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for Prize of Victory 2

by NovaAlexandria

schedule June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy

Everlasting

Shit

wh...what....how could you.....WHY would you........ow.....oooowwwww........you just drop kicked my feels and then pissed on the crumpled remains. Oh Jesus if it gets out to the more abusive Arrancar that they can literally rape their pets souls, it is going to be hell. Byakuya has lost the last remnants of Hisana as well as his hope of being saved and has had to witness the desecration of his last sanctuary. It says a lot when I am preferring freaking Aizen to someone, any chance he will find out that Yammi worked a fucking loophole around his orders. I have a question about Senbonzakura though, I try to forget that go awful Zanpaktou spirit filler arc but when he is able to physically interact with the material word wouldn't Senbonzakura be able to use Bankai? It might just be because Byakuya was in such bad condition but I figured Senbonzakura would be a little quicker on his feet especially against a slow brute like Yammi. another thing that has been on my mind since I first started reading POV, but are the Arrancar in your story much stronger than their anime/manga counterparts? In the anime/manga the fights, while hard were consecutively in the captains favor and they had bested the Espada(except for Harribel who like a bad ass fought off 2 LT level vaizards and a captain) before Ichigo could even arrive, I mean hell Byakuya and Zaraki curb stomped a fully released and pissed off Yammi and here it just seems like they steamrolled over the captains during the battle in the fake Karakura town and the fights in Hueco Mundo and are much stronger. Even Ggio managed to survive here when he was wasted by Soi when she decided to get serious in the manga. This fic fits the "For want of a nail" trope to the max lol.

And for as dark as this story gets at times....and despite me wanting many MANY characters dead.......you have the guts to tackle very uncomfortable things(read your reply to koh on fanfiction.net)in a very intelligent manner,give very respectful replies to your curious readers and treat characters crimes and peoples reactions to them in a very believable manner. I mean I HATED Ulquiorra in the beginning and still have not forgiven him entirely for the whole 5 year daily rape of Orihime but you have given him some nice character development and have had him show genuine remorse for giving into his instincts and I adore how sweet Ggio is on Soi and Tatsuki and Tesra are the most stable couple in this hell hole. Although Ichigo might take offense to finding out his childhood friend is with the Fraccion that tortured him a little after his fight with grimmjow, unless that didn't happen here and I might need to go back and re-read a few of Nnoitora's chapters to see if their was even any mention of him battle Zaraki. It says a lot that I started out this story despising the Arrancar for their treatment but over time grew to like a few of them.

Bunker question: Hmm when can ya leave huh?

-sets up lawn chair right outside bunker.....and waits-

anytime.......any.time.at.all

although all will be forgiven if there is a quick update ;D

-waits patiently in lawn chair for the next chater-
person anon
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
If I could punch you, I would so do it. I mean WHY do you keep picking on Byakuya? T.T you make me cry...please make him happier m(_ _)m
person Mystify
schedule June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I want to say I'm super addicted to your stories Nova! The POV series has had me on the edge of my seat since chapter 1, and I die waiting for updates! I was upset in POV2 when Szayel got targeted again, I think that was the only thing I didn't like about the series was Aizen's reasons for torture and how he did it, made me cringe...but it made me hate him more than I thought he could so that's a perk! XD Anywho, I hope you continue with your stories and updates, loved the HMKs and the side stories you've written based off of their story too. Oh, and I have a theory about Diaemus since the topic of mates was brought up, I hope I'm right, but won't say here in case it spoils something.
person MudbloodMalfoy
schedule June 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've loved this so far! True it's dark, but I like how you aren't afraid to go there, to push the characters to the absolute limit, then just a little farther. You're an amazing author.

On a different note, are you going to kill Byakuya? :/
person Sarah
schedule June 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So I'm pretty sure I real POV in like a week and now I'm finally cought up! I've read a few of your older stories and I have to say that your writting is amazing; and it's gotten better over the years! I'm kind of terrible at writing reviews but I just thought I'd let you know that you recently gained a new reader who is in love with your work! I feel like you have the best out come to what would've happened if the Winter War was lost.
And oh my goodness I really don't think I can take much more of Byakuya being tortured, it's killing me :( I hope Yammy gets eaten by the swarm >:)
I keep up with the Manga as well and I just have to say that I can't wait for Grimmjow to make a real debut!
schedule June 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another lovely chapter and thank you once again for responding to my review.

And yes I have been keeping up with the manga.......fucking Kubo is a god damn genius lol. Something about that chapter that really hit me was.........."Fake" Zangestu said that due to his interference Ichigo has up to this point only been able to use a FRACTION of his true power, scary thought eh? If that is truly the case then just how fucking strong is this kid lol? If he had been able to use his full power the battles up to now would have been FAR shorter. Now that his limiter is off it will be nice to see him go toe to toe with some Vandenreich ass.

Are you going to perhaps implement this plot point into your story? It would be quite amusing if his arrancar "rivals" found out just how much stronger Ichigo could have been when they fought him.

Oh man your gonna put Byakuya through the grinder again eh lol? Dying and reincarnating don't sound so bad at this point. He would be free of Yammi and the memories of pain.

-Waits patiently for next chapter-
person Kath
schedule May 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yh, I guess you are right. I think it's important for her to learn how to fight and protect herself but still she should know that if her mom says no, it's no and she has to obey. Mom always knows better. And that's not gonna happen, if Grimmjow keeps contradicting Karin in front of their kid, he should do it privately. Parents are supposed to be an united front. At least that's what I think. Though she is on that age when we always believe we know better than anybody else.
Poor Soi Fong, I don't know how she does it. I think I'd lose my mind, if I had to live what she has. I hope their baby has a happy ending. Barragan is one sick bastard.
I never thought of Tatsuki and Tesra as a couple, but now I think they're just perfect for each other and they're finally thinking in having one child of their own :) So cute :) I love kids.
schedule May 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
welcome back and another excellent chapter.

I gotta say, TesraXTatsuki is probably the most normal/stable relationship in this story next the KarinXGrimmjow.

1.The relationship did not start out with rape or any kind of duress

2.He has never once abused Tatsuki or forced her to do something through the claim

3.He allows her to do as she likes throughout the day and is attentive to her needs

4. Despite having been around someone like Nnoitorafor so long he still treats women with respect and dignity(side-note, I REALLY still don't like Nnoitora, that whole "relationship" he has with Rangiku just screams of abuse, not always physical, but abuse none the less)

And it is always good to see Soi, glad we are getting more info on her time spent under Barragans thumb. Very interested in Seeing what you do with Mareyo.

Now as for Cats, I gotta say I prefer the small ones, adorable little bastards.

-Waits patiently for the next chapter-
person Rachael
schedule May 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Worth the wait. :) As expected though, I review because I'm sure it makes you happy but every chapter I guess I could say the same thing. Awesome, well written, in character, detailed and exquisite. And as usual, I eagerly await the next chapter. :D
person Brittany
schedule May 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting. Aizen finally got told off. Why does he abuse everyone but his wife?
Grimmjow took the whip for his wifey. He's pretty noble