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no fair it stops just when it gets to the good part. absolutely love it

I wish I had something constructive to say. I just wanted to let you know that I love this and how much you're teasing everything out. Like a long classic rock song that takes time to get to the good part.

that was so cool. cant wait for more

(5) Poor Orihime, I do feel badly for her. As for both the relationship between Ichigo and Ishida and the mystery of what's going on I really do like the progression of them both. I like how much thought you've put into everything, I'm looking forward to more :)

I don't read IchixIshi very often, but since I enjoy your writing style I decided to give it a try.

I'm finding it to be a really enjoyable story so far. Don't know what others are saying since I don't usually read other reviews, but I'm personally happy you didn't have them jumping into the sack together at this point in the story. I like reading an author's version of a 'developing' relationship.

My biggest hope right now is just that you update much more frequently than your other story. ~_^

(4) It'll be interesting to see just how this relationship progresses since before now Uryu hadn't even considered it. I wonder if Ichigo will be able to control himself, although Uryu is more than capable of holding his own as was very evident this chapter so he can't get too out of line ;)

Also loved the action it was well written and I had no difficulty following what was happening. I'm looking forward to seeing more of the investigation into what's going on and of course seeing how these guys work together :)

You're such a fast updater, I love that ^_^ It makes it easy to look forward to the next chapter^^

I loved this chapter; the way you wrote the fighting scenes it made me feel like I was there watching it very believable.. it wouldn't surprise me if Mayuri ended up evil he's already half insane anyway. the story is just getting interesting cant wait to see how things progress. keep it up thanks

it was a nice chapter and (don't mean to sound rude or offensive) but it felt like you were sort of rushing the story at bit. I mean orihime finding out and the next day she's trying to set ichigo up I would think she would be hurting more. and then the kiss between ichigo and ishida at the end too fast. also ishida personality needs some work. hes not the type to take things lying down he wont admit his feelings easily, and he's very proud of been a quincy.

cant wait for your next chapter and too see what the mystery is with the hollows. keep it up

(2) I'm so happy to have found this, these guys are one of my favourite pairings and it's been awhile since I've seen a new story about them :) Also the story itself seems to be the start of a rather intriguing mystery with what's going on, I'm looking forward to seeing how it plays out ^_^

Can't wait for more^^

thanx for another brilliant chapter. sounds like there is something going on cant wait to read more.