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Good grief, PLEASE tell me Aizens going to kill the braindead brute and be done with it! Tolerating him nearly killing Byakuya would be one thing, but all but defying his authority by pciking a fight with Unohana? Thats a bit much. As for your question, assuming that is indeed what it was I'll take Ichigo's absurdly oped ressurecion, if that doesn't count Barragons probably, it may not be pretty, it may not be as flashy as most of the other high ranking espada's, but it certainly is effective and the fact that pretty much the only thing that can do more then annoy him is his own power seals the deal.

I would think...that people don't have much to say have the darker chapters. They are emotional to read. It's hard sometimes to even scroll down the page. I get so stuck on one part and have to double or triple check a paragraph to make sure that my feelings are appropriately matched to the scene. When I read, it's more vivid in my mind then a movie, so I am deeply affected. Rest assured though, the reason you don't have many reviews after such darkness, is because you have left many people 'wordless.' Or speechless. If you got a review it would probably be like..' Holy shit...' or 'Omg...' Most people just stay silent. Your stories, all of them, are profound. I shall review every chapter for you to ease your worry! Remember, I am the one who read 'Midsummers Eve' all those years ago. So, I have been following your writing and it seems almost like an honor to see it evolve and become so affecting. I am happy to see Unohana break a little, she needs to cry I think...Being used...being a voyeur to such cruelty...Yeah. So I was oddly relieved to see her let go. Yammy, I hope gets a raping of his own, a million lashings, hearing and sight taken away, a few fingers removed, castrated and cut...Any of those will do. All of them preferred. That bastard is out of control. I think, in this story, I dislike him over Aizen. By far. I love the relationship between Gin and Ajuga. :) Could you please show me how to pronounce Orihime and Ulquiorras sons name? Thank you and I hope you feel better soon! :)

-Rachael

:O Byakuya...oh, poor Byakuya...poor Soi-Fon, poor Ggio...You are doing an excellent job of drawing sympathy for them and making me hate Yammy and Baraggan. Will they die soon? I really hope they die soon, and very very VERY painfully at that.

You say a long time, 15 years but they are all hundreds of years old. They are centuries old! 15 years is nothing to them. I can't believe that less than one quarter of a century would finally change their souls. Normal people, hell yes, but not them. No to say they don't get emotionally scarred, mentally damaged and tainted in personality, but 15 years seem so little to them. Not that torture goes by fast, but I disagree with your justification for the changes your story makes.

Still, nasty mutilation, tragic futures and all, it's a great story, keep it up.

Oh, if I didn't hate Yammy in this story before, I certainly do now! I can only hope that you have a truly painful demise in store for him later! Poor Byakuya!!

haha If I could smack you, I would =) WHEN are you going to stop torturing Byakuya?!!!! I hope Yammy gets a good kick in the balls and then dropped into an active volcano somewhere...

oh god....my feels for this chapter, especially the Byakuya part. That man needs the hug to end all hugs. I was most overjoyed to see my precious soi fon lol, thank you thank you thank you for that. Smart thinking to get Ggio a break from his master and i loved the part where Soi thought given the chance if things REALLY go south that she would hightail it to the world of the living, join the rebels and give em a talking too for not saving them yet. Loved this chapter although the
Byakuya part killed me.

Well Aizen said that Orihimes power was tied to her will but other than that it didn't have any limits, if she really wanted something to not happen she could MAKE it not happen.

She had the power to reject the hougyoku if she actually wanted to, if she was serious she could've wiped ulqui out of existence.

I don't know whether or not you've seen gatekeepers but I picture a truly broken Orihime like a powered up Rurikos Gate of Life changing into The Gate of Genocide with the power to wipe out existence is she was serious enough...

Holy crap that actually gave me a fic idea :P

Your comment after the chapter was "*Runs and rides in my anti rabid fan girl bunker. The start of Byakuya’s breaking." Kinda confusing because I don't get how you could say "the start" of his breaking. Maybe the start of his demise? Anyway, I'm not a rabid fan girl, but I am a feeling human being, and the non-stop torture of Byakuya has finally broken me. Get someone to perform a mercy killing, please. Ajuga could chomp into his throat and end it quickly. While she's at it, put Gin and Soifon on the list. Hell, might as well add Yumichika and Ggio. Make it a real gore-fest.

Ah, this is perfect! The reCaptcha saying is "Psyche Mrfeem". I'll take that as an omen, although, I don't know who Mr. Feem is.

Mine is to become a Medical Lab Tech, I am almost there. I am finishing my first two years and just have two more. I knew a girl whose dream was also to be a marine biologist. She was never able to finish due to medical reasons.