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I am a little curious about something, Karin wants the escapees to succeed in bringing down Aizen right? Well does she realize that the escapees and possibly quite a few others intend on taking out the remaining numeros army as well? I adore Karin on and off and agree that Aizen is a horrendous piece of dog shit, but he is only a part of the problem. Her manner of thinking may be a little biased do to having been protected and only hearing stories and seeing only a few cases first hand for the better part of 15 years. If/when Aizen is brought down, why bother sparing his Arrancar soldiers? They are the primary reason Aizen succeeded in his goal and from what we have seen his acts of cruelty are no different from what they used to do....and what some still continue to do. And if/when Aizen goes down......it' a given that the whole "pet"/claimed system is going down with him. He is the lynchpin so to speak. Without him their as a deterrent, their is not a single Arrancar who could get away with even referring to someone a a pet let along abuse them. People have put up with it because their is literally nothing else they can do but with the near immortal pseudo-God out of commision, their is going to be a reckoning and I doubt even the Captains who have gained a somewhat "friendship" with their claim holders will allow themselves to continue to be claimed. Maybe she is just focusing on Aizen's fall but it seems to be whenever she thinks about someone bringing him down she neglects to consider the fate of his soldiers. And let me be clear I am in NO WAY defending that prick, but he does not actively go out and tell his troops to be utter cocks to their "pets", he doesn't stop them of course but you don't see him commanding them to commit any atrocities. Let the blame be placed on the person that did the deed.

Ahem, now that that's out of the way.

I don't know why I did not put 2 and 2 together in regards to Soi staying at the estate............but since yuro has been known to occasionally visit during her sneak in's......this means the chances of her coming into contact with Soi have risen!!!!!!!!!

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and now last but not least.

the possibility of Harribel or her faccion........claiming Soi............................

......all.....is.....forgiven

I repeat

ALL
Is
Forgiven-finishes in a sob-

I..I mean sure... I still want to see a large part of the arrancar populace burn in fiery torment....an...and sure I am soooooo gonna machete the crap out of Black Fox when she arrives but this, THIS makes me so freaking happy. Soi is my favorite bleach(female)character and things, after 15 long years of shame and abuse are starting to look up for her.

If Soi has to deal with being forced to be a "pet" then their is no one better that Harribel to take her in. She is the opposite of Barragan in every conceivable way.

-treats those in her household with respect and care
-does not condone abuse or rape
-next to Starrk is the only REALLY decent Arrancar(I.E she avoids killing unless absolutely necessary) and does not hold her herself above others and flaunt her position.

Glad to see hana come home and can't wait for her talk with ukitake and the talk between Ajuga and Grimm. Perhaps a double/ triple update if there immediate followups to this chapter?

Question: Ah, Hocus Pocus, now that brings back some memories.

-waits patiently for the next chapter-

-then assumes the lotus position in front of the bunker, placing machete across lap.......and listens for the far off sound..........of high powered kitchen knives.......

"....its a good day to die"

Usually I just read but I absolutely must comment on the pairing of Toshiro x Harribel....brilliant. Keep up the great work.

Oh you evil women........I legit cried....fucking CRIED!!

And that god damn motherfucking Kennel.......I had almost forgotten about it. I still can't imagine 15 years of among the already many atrocities......having to live/sleep in one of those and only being called out for a battle or abuse. That does shit too your pride. One of the two Arrancar that I actually wouldn't mind seeing survive this fic and you go and thrash his soul like this. I know in quite a few previous reviews I have expressed a wish of seeing the Arrancar populace get hit with a fuck ton of painful everlasting karma............but did it have to happen to the ONE that actually turned his ways around completely and realize what life was like now for the Shinigami's they conquered and become a total sweetheart? I would count Grimm but that kitty is still a bit of an ass at times lol.

I hope that bunker of yours can withstand the rage you have invoked in your readers. And all this after having read Soi blasting the shit out of that Quincy with her Bankai in the latest bleach chapter. You killed my high damn it lol.

And very well.....I shall try to be patient.

this a solo chap or double/triple update?

-waits patiently for next chapter-

Poor Soi Fon & Ggio; hope that rod gets buried deep inside Barragan while stuck in the on position with an everlasting power source ... Hmmm maybe motion powered so every little flicker of an eyelid or twitch of his lips gives it power and sets it off. Of course on the positive side it gets Soi Fon & the baby well cared for and safely out of Barragan's reach. Also, since Starrk has only been required to claim Jushiro and not claim Nanao, the First can claim Soi Fon if necessary to keep her & the baby safe (and ease Ggio's concerns a bit if informed of the emergency plan).

Fav chip dip: jalapeño ranch dip ... From Chuy's Mexican Restaurant. It's a creamy ranch with a mild kick from shreaded jalapeños with the juice.

That bunker shall offer little protection when you are besieged by rabid fans and run out of food, but personally not too surprised by this development, ehat else would a unstable maniac with a god complex who questioned the loyalty of his underling do after all? So I personally won't be outside the bunker, I'll save that for Aizen's next atrocity. That said in spite of the 50/50 chance of it being something horrific looking forward to reading more :)

Yay another triple update!! I'm so happy that Toshiro has realized his feelings for Harribel, it's about time those guys got started on a baby, they will both be wonderful parents. I feel really bad for Hana, but I think this is for the best. It will help her to grow and mature going through this kind of thing, I just hope she will forgive Stark and Lili soon. Considering what could have happened to Jushiro and Nanao if he hadn't claimed them, theyy were very lucky. And all the First ever wanted was a family, and Hana being born brought them all closer together. Throw in Grimmjow and his Mate and cub, and the family they always wanted is complete. Hana I'm sure realizes that in the world they live in now, they are going to need those family ties to continue to survive. Now, on another note, can I spend Halloween at your place, ot sounds fun!!

Wonderful update I enjoyed the little look into Hitsaguya and the thirds relationship along with his views on things. I Feel for Hanna her mom should of told her sooner but I know how hard it is to tell your children things that are not of good consequence. I have decided to try my best to review when I read a story I know how much I love reviews and mine are not written as well as yours are and not near as popular. Thank you so much for a wonderful read.

Well that was a new side too Harribel. Rare to see her so vulnerable and affectionate. It trips my mind that I can simultaneously agree wholeheartedly with what hyourinmaru is trying to beat into Toshiro's skull(due to my distaste for most Arrancars, sorry that may never change) while at the same time seeing the logic and Toshiro's counter argument. They are in between a rock and a hard place and no matter which option they choose they are fucked, literally in one case. He knows how fucked things are but is persevering not only for himself but his squad of survivors and if he has too make a choice he will choose the lesser of two evils. He knows even if he escaped he might not get very far and even if Aizen spares him he may very well be given to brutes like Yammy or Barragan or hell, Aizen might even keep him for a personal torture toy-shiver-.

now before I forget, ahem:

nooooooooooooooooooooooooo LISA CHAAAAAAAN-echo-echo-echo.

Will be interesting to see how the Hana/Harribel/Toshiro talk goes, I personally expect quite a few tears. It's only going to get worse when the other kids discover what been kept from them.

I too have noticed a theme in the reviews.......I am fairly certain my reviews attribute to the theme lol. I think it has too do with the fact that in part one and up too this point the tidbits we were given about the how the claimed were treated and what we saw of what a few POV's had to go through, it created a deep sense of sympathy for the conquered and an even deeper hatred for the conquerors. I like reading other peoples review to get a feel on how they view things so, while in the middle of typing this I swung by fanfiction.net and I think reviewer "mikasa" nailed quite a few points on why the theme is so reoccurring. Now while I may not be as passionate as he/she put it, in their responses, I agree with some of what they wrote, not all but some. Forgiveness is a hard thing and the past can't be rewritten. As I stated earlier it's a shitty situation for all involved and people gotta swallow their pride at times and go along with the shit storm or be swept up in it's wake.(holy shit that was deep, totes writing that down)

Fairly cute and hot chapter, I am growing a littler fonder of toshiro and Harribels relationship, mostly due to the fact that she has never really harmed him and drops all pretenses of 'ownership' when they are alone. Hopefully we get to see more relationships like theirs pop up from the less known pairings. I enjoyed their talk and correct me if I am wrong but was this line:

“Did taking his offer help with that void inside of you?”

Toshiro's way of asking her if everything she has gained from joining up with Aizen has been worth it?

Hey if the theme that some reviews, mine included start to get you down, remember this, you.are.a.BRILLIANT writer. Heads and shoulders above many and I am sure that you have noticed that even with the reoccurring theme of some reviews, every last one of them also carries praise of your work.

-prays for a possible future femlsash shini/arrancar relationship to satisfy his Yuri fix-

-prays for a double update and waits patiently for whatever comes-

To piggyback off of my previous review in regards to the femslash comment. Like perhaps one of Harribels Fraccion could nab themselves a willing shinigami female O.C. Wouldn't have to be anything big and could be just mentioned in passing but I am having femslash withdrawals and while you are a pro at yaoi I would love to see your handle on yuri.

Another thing in regards to her Fraccion since they can fuse parts of themselves to create Ayon, would it be possible for all three of them to merge their reiatsu to all claim 1 person? Or am i getting ahead of myself?

Another amazing chapter! I love this side of Tai, it's very nice! And I read somewhere that the story of her hollow hole you mentioned is canon(ish). It was in one of those character books right? Anyway, I love seeing a grown up Shiro *shivers* seeexxxyyy. Lol. And poor Hana :( I loved the fatherly reaction from Toshiro though! Who said he couldn't be a great father?