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for Prize of Victory 2

by NovaAlexandria

person x
schedule March 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
But she fixed Grimmjow's arm, and arrancar's are 'just souls' too - so even with the length of time, she'd probably be able to fix them. Besides Ukitake's has his affliction for year's and she was able to aid him. If not, couldn't the pink haired scientist just reverse the surgery?
person Kristin
schedule March 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I finally got to read part 2 of POV. I'm so happy that you already have eight chapters and i got to read them all at once. As always nothing but the absolute best from you. I don't even know where to begin. Poor Gin, he can never catch a break. It seems the Swarm has taken this break to gain knowledge, evolve, and breed to prepare for their invasion and most everyone in the Soul Society has become a bit comfortable because they beleived the Defence Net to be impenetrable. I am so glad that the general Ajuga found was dead, I'm dreading the day that Aizen finds out about any one or all of the ladies' royal blood. Loved Gimmjow sucking up his pride for his daughter, you wrote it perfect. And I really liked Harribel giving the Talk to Ajuga and offering the young ladies the option of becoming her fraccion. I laughed my ass off when Hana misunderstood and thought Harribel was offering to Claim her, that was great.
I know you asked these questions a while ago, but I saw comercials for it on Adult Swim and wanted to check it out to see if it was any good and I have beee hopelessly hooked ever since. I have gone back and read the whole manga too and am now watching the new episodes on Adult Swim. My favorite characters in your story are Grimmjow and Ajuga and Karin a little less than them. If I could go anywhere I would want to go to Japan, Europe I know a little vague but there are many places in Europe I would love to go. If I could I would be an astronomer, I absolutely love space.
I have to tell you how much I enjoy your story, even through the dark parts because they are necessary and everything is so well written. I love your ideas and writing style, never stop, I bet you will become a best selling author. I can't wait to go read The Real King now. I love your stories and am patiently awaiting another amazingly written chapter.
Hope all is well with the little one and family.
schedule March 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Once again thank you for answering my questions. I lol'd at Hana misinterpreting the point of the meeting and freaking out at the prospect of being claimed by Harribel. Well I suppose this answers my question from Part 1 of POV as to whether or not female arrancar can claim other females. With your unique writing style and take on Arrancar relationships I would love to read a bleach femslash written by you.

Now as for my reaction to the fact that there will be Soi in the next chapter:
http://i.imgur.com/YjKk9.gif
and
http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mczls3J7dM1riusceo1_500.gif

-waits patiently for next chapt-
person Hi
schedule March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just a question but it has a long set up. Orihime's powers can't heal what has been surgically sealed together and already allowed to heal right? As with the case of Byakuya's throat. But in the manga she did heal Grimmjow's arm and that had to have been a healed stump and Aizen said it was a time reversal. Time reversal, her "I reject" powers should have healed Byakuya's throat so I assume that's a plot twist for the story. You said she couldn't heal the live infection in Jushiro but could heal the damaged tissue. So my question is what would happen to Jushiro of he had open surgery with Orihime in the room? Like the surgens are there to remove the nodes of tuberculosis and physically have the disease taken from him and Orihime is there to close and heal him up? It would be removing parts of his lungs with no chance yet to heal and seal. So would they come back like normal like Grimmjow's arm did or would you stick with your idea that surgical cuts would just eliminate that part of Jushiro's lungs if Orihime fixed them? I have to think they would heal perfectly fine because a gouge made by a sword is healed by Orihime and little difference to the body between sword and scalpel. Yet I don't know with your story. I know it's kind of a mute point because you haven't mentioned the Shinigami's doing more than Kido and repairing what is already exposed is wound, but if the surgen was Szayel hypothetically what would happen?
Sorry if that was long and a bother but I was just wondering.
schedule March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ok once again, sorry in advance if these are bothering you, but I just have some more questions if you would not mind answering that is.

1. You mentioned in passing that their were those who did not like Hana's position in her squad, but beyond that how do people feel about her closeness with a few of the Arrancar and the kids? Would some of those still holding on to the old way's see her as a traitor? or would they try to turn her opinion of the Arrancar she is friends by telling her the circumstance of the war and what came after.

2. How do the more "humane" Arrancar, like Starrk and Harribel feel about the current regime? Neither are fans of rape and have no interest in unnecessary cruelty. Harribel,much like her predecessor defies many of the basic hollow characteristics. You may have answered this already in part 1 and I may have missed it. And when the day comes that the rebels finally make there move, what side will these to fall too? I highly doubt the captains they have claimed want to stay in there current situations forever despite how gently they are treated in comparison to other claimed individuals and they most definitely would not want to fight there old comrades. And while neither Starrk or Harribel have harmed anyone one needlessly, they still helped usher in Aizen's rule and put the Shinigami population into current lot in life. It would be a bit of a double standard to hate Aizen and not feel any ill feelings towards his Arrancar soldiers. And I don't mean to sound presumptius but outside of Starrk,Harribel, Grimm and grudgingly Ulqy(ince he owned up to what he did and changed) I have a hard time seeing the majority of the Arrancar population surviving this story after all that has happened.

I understand that the answers may come as the story progresses and I should be patient, but I am a big fan of your Stories and am very very curious lol. And sorry if I have asked these questions before.
person Kain
schedule March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed this chapter immensely, but once again you torture me with only a small snippet of my precious Soi, so cruel lol. Doe he even like Vega or is she stuck in a perpetual state of "this shit can not possibly get any worse". Liked Harribel giving the hollow version of 'The talk' to Ajuga as well. And I don't know if this has been asked but are you going to be incorporating some of the new things that have been revealed in the manga, or do you already have a set path you are going to follow?
person Kain
schedule March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed this chapter immensely, but once again you torture me with only a small snippet of my precious Soi, so cruel lol. Does she even like Vega or is she stuck in a perpetual state of "this shit can not possibly get any worse" and is just dealing with it because she has no other choice? Liked Harribel giving the hollow version of 'The talk' to Ajuga as well. And I don't know if this has been asked but are you going to be incorporating some of the new things that have been revealed in the manga, or do you already have a set path you are going to follow?
schedule March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
sorry for the triple post, had to make a few corrections.
person chiharuSAICHI
schedule March 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter from you.. I hope from this chapter onwards, we'll be seeing Harribel a lot.

Skills? I believe we have the same wish. I wish I can sketch too.. Oh! and I wish I know how to write a story too. Q_Q
person Anon
schedule March 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Skill repairing machines.

When I go to get stuff fixed it's obvious that I don't know **** about **** so I can't tell if I'm being taken for a ride.