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for Prize of Victory 2

by NovaAlexandria

person Mystify
schedule August 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Dear Nova,
How are you doing? You haven't updated in a while so I hope you are ok. How is your baby doing? I just wanted you to know I miss your updates on this story and The Real King. I really hope you feel well and that things are doing well in your life.

Oh, and please have someone kick the Second in the head for me, Ggio deserves his child to be born! Thank you.
person Harlequin
schedule August 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Answer: reading lots of fanfiction.

Ugh, abusing a pregnant woman in the hopes of MAKING her miscarry? Barragan gets worse every time he's mentioned.

Great chapter, as always! Sorry for the short review.
person Aviary
schedule August 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I remember when someone else had commented on how they still dislike Szayel, okay granted in the show he's a little out there but he's not that bad. I just want to say you've totally turned around my opinion of Szayel, I love him on here, okay well I love everyone here but Aizen, Barragan and Yammy. Another great chapter as always! It was dark and terrible but it was great! I love how Ajuga noticed something was wrong, loved that part. I can't wait to read more. And on no the dreaded writers block! I hope you get muse to write soon but it's hard don't force it, it will rerun in spades in the right time. It's been pretty dreary and rainy here the past week and it's supposed to continue till the end of this week, but it's not too bad. I hope everything is good for you!

-Avi
person Aviary
schedule August 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
12 Scarab

Thar was a good chapter I do like how Karin was used as bait! It was awesome and the portal bug seems almost cute at least for a little bit. Poor Grimmjow but I like his nonchalant-ness with Aizen I loved it! Keep up the great work!
person Aviary
schedule August 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Romp

Another great chapter as always! I wonder when Tatsuki will get pregnant I can't wait to see their child together. More Soi Fon and her mate love it. I wonder will Yumi get a happy ending with someone too? Like everyone else will eventually I hope!
person Aviary
schedule August 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter as always!! I have to say to answer your question I have to go with Grimmjow's resurrection. Who wouldn't want to look like a large kitty? I can't wait to read the next chapter. I feel bad for Unahonoa, and aww I loved how Ajuga was checking in on everyone!
person Aviary
schedule August 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9.

Omg Soi Fon!!! I can't wait to see more of her and Ggigo is so cute! I'm excited to see what their child will look like! I can't wait another great chapter as always!

Bakyua you poor baby! I both loved and hated what he went though but I know it's building up to great evil ways for Yammy to die a horrible horrible death!

To answer your question I have to say for a zanpukto I'm leaning towards Hisagi's because it looks awesome and deadly and I would love to see his Bankai! And just imagine how awesome it would be!
person e
schedule August 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hello¡
For 3 months this story has been out of my mind, so today when i got around to check my mental list of "pages to check for updates" what a treat to get to read 4 chapters in a row¡ I feel so bad for byakuya (but glad Yamy WILL get payback), i found the dinner scene very sweet and funny, same for the interaction between Ajuga and Diaemus (how everyone is afraid o them getting paired)... and it does show the "coalition" of households... how in spite of being wild the espada can sit down, talk and get along. I'm glad Tesra is taking the cub in, even if Gigio does not know half of it he is right the baby will get protection... if Aizen and Barragan will be happy upon seeing the espadas cooperation and the amount of power that has build around Karin and Grimmjow based in friendship (so to speak)is yet to be seen
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person Aviary
schedule August 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7
Another great chapter!!! Thanks for all your hard work!
To answer your question I have to agree with you on the drawing. I would love to be able to draw as we'll but I can't.
person Aviary
schedule August 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6:
Oh man that was a great chapter as always sorry I haven't reviewed till now I get so caught up in the story I just click next but I read PoV 1 and reviewed and loved it same with Conciliation prize . How old are the children now so I can keep track like how old do they look I know teens but can we be more specific please? If possible. I have to say I'd go to Italy it's lovely over there. Keep up the great work I hope thing are well for you all!