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Really enjoyed this - read all through from start to finish. I do hate Mayuri as a character, so the fact you got me smiling at something he said (chapter 11, when he questions the boys after they've come out) is impressive.

Minor gripe - rouge = red; rogue = rebel. I'm sure you meant the latter, rather than describing some of the shinigami as red!

However, awesome, and sweet! SP

(16) I've only just now seen the couple of updates since the last time I commented and I'm sorry it took so long to read and leave a comment, especially considering I really like the way the story is moving along :)

As for this most recent chapter all I keep thinking is that Mayuri is certainly creepy but he's also deadly, you'd have to be an idiot to get on the wrong side of him. Can't wait to see what he's dreamed up for Saburou and how the rest of the confrontation plays out.

Looking forward to the next chapter, I can't wait to see what happens :)

Hello, I have just read whole story at once. Great job!!! I really enjoy how you can combine romantic scenes and action. The plot is very interesting, I cant wait to see more.

Yea, I haven't been on here in a while so I was able to read a few chapters. They were amazing! I love where you are taking this story, I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the awesome work!

(14) Happy to see two updates in a row and such action packed ones at that^^ It's a frightening prospect that someone as powerful as Ryuken can be manipulated into attacking his own son, this is a rather impressive adversary. Again the action was well done and the story is certainly an interesting one, I can't wait for more :)

Ahhh! I love this! Just picked it up today around 4 and already done. Can't wait to see where this is going! You're such a tease. Haha. Thanks for a great read, though!

Really enjoying Ichigo/Uryu. A great couple and like that they are going slow and finally starting to feel comfortable enough to go further.

(10) Oh my god the ending, I loved the ending^^

Poor Uryuu, he's smart and does everything right and yet he still ends up getting the worst of it. Though I do look forward to seeing if Mayuri has anything of actual use to add to everything, it's quite the little mystery they've got.

Another great chapter and the action scene was so well done, I can't wait to see what's next :)

(9) It's been so long since we've seen these guys, I was happy to see an update but that ending is torture, hopefully nothing too terrible happens to Ichigo. At least we know Uryu is capable of helping him, I look forward to finding out what happened in the next chapter and how everyone deals with the aftermath. Also I loved the Ryuuken, Isshin bit, those two are always good for a bit of side story - looking forward to next time :)

(7) I have to admit I'm with Ichigo in that I wonder if Mayuri is as innocent as everyone assumes but then he just invites doubt with the way he acts. But it was nice to see some Yoruichi-Kisuke interaction, they're always a fun pair and Chad was awfully sweet and understanding, Orihime couldn't do much better :) I'm looking forward to the update, a cliffhanger about sex and chocolate is just mean ;)