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September 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24:
...............Well....so Nnoitora is going to be a daddy.....hmmm.. hehe well ain't that just swe..... hold up the abusive,murdering(yes I still recall the people he killed for his current "den"), misogynist son of a whore is going to be a DAD?!?!?!?!?!?
-releases a howl akin to a dying Cheetah-
-runs outside and bicycle kicks an elderly women-
-runs back inside and starts chewing on keyboard-
inhale-exhale......okay I'm back and now on to the true review for this magnificent chap........no,nonononono, the one asshole beyond Yammy, Aizen and a few others who I prayed would not get a kid, got one? Okay I will admit Tesra is living proof that he does not pass on his darker habits and personality on to his charges and having a legit child of his own blood might mellow him out but damn it to all hell I sooooo wanted to see him die at some point and now I will feel bad about it because of the kid lol. I understood Ulq getting his somewhat redemption moments and getting humanized by his softer scenes with Orihime and his son but this dick cheese is an unapologetic abuser who needs another ass beating from Karin to humble him.
Okay okay for real this time, actual review:
Well after 15 years of near constant coitus I suppose it was bound to happen and I adored the many different emotions you had Rangiku go through, a low key 5 stage of denial kind of moment. Although her knee jerk reaction to what Nnoitora would do when he found out she was pregnant was really sad. This first thing she expects is pain and that right there shows you just how fucked up there "relationship" is, well that along with this:
“No one fucks with my property is all,” he grunted, looked away with a nearly unreadable expression, and then resumed his gruff and aloof manner.
It was… heart-warming in a sense, she thought, even though she knew he didn’t exactly have one to warm.
less heartwarming and more or less tragic. You know shits messed up when your referred to as property and it makes you even the slightest bit happy.
I loved her realization that she isn't alone in this and now hopefully things will get better for her.
And happy to see Retsu has not lost her touch, she still intimidates people.
-Alright, still powering through this, now on to chapter 25-
...............Well....so Nnoitora is going to be a daddy.....hmmm.. hehe well ain't that just swe..... hold up the abusive,murdering(yes I still recall the people he killed for his current "den"), misogynist son of a whore is going to be a DAD?!?!?!?!?!?
-releases a howl akin to a dying Cheetah-
-runs outside and bicycle kicks an elderly women-
-runs back inside and starts chewing on keyboard-
inhale-exhale......okay I'm back and now on to the true review for this magnificent chap........no,nonononono, the one asshole beyond Yammy, Aizen and a few others who I prayed would not get a kid, got one? Okay I will admit Tesra is living proof that he does not pass on his darker habits and personality on to his charges and having a legit child of his own blood might mellow him out but damn it to all hell I sooooo wanted to see him die at some point and now I will feel bad about it because of the kid lol. I understood Ulq getting his somewhat redemption moments and getting humanized by his softer scenes with Orihime and his son but this dick cheese is an unapologetic abuser who needs another ass beating from Karin to humble him.
Okay okay for real this time, actual review:
Well after 15 years of near constant coitus I suppose it was bound to happen and I adored the many different emotions you had Rangiku go through, a low key 5 stage of denial kind of moment. Although her knee jerk reaction to what Nnoitora would do when he found out she was pregnant was really sad. This first thing she expects is pain and that right there shows you just how fucked up there "relationship" is, well that along with this:
“No one fucks with my property is all,” he grunted, looked away with a nearly unreadable expression, and then resumed his gruff and aloof manner.
It was… heart-warming in a sense, she thought, even though she knew he didn’t exactly have one to warm.
less heartwarming and more or less tragic. You know shits messed up when your referred to as property and it makes you even the slightest bit happy.
I loved her realization that she isn't alone in this and now hopefully things will get better for her.
And happy to see Retsu has not lost her touch, she still intimidates people.
-Alright, still powering through this, now on to chapter 25-
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September 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
chapter 25:
-Slow clap-
Alright...Alright ya got me, despite my 2 previous reviews going into detail of my distaste for the one eyed douchenozzle, I will swallow my pride and admit that I quite enjoyed this Nnoitora centric chapter. He is an amusing drunk and I lol'd at quite a few parts during his drunken ramblings. It's also nice to get into the heads of these characters and see what makes them tick. And I will even concede that yes, he is a product of Heuco Mundo and while by no means do I like him after this chapt(Grrhatehimstill)or think his actions are excused, I understand him more. Still want to see him get stomped but I get why he is the way he is. He is unapologetic because the kind of attitude he displays was very commonplace in Heuco Mundo and he doesn't see it as wrong despite the change in location.
I liked his thoughts about Nel and something that really stuck with me from the anime/manga and it's something that people forget sometimes that beyond once being a willing member of Aizen's army and technically a bad guy for a time, Nel was also a very "smug super"(tv tropes). She was kinder about it but was arrogant and openly looked down on Nnoitora and did not treat him like a warrior deserving of the rank of Espada and even took steps to essentially babysit him which for a guy with his already massive inferiority complex must have been murder.
Grandpa...yikes that would push anyone into drinking over their limit.
Have already stocked up on some tissue in anticipation of the tearjerker next chapter is bound to be, poor Hana but we all have to grow up sometime and see the world for what it is.
This Weeks Question: I figure the fights are gonna run on the basic formula of good guys getting stomped until at the last moment help arrives to turn the tide. My guess is that Kisuke along with his Arrancar allies, the Vaizards and Xcution make the save and are wrecking the bad guys until Yhwach decides to get serious and enter the fray and then Ichigo FINNALY makes his appearance and is now able to use his full power without any hindrance. Although I would love to see an adult form Nel,Grimmjow and a freed Harribel enter the battle and tear apart some Stern Ritter. Harribel in particular would be looking for payback considering the humiliation that was dealt to her. Although Kubo does not have the best track record of letting his females cut loose without any aid from a man I would love for him to give Harribel her moment in the sun. The way he ended her fight in the karakura town battles was bull. She was the last Espada standing and was fighting with not only a powerful Captain class shinigami but two LT class Vaizards and holding her own before Aizen attacked her. the fact that it took Yhwach himself to take her out and imprison her says much about her.
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
-Slow clap-
Alright...Alright ya got me, despite my 2 previous reviews going into detail of my distaste for the one eyed douchenozzle, I will swallow my pride and admit that I quite enjoyed this Nnoitora centric chapter. He is an amusing drunk and I lol'd at quite a few parts during his drunken ramblings. It's also nice to get into the heads of these characters and see what makes them tick. And I will even concede that yes, he is a product of Heuco Mundo and while by no means do I like him after this chapt(Grrhatehimstill)or think his actions are excused, I understand him more. Still want to see him get stomped but I get why he is the way he is. He is unapologetic because the kind of attitude he displays was very commonplace in Heuco Mundo and he doesn't see it as wrong despite the change in location.
I liked his thoughts about Nel and something that really stuck with me from the anime/manga and it's something that people forget sometimes that beyond once being a willing member of Aizen's army and technically a bad guy for a time, Nel was also a very "smug super"(tv tropes). She was kinder about it but was arrogant and openly looked down on Nnoitora and did not treat him like a warrior deserving of the rank of Espada and even took steps to essentially babysit him which for a guy with his already massive inferiority complex must have been murder.
Grandpa...yikes that would push anyone into drinking over their limit.
Have already stocked up on some tissue in anticipation of the tearjerker next chapter is bound to be, poor Hana but we all have to grow up sometime and see the world for what it is.
This Weeks Question: I figure the fights are gonna run on the basic formula of good guys getting stomped until at the last moment help arrives to turn the tide. My guess is that Kisuke along with his Arrancar allies, the Vaizards and Xcution make the save and are wrecking the bad guys until Yhwach decides to get serious and enter the fray and then Ichigo FINNALY makes his appearance and is now able to use his full power without any hindrance. Although I would love to see an adult form Nel,Grimmjow and a freed Harribel enter the battle and tear apart some Stern Ritter. Harribel in particular would be looking for payback considering the humiliation that was dealt to her. Although Kubo does not have the best track record of letting his females cut loose without any aid from a man I would love for him to give Harribel her moment in the sun. The way he ended her fight in the karakura town battles was bull. She was the last Espada standing and was fighting with not only a powerful Captain class shinigami but two LT class Vaizards and holding her own before Aizen attacked her. the fact that it took Yhwach himself to take her out and imprison her says much about her.
-waits patiently for the next chapter-
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September 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! OMG I was waiting for something like this yay!!! Some of the best chapters yet I'm so happy I wanna cry :-) As for the manga, I have no idea what direction it's going in and trying to figure it out makes my head hurt :-(
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September 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Harribel x Ichigo
Make the poor bastard the King of the Soul Society and Emperor of Hueco Mundo!
Make the poor bastard the King of the Soul Society and Emperor of Hueco Mundo!
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September 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
And the King of the Quincy...sorry I left that out :P
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September 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well that went from nice and sunny to tearjerker in a heartbeat. My rage towards Yammy is at an all time high after seeing Renji and Ajuga's reactions to Byakuya's current state. It says a lot that their are characters that I hate more than Aizen in this fic. Now this:
"Jushiro wondered just how long it would be before the two would finally see the unvarnished truth of what life was like under Aizen’s tyrannical control for the majority of the Soul Society’s denizens. He feared that day wasn’t far off and wished he could do anything he could to postpone it.
Unfortunately, no one could have predicted how quickly that moment would arrive."
This right there is some sick foreshadowing. I take it the kids/teens are going to get a face full of the reality their parents and some of there comrades and the guy they served helped create. It was bound to happen eventually and the protective little bubble was going to last forever.
"Maybe I'll upload the next one sooner, make it a double update or something so we can finally have some fluff and happy thoughts for a change.
Would love to see the fluff and happy thoughts.............but given that Nnoitora(Grrrhatehim) is in the next chapter, happy and fluff can only go on for so long lol. Would love that double update though, this story is far too damn good and the breaks in between chapters gut me. Also sorry about not clarifying the Soi thing, I can see how that would confuse someone lol.
Question: hmm Cross race pairing eh? I would have loved too have seen Ulq survive and pull a heel face turn and pair up with Orihime. His image song/poem and the short story he had in the data book gave big hints that he had fallen for her. Basically like this story, except for the rape and claiming deal lol. And just because I am a fan of femslash I would have been tickled if menoly and loly had pulled a heel face turn after Orihime saved them and have them follow her back to Karakura Town after the battle and act as her protectors under the guise of simply plotting to take her out(but never going through with it), Loly in particular being all tsundere about the arrangement but still looking out for the girl.
"Jushiro wondered just how long it would be before the two would finally see the unvarnished truth of what life was like under Aizen’s tyrannical control for the majority of the Soul Society’s denizens. He feared that day wasn’t far off and wished he could do anything he could to postpone it.
Unfortunately, no one could have predicted how quickly that moment would arrive."
This right there is some sick foreshadowing. I take it the kids/teens are going to get a face full of the reality their parents and some of there comrades and the guy they served helped create. It was bound to happen eventually and the protective little bubble was going to last forever.
"Maybe I'll upload the next one sooner, make it a double update or something so we can finally have some fluff and happy thoughts for a change.
Would love to see the fluff and happy thoughts.............but given that Nnoitora(Grrrhatehim) is in the next chapter, happy and fluff can only go on for so long lol. Would love that double update though, this story is far too damn good and the breaks in between chapters gut me. Also sorry about not clarifying the Soi thing, I can see how that would confuse someone lol.
Question: hmm Cross race pairing eh? I would have loved too have seen Ulq survive and pull a heel face turn and pair up with Orihime. His image song/poem and the short story he had in the data book gave big hints that he had fallen for her. Basically like this story, except for the rape and claiming deal lol. And just because I am a fan of femslash I would have been tickled if menoly and loly had pulled a heel face turn after Orihime saved them and have them follow her back to Karakura Town after the battle and act as her protectors under the guise of simply plotting to take her out(but never going through with it), Loly in particular being all tsundere about the arrangement but still looking out for the girl.
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September 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn soi was awesome in the latest chapter.
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September 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter as always I loved how everything went! I have to say the beach or somewhere tropical just somewhere warm, I'm not a fan of the cold.
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September 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another lovely chapter,I am stoked at the prospect of weekly updates.
Nice to see Ajuga still has time for her Gin, but maybe her opinion of him being at the bottom of the pack would change if she had seen him when he was 100%. That man was a bad ass beyond many and if it wasn't for the Hōgyoku he would have succeeded in killing Aizen. Would love to see Soi get in on one of these all female get together's, god knows she could use one after all she has been through.Just a chance to relax and unwind and connect with people beyond Yumi and Ggio and help figure out any kinks in their plan to save her child. Maybe the guys could have a "guy's night out", although that would very well end in fisticuffs, probably do to something Nnoitora would say.
Question: Hmm I can see Rukia obtaining Bankai by the time the story ends. Girl needs to step her game up against these new enemies and Kubo needs to give his female characters more time to shine and not just give them the backseat to his precious male characters.
Nice to see Ajuga still has time for her Gin, but maybe her opinion of him being at the bottom of the pack would change if she had seen him when he was 100%. That man was a bad ass beyond many and if it wasn't for the Hōgyoku he would have succeeded in killing Aizen. Would love to see Soi get in on one of these all female get together's, god knows she could use one after all she has been through.Just a chance to relax and unwind and connect with people beyond Yumi and Ggio and help figure out any kinks in their plan to save her child. Maybe the guys could have a "guy's night out", although that would very well end in fisticuffs, probably do to something Nnoitora would say.
Question: Hmm I can see Rukia obtaining Bankai by the time the story ends. Girl needs to step her game up against these new enemies and Kubo needs to give his female characters more time to shine and not just give them the backseat to his precious male characters.
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September 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter as always! I was thrilled to find out about Ggio and Soi Fon and Yumichika! I also love the idea of them finding adoptive parents with Tersa and Tatsuki! Aguja of course loves her freedom too much to join Harribele but I like that Hana has! I can't wait to read the next chapter!