, he'd never dream of trying to take over again. Poor Szayel and all the horrors he's suffered. I don't know who has it worst: Byakuya,Gin or Szayel but either way, they have very short sticks in the way of living life. I love this story so much and get way too excited when there is a new chapter to read since I always want to know what's going to happen next but it's never what I expect. It sometimes makes me wonder how Unohana is taking all this and just dealing with an ego as big as Aizen has. I would've kicked that fucker's ass so many times now that his balls would be coming out his throat whenever he thought to speak out. The worst Aizen is, it makes me look more and more forward to when he comes tumbling down with everyone's foot to land on his head. This will be the longest review I've written in a while and I think it's because it's a combination of all the chapters I've read since my last review. I know Unohana isn't scared of her psycho 'husband' but she doesn't exactly challenge him either and I've noticed how since he gave her those welts that nothing all that awful has happened against her and while that is understandable, she still has to deal with his playthings coming to be healed. Couldn't they find a way to dull pain receptors so they wouldn't hurt so much even if they get damaged? Just saying because in this world, it seems only the willing and clever survive without too much backlash and I'd say fighting Aizen in ways he can't combat is very clever as in dulling pain for those under his category of favorite.
I would like to see more of how Unohana is handling life with the supposed 'god' and if one day she'd deny him the chance to get between her legs. If he won't hurt her and rape her, he can't really do much if she doesn't want to have sex with him. Maybe it's just me so take that last bit with a grain of salt since I'm sure my opinion doesn't matter that much and won't change anything but I just wanted to tell you what I thought. I really do look forward to when this has new chapters. I still think part one was worst for everyone but part two is definitely worst for Szayel over everyone else. Gin's punishments have been a bit more lax in part two and he deserves it. All my hopes are for Szayel at this point in time. I have this feeling that Karin is either going to get found out or just punished at some point but it won't be so bad as Szayel's torture. Damn, this story spawns so many thoughts and makes me think how I write some terrible stories but I don't have anything on Aizen in this. I don't really have any other thoughts at this point so, until next time.
person Brittany Spicer
schedule November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Also, we don't have any snow up here. Just rain and it's really cold outside
person Avi
schedule November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter as always poor Szyel. I'm glad to see that things are going to get interesting at least it the terms of how close Renji is to the Stark and his pack, he's been close but this is a new level somewhat. It'll be interesting to see. Thanks for all your hard work! We really appreciate it!
person Avi
schedule November 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter as always I'm so pleased with Stark and Grimmjow standing up to Aizin but I wonder what will happen once he realizing things are going to be taking a turn against him. I can't wait to see this meeting over throwers against Aizin! Thanks for all your hard work. No snow here at the moment not cold enough for anything to stick.
person gollumsfriend
schedule November 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful update, loved the stand-off between Aizen, Stark and Grimmjow. One can definitely feel the tension and see the ending of the story now within sight - and it looks like it promises to be amazing!

Keep up the great work!
person yukihana hitsugaya
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
poor karin and grimmkitty. nice slap karin