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Thanks for updating! I was eagerly awaiting this and you didn't disappoint, I just love how you write these two and even Urahara he's a difficult one to write at best but I think you did it very well. Love you way you are including the new chapters into this as well, very well done. Can't wait for the next update.

Seriously, this is so my favourite fic right now! It's been ages since I've found something this good and this is my absolute favourite pairing especially the way you are writing it. Makes me want to write for this pairing too and I haven't written for Bleach in a long time. Thanks so much for sharing this, I really, really cannot wait to read more and find my own inspiration.

this is the first ichigoXUquorria pairing story that I've read and I can say I'm enjoying it. the character personalities are well written. cant wait to see what happens between them

So far, an excellent story beginning. I don't see much need for a beta, if you don't have one, as things are well written and have proper grammar. However if you still need one I would be willing provided you plan to keep writing on this at a decent pace. I clicked onto it because Ulquiorra is one of my top three favorites in bleach, and not many people are willing to take his personality on as a challenge.

Btw, I think your doing marvelously on that. The second half of chapter two where he behaved more like himself was very well done. I merely hope you explain the zanpakto and wardrobe change a little in the future chapters.

All considered, the chapters are slightly short for what most consider good length, but that is the only complaint I could find anywhere. Love it and hope to see more up soon!
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