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for Prize of Victory 2

by NovaAlexandria

person Anon
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I haven't written a review in a very long time but I'm still reading and loving your story as much as before if not more. Just when I think that I can't hate Aizen or Yammy more you prove me otherwise. I need Byakuya safe!! Soon, before I go mad with grief. I hope Yammy will have a very slow and painful death. Otherwise I may be forced to raid your bunker and take my revenge on you. xD

As for snow, we had a lot in the first few days of October, really strange...
person yukihana hitsugaya
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
is karin and grimmkitty gonna have anymore kids
person yukihana hitsugaya
schedule November 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. i actually discovered bleach at 16 years old on cartoon network
person yukihana hitsugaya
schedule November 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
poor ginny. he needed a longer reprieve. as for this weeks question XD, i would say aizen big time
person Kain
schedule November 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yikes, now THAT was a cliffhanger ending lol. I predict much tears to come. I hope Karin realizes that aizen humors her on her little requests and if he really wants to make szayel suffer, then he sure as shits gonna do it. The price you pay for having to live under an amoral douche with a god complex and the power to back it up is a hefty one.

-waits patiently for the next chapter-
person Avi
schedule November 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I know one thing that I would love to see is Hana giving a hug to Stark and Lillinett I feel so bad for those two! I know Hana needs time but it would be absolutely adorable!!!! And so needed! :) I feel bad for Hana and for everyone really. I hope things work out but it sounds like things are about to get rocking if Aizen breaks their last rule. A lovely chapter as always!!! Keep up te good work. Is the Real King still going on? Just want to be sure. I love that one as well
person Herringurl
schedule November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story! I check back for updates all the time! I love the world you have created! Though I am sad to see Kyoraku dead. It would be an interested plot twist if it turns out he's actually alive and with Kurosaki and the other "rebels". Please update as often as you can! I'm so excited!! and I love the way you have portrayed Starrk and the other espada! <3
person Avi
schedule November 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
While I didn't like this chapter as much because poor Soi Fon and her cute little kitty mate I hated what happened to him but I love how everyone is coming together to help her and hopefully good things will happen like Barrigan's ultimate and ugly death and the same goes for Yammy! I hope your doing well I loved how Toshiro and Tia worked to help Hana and I can't wait to see her and Stark and Lillnet hopefully rekindle their relationship because I mean they just have too!!! I enjoyed this chapter and you and Black Fox always wrote great chapters!!!
person Avi
schedule November 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter as always I can't wait to read the next chapter! So are there by chance pictures of the kids on here and the Real King's pack as well? They all sound so adorable I'd love to see them drawn, but you probably have something in the works or something. I hope the Real King is still being written too, I've caught up on both Prize of Victory 2 and the Real King :)
person Kain
schedule October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
lovely little father/daughter talk. Ajuga making plans to go after Yammy, although like her father said, it would have to be quick because in his released state he is beyond even Starrk in terms of reiatsu and would decimate her if she didn't get the job done quickly. It's always interesting too see Ajuga's inner struggle with her hollow half's "weak obey the strong" mentality and her human half's morality and her natural innate Kurosaki chronic hero syndrome. I mean seriously that family can't stand by when there is injustice going on, and God help anyone who stands in their way of correcting a wrong. When you first introduced her, I ain't gonna lie, I was not too fond of her for quite some time, but you have given her some really awesome character development and I view her more as a "jerk with a heart of gold". She can say some pretty demeaning and crass things, especially in regards to Shinigami, but you know she means no real insult and means well. Again, She is part hollow after all and will obviously have a different moral viewpoint than others, even if it's wrong. That and she inherited her dad's total lack of tact lol.

I also like how you shift between the different races point of view on things. The Arrancars are more instinct driven and believe "might makes right"and less prone to guilt or remorse while the human/shinigami races see how wrong the current world is and hope for a better tomorrow that might not come.

Happy the "why let the Arrancar soldiers live" thing will be brought up in future chapters. That has always been a thing on my mind since I first started reading POV, since as hard as I try I just cannot see an abundance of numeros being given the 'get out of jail free card". 'Some' of the Espada and fraccion sure, the rest? Can't see it no matter what scenario I think of.

Love the story regardless of what happens and are you gonna do another double/triple update?

-waits patiently for next chapter-

P.S

Tell Black Fox I shall return next week for the hand I lost in our battle. And she owes me a new machete, and I am pretty sure she stole 5 dollars in change from me while I was bleeding out on the ground.

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Had to make a few corrections.