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Immortal Coil

By: Rockyshores
folder Bleach › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 10
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Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach or make any money off of this story.
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Chapter 10- End

Review Replies- ShadowofLight:Especially if being stubborn means great sex XD
Yakumo: hehe, well here it is!
usmorgan: there are so many jealous semes abound, Ichigo should get jealous sometimes too =D
MasterAkira: Finally, we've learned the master plan! Now they get to boink.
Tiramisu: My my, what a nice happy dance!
VioletEyes: Well, eh, Renji is a bit dense...
kai: Kensei is smokin' hot, this story almost wrote itself into a KenseixIchigo, but I stopped it in time!
Orant Mihi: Thank you~! I did check out your works on deviant art and I loved them =D

Details on fan art for this story are at the bottom, as well as the alternate StarrkxIchigo version.

Beta’d by Warrior Nun, whom I like to refer to as a beta ninja.

Immortal Coil: Chapter 10

Renji and Ichigo tumbled into the bedroom, kissing passionately as they yanked each other’s clothes off. Renji grew impatient with trying to remove the shirt Aizen made Ichigo wear and tore though it. Ichigo moaned and threaded his fingers through Renji’s hair as Renji caressed his bare skin.

Ichigo arched his back and gasped as Renji’s mouth found his neck and his tongue dipped into the hollow of his throat.

“Renji!”

Ichigo clawed at Renji’s clothes and dipped his hands underneath Renji’s shirt to slide his hand over hard muscles. Renji growled at the action and grabbed the edge of Ichigo’s shorts and pulled them off of him before tossing them aside. “No fondoshi?” Renji questioned as he drunk in the sight of Ichigo’s nude form.

“I couldn’t wear it with the shorts.” Ichigo muttered and shoved Renji back onto the bed before falling to his knees and undoing Renji’s pants. Renji stared down at Ichigo and inhaled sharply as his erection was freed. Renji thought it was cute how Ichigo still had that serious scowl on his face even when he bent down to- ohhh…

Renji groaned and reached for Ichigo’s head as Ichigo took Renji’s erection in to his mouth and hesitantly sucked and licked at it. Ichigo brow furrowed even more as Renji bucked his hips and he glanced up to glare at the man who didn’t even have the grace to look sheepish.

In retribution Ichigo pulled away entirely and shoved Renji flat on his back and straddled his waist. Renji hissed as their erections rubbed against each other and Ichigo leaned down to kiss him. Renji wrapped his arms around Ichigo’s slender waist and flipped them so Ichigo was the one on the bottom and Renji was in between his legs.

“Renji, I want you.” Ichigo whispered lustfully and ground his hips up into Renji.

Renji hissed and gave Ichigo a quick peck on the lips before pulling away to shed the rest of his clothing. “Do you want to do this with spit or lotion?”

Ichigo looked a little miffed at the blunt question, but turned over on his stomach to grab the lotion from underneath his pillow that he had been using for…moisturizing. Renji drunk in the sight of his ass and molded his body against Ichigo’s back before Ichigo had the chance to turn around again.

“I’ve been dreaming about fucking this ass of yours.” Renji growled and snatched the lotion away from Ichigo to hastily pour some on his fingers. “You’re a virgin, aren’t you Ichigo?”

“Don’t ask stupid questions you already know the answer to.” Ichigo snapped in embarrassment.

Renji’s smug look grew as he trailed his fingers down Ichigo’s crack and brushed against his entrance. “So do you want it quick?” He thrust two fingers into Ichigo and Ichigo yelped, arching his back with a slightly shocked look on his face. He soothed the hurt by slowly stroking his prostate and grinned when Ichigo moaned and relaxed.

“Or slow?”

“I-I want it…”

“You want what Ichigo?” Renji whispered and licked the edge of his ear. He introduced his third finger and Ichigo clutched at the sheets with a pained gasp before relaxing again.

“I just want it, damn it!!!” Ichigo yelled.

Renji chuckled and slid his fingers out before pouring more of the lotion onto his hands and stroking his erection. He hissed at the slightly cold fluid, but he ignored it in favor of leaning down and bracing his hand by Ichigo’s side. With the other hand he rubbed the head of his dick against Ichigo’s tight hole and smirked when Ichigo squirmed.

“Are you sure you’re ready?”

“Just fuck me damn it!!!” Ichigo demanded and then let out a harsh cry as Renji thrust his hips forward. “Renji!” He choked out and twisted the sheets in his hands as he squirmed to try and get comfortable. “Agh, that fucking hurts…” He hissed in complaint and pressed his hips against the mattress.

“If you weren’t such a fucking tight ass this wouldn’t be a problem.” Renji said shakily and tried not to thrust hard into Ichigo’s tight heat.

“F-fu…” Ichigo clenched his eyes shut and inhaled sharply as Renji snapped his hips forward and penetrated him to the hilt. “Fuck!”

“You’re so beautiful Ichigo.” Renji whispered and kissed Ichigo’s shoulders.

“Me being beautiful isn’t the issue here.” Ichigo said crankily and continued to move around to ease his discomfort.

Renji clamped his hands on Ichigo’s hips and his breath quickened at the sensation. “If you want me to be nice I suggest that you don’t move.”

“Don’t you dare!” Ichigo said in warning and then let out a gasp as his wiggling made Renji press against his prostate.

“You were saying?” Renji asked smugly and pulled out almost completely before thrusting back on, making their skin slap together loudly.

“I was saying you’re a fucking dick who needs to shut up and fuck me!” Ichigo panted as he forced the words out and let out a loud cry as Renji repeated the rough motion. “Yes, there!”

“Ichigo, you minx.” Renji said against Ichigo’s shoulder and pressed their heated bodies close together as he rocked his hips. “You are way to coherent right now.”

“You’re too…too…” Ichigo tried to think of the best adjective to describe Renji, but it was hard when Renji was fucking him so harshly while his hand snuck around to stroke Ichigo’s erection.

“Good?”

“No!” Ichigo said in denial and moaned when Renji pulled out of him entirely and thrust back in quick and hard.

“Admit it.”

“No way…” Ichigo pushed his hips back to meet Renji’s thrusts and bit his lower lip as Renji grew more and more forceful with his thrusts.

“Admit it!”

“Fine! Yes! You’re fucking great! Are you happy you smug bastard!?” Ichigo cried, almost in tears as his hands clawed at the bedding and he tried to reach his release which he was so close to.

“Fuck yeah.” Renji breathed and flipped Ichigo onto his side, throwing Ichigo’s leg over his shoulder and penetrating him again and again. He watched in awe as Ichigo’s face twisted in pleasure and his whole body grew taunt.

“Renji!!!” Ichigo screamed, bowing his back and jerking as his groin tightened and he came, spurting over Renji’s hand and the sheets.

“Fuck, Ichigo…” Renji threw his head back and growled as Ichigo convulsed around him. He only managed a few more thrusts into Ichigo’s over-sensitive body before he screamed Ichigo’s name and came into his trembling body.

He collapsed over him, nuzzling the orange hair and gently letting his leg down. He shifted so he was behind Ichigo, but stayed inside of him and enjoyed his body heat.

“I love you Ichigo.” Renji whispered softly into his hair and Ichigo stirred to elbow him in the stomach.

“I kind of figured, since you screamed my name like that.” Ichigo said in exhausted amusement and smirked when Renji growled and nipped his neck.

“Then you must be in love with me too.” Renji said smugly and shifted his hips so he moved inside of Ichigo to prove his point. Ichigo inhaled sharply and moved his hips away from the sensation but was unable to because of the grip on his hips.

“Up for another round?” Renji asked as he rocked his hips, his renewed erection sliding in and out of Ichigo easily due to the amount of lotion and cum inside of Ichigo.

“Ah…” Ichigo shivered and clutched the hands on his hips as Renji began to move again. Renji entwined their fingers together and slowly moved his hips, much more gently then he had before in care of Ichigo’s tender entrance.

“Renji.” Ichigo murmured and tilted his head back to kiss Renji. It was slightly awkward because of the angle, but it was passionate and only fueled their passion for each other.

“I love you.” Renji said as they parted, looking into Ichigo’s brown eyes without hesitation as he moved a little faster.

“I love you too.” Ichigo said with a light blush, but he didn’t break their gaze. Renji stroked his erection and moved a little faster, concentrating on Ichigo’s prostate. Ichigo bit his lip and his eyes shuddered shut as he was overcome with pleasure.

Renji whispered sweet nothings in his ear and gently coaxed Ichigo into climaxing again before following himself. Ichigo fell asleep almost immediately and only stirred slightly when Renji slipped out of him. Renji stared down at him for a few minutes and kissed his temple before getting up to get something to wipe both of them down with.

Ichigo frowned in his sleep as Renji wiped his sensitive groin and entrance, but Renji thought he would prefer not waking up with dry cum all over him. He wiped himself off too and tossed the shirt he used aside before slipping back into bed and spooning Ichigo from behind.

They both slept peacefully, relaxed and comfortable in each other’s embrace.



Isshin and his sisters eagerly welcomed Ichigo’s new boyfriend into their lives despite Ichigo’s reservations. Renji received a very embarrassing ‘talk’ from Isshin which involved Isshin revealing his shinigami captain’s form, and then talking to his wife’s very large poster.

Karin and Yuzu loved the addition although Karin punched him pretty hard at first for taking her brother away from them for such a long period of time.

Rukia got over her crush of Renji and Orihime and did find love in a rather unexpected source in the form of Matsumoto. Byakuya Kuchiki wasn’t altogether approving of the couple, but he had yet to forbid their union. Rukia probably wouldn’t have listened to him anyways.

Orihime and Ulquiorra only came into the real world once to reassure her friends that she was still fine and healthy. Tatsuki was the hardest to convince, but she didn’t have any choice to accept their relationship and wish Orihime her best.

The shinigami had yet to send anyone to destroy the vizards, for which Ichigo was very grateful. He didn’t want to have to leave his family and he knew that he would have to if it came down to it.

Hiyori insisted that Renji and Ichigo sound proofing their walls so she didn’t have to hear Renji screwing Ichigo into the nearest surface at night. Also in the mornings. Afternoons. Whenever they felt like it really. Lisa was a little disappointed, but she got over it with the next batch of yaoi manga she bought from Urahara.

Renji was in heaven, Ichigo could barely walk, and they slept. For “That flesh is heir to, 'tis a consummation devoutly to be wish'd. To die, to sleep;
To sleep: perchance to dream: […]
For in that sleep of death what dreams may come
When we have shuffled off this mortal coil,
Must give us pause: there's the respect
That makes calamity of so long life.”

The immortals slept, and dreamed, and woke again to enjoy their long lives with each other.

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Yes, this is the end of this story. I hope that everyone enjoyed it. I actually drew some art for this story, it’s just Renji with his vizards mask in the background. Here is this link, and just delete the spaces (only two of them), tell me if it doesn’t show. http:// rockyshores.deviantart. com/art/Vizard-Renji-Immortal-Coil-141352831

I have uploaded the alternate version of Immortal Coil, which is called Everlasting Spiral. I hope those he wanted to read that will enjoy it!

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