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Wow it's so hot. Good job! Hope to see more.

Pretty damn good writing and hot, hot smex scene. Love Byakuya losing control, and itch to find out his thoughts in the aftermath. Orihime did ... what only Orihime would do. Her dilemma was funny and her choices made sense to her. Good detail in the food choices for her and her ramblings about it. She should clue in that people interrupt her because she rambles on. There will be more, right?

this was magnificent, keep up the good work