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Some better use of commas would be ideal. For example, a sentence should sound teally normal without the text in between yhe comma, like this. "Jimmy, although he was very tired, continued his trek into the night." In this example, you can take out, "although he was very tired," part, and the sentence would make still make perfect sense. I hope I helped. Maybe you can review my stories too. For nobody has reviewed it, and I know it isn't perfect,and it's really bugging me. Thanks for the read. Next is resolution.