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for Prize of Victory 2

by NovaAlexandria

person Avi
schedule September 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter as always! To answer your question I have to say that I look forward to Soi Fon and Ggio hopefully able to raise there child at some point and have a relationship. I also want to see happy endings for Yumichika and Rangiku and Gin, maybe Gin and Rangiku will get together? And Yumichika will find someone to be with? I look forward to see who Aguja winds up maybe getting feelings for at some point?
person Mystify
schedule September 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow Nova, another great chapter I loved seeing the story from Diemus' point of view it helps me understand his character better and how he thinks. If I could live anywhere I'd want to live in warm mountain area.
schedule August 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well looks like there is a new addition to the secret club.



weekly updates?.......

WEEKLY UPDATES!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

yes.........Yes........YES....please make this happen..............YES!!!!!!!!!

Don't keep your legion of fans in suspense.

person Aviary
schedule August 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dinner reservation's chapter 16

Another great chapter as always. I love the bait Karin used to get Grimmjow to go to the dinner saying his daughter and Demus were getting closer!

To answer your question, I totally think the fights were down played and could have been played up more and been a little more badass because who doesn't love wickedly awesome good fight scenes?
person Aviary
schedule August 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Soul Shatter
Another great chapter!! Awesome work and I say it's safe to come out tomorrow :) Keep up the great work.
schedule August 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well....that was emotionally jarring. I could totally understand Karin's reaction, she has tried and tried to temper her daughters recklessness and with her emotions running high in the middle of a battle she would obviously lose her shit over her daughter not only endangering herself but others as well.
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Hmm one thing eh?

Something, ANYTHING happy to happen to the claimed and still being hurt Shinigami while simultaneously something jarring and bad happens to the Arrancar.

person Mofaf1
schedule August 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love how the story is developing and the characters evolving.

Hmm besides the evil trio deaths? And the romances for poor abused Byakua, the adorable cubs, and the birth of Soi Fon and Ggio's cub ... And the general joy of life once Aisen is deposed and the refugees reunited with everyone else?

I guess it's a toss-up between seeing everyone finally healed (at least physically; ie Byakuya and Soi Fon able to speak again etc), I'd love to see the reaction of Nnoitra to the announcement that his over-active libido has led to Rangeku having a bun (one or more) in the oven. I would imagine the relief and celebrating would lead to a spike in births as they tend to do historically in the real world after war.
person leanne
schedule August 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I would really like to see Ichigo meet his niece
person Anon
schedule August 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
To answer this week's question, I want to see Gin play some part in Aizen's downfall. Whatever side he was on or seemed to be on, he was always one of the most dangerous characters in all of Bleach. His competence, ruthlessness, mendacity, and percipience haven't all been destroyed by his years of torture. He endured about a century of espionage, which is no easy life for a spy, to learn about attempt to kill---"to stalk", as Ajuga would say---Aizen. Gin could see this time of torture as more stalking time. Maybe his part in defeating Aizen is inconsequential, but symbolizes his resistance; maybe his part is critical. Maybe it's an epic defiance but fails, like in canon. In any event, I think Gin should have a starring role in Aizen's defeat, even if Gin's own role is that of a tragedy.

And you ask for "one thing you really hope to see", which is sad, because I've got so many. But a restoration or demonstration of the badassery of Ichimaru Gin came to mind first; I've been hoping for a while that I'd see it in the climax.
person MIlissaRukia
schedule August 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading your stories for a long time and love reading them all. Thank you for the enjoyment and leading me into another world