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for Prize of Victory 1.5

by NovaAlexandria

person snowecat
schedule June 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. Poor Ichigo is just beating himself in recrimination. How long was it before he found out his sisters were alive?
person Scorpinac
schedule June 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Very nice addition, though I did note one glaring error - when Kenpachi and Yachiru are mentioned wearing gigais, you have Yachiru in Yumichika's, but earlier in the chapter you have Yoruichi saying Yachiru was going to wear Hitsugaya's gigai. Might want to fix that.
person bright
schedule May 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Really looking forward to your next project!
person snowecat
schedule May 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This was a lovely chapter. It gives a bit of insight to Starrk and how the relationship developed between him and Nanao. Love your work.
person Alexis
schedule March 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. Please continue writing
person gollumsfriend
schedule February 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for this latest chapter. I think the events and situations surrounding Nanao's pregnancy and Hana's eventual birth are what I'm most looking forward to reading during these prelude chapters of yours....even more than Grimmjow and the girls, so that's saying a lot! Keep up the great work and thanks again!
person snowecat
schedule February 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Scary. You painted such a twisted version of Aizen, one wonders where his inspiration came from.
person Jason
schedule January 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Glad you're doing some writing again! One thing I think would be really interesting is to build a chapter off an off-hand comment grimjow made in your story right around the death of aizen. When he saw Yuzu kill the tyrant he said, probably jokingly, that he should have claimed both sisters. A what if chapter could branch off your story after Karin is safe to walk around outside again and wants that for her sister/sister wants it also. Could have a very awkward discussion with Grimjow for fun. Just my little suggestion.
person Lilibet
schedule December 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I have enjoyed reading POV 1.5 and I hope to see more in the future.Thanks.
person Anon
schedule December 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
How is Jushiro a 2000+ year old virgin? With Kyoraku as a friend?! How is his mother alive?