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May 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful job writing Ryuuken and Orihime's interaction here. The idea of Ryuuken having "female companions' makes sense. And you can't help but feel badly for Orihime in this fic. It was sexy and comforting to read at the same time.
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May 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very well done. You had my whole concentration for the entire story. I felt the characters were consistent with canon but quite likeable. The build up to their breaking loose was believable. I'm glad I made this little pit stop to read your story.