Immortal Coil
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Bleach › Yaoi - Male/Male
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Adult ++
Chapters:
10
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Reviews:
68
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Chapter 2
Review Replies- Soturo Ayami: That’s fine, I love reviews whether they are constructive or otherwise =D
ShadowStryke: I do think there is a darkness to Renji that is never really addressed… despite the flashbacks and fight scenes, he still has a lot more character development that could be done.
Mizubenten: Yo! Thanks =)
Usmorgan: Thank you!
MasterAkira: Finally Renji will be Ichigo’s man, and not just a secondary character that is a threat to Ichigo’s seme!
Shadowkittae: Actually I am secretly a brain sucking alien that steals everyone’s thoughts and ideas >=3 Or we just think alike.
Tiramisu: I don’t have a universal update list, but I will add you for the Crush collection since you’re already on the Cherry Lips update list.
Kai: I only make so many one sided RenIchi stuff because I love him so much! Honest.
ChappyTheRabbit: The twistedness reflects the madness within 8D
Yakumo: I like KenseixIchigo… they are both so hot.
Xgangsofasiax: This is the one I was telling you about, I’m glad you like it.
VioletEyes: Thank you! You are now added, I hope you got the email.
Beta’d by WarriorNun- thank you!
Immortal Coil: Chapter 2
Ichigo woke slowly and with a headache. He groaned and sat up, frowning as he didn’t recognize his surroundings. He stood on shaky legs and glanced down to see his was still in his pants but his shirt was missing. He yawned and rubbed his eyes before padding over to the door and sliding it open.
Immediately something small and fast hit him in the stomach, making him grunt and fly back to hit the wall. The small and fast thing turned out to be a girl with blond hair in pig tails and a single fang jutting out over her lip.
“It’s about time you woke up, berry-head!”
“Don’t call me that.” Ichigo gasped out as he tried to regain his breath. “And who are you, snaggle tooth!?”
“I’m-”
“Hiyori, you bitch!!!”
Shinji tackled her from the doorway, sending the girl flying across the room.
“I told you not to be so rough with him at first!”
“Fuck off; if he’s so weak then we don’t have a use for him anyway!”
As they argued Renji slipped inside the room and eyed Ichigo who was rubbing his head and scowling at the two. His eyes moved over his bare chest and then snapped to his face with a smirk. “Get dressed and come meet the others.” He tossed Ichigo a shirt and turned to leave without waiting for Ichigo.
Ichigo grabbed his sword and yanked the shirt on as he followed Renji, realizing that he was still in his spirit form. He mentally cried at the knowledge that Kon was going to be in his body again, doing who knows what sort of things. Actually, Ichigo did have an idea what Kon was doing but he was trying not to think about it.
Ichigo followed Renji to a room that looked very similar to the one in Urahara’s basement and glanced around to see several figures lounged about. “This is Hachi, Love, Kensei, Lisa, Rose and Mashiro.” Renji said, gesturing vaguely to them. “They’re all vizards like us.”
“I’m not a vizard.” Ichigo growled.
“Yes you are.”
“Not this again.” Shinji walked up behind them and sighed dramatically. “You’re a shinigami who has hollow powers. That makes you a vizard, Ichigo.”
Ichigo scowled at him. “I’m a shinigami.”
“You know if you don’t get the proper training, your hollow will eventually consume you and take over your body, then kill your friends and family. Do you want that?”
Ichigo shook his head and Shinji grinned. “Then let us train you.”
“Tch, fine.” Ichigo looked away from them and crossed his arm over his chest.
“Then call out your hollow.”
“Er, what?”
Hiyori narrowed her eyes at Ichigo and snorted. “If you can’t even do that, then we really are wasting our time.”
“I’m not going to call out that monster!”
“Then I’ll just have to make you.”
Ichigo narrowed his eyes as Hiyori materialized her mask and pulled it over her head.
“You better call your hollow out or I’m going to fucking kill you.”
“Like fuck I am!”
Ichigo grabbed his sword and pointed it at the girl. “I don’t care what the fuck you guys are, but I’m not going to let him out.”
“Heh, suit yourself.” Hiyori lunged forward and Ichigo narrowly dodged and brought his sword up to parry her blow.
“Bitch!”
“Orangey!”
“Snaggle tooth!”
“Fag!”
“Whore!”
“Maybe we should break this up.” Hachi said timidly.
“Shut your trap and throw some barriers up, Hachi!” Hiyori yelled. Hachi sweat dropped and did so, cringing as Ichigo was flung through a wall. “I told you to put them up!”
“I tried to…”
“Whatever.” She snorted and then her gold and black eyes widened as Ichigo lunged forward through the hole, laughing maniacally as his hollow took over. His mask didn’t even cover his entire face as he grabbed Hiyori’s throat in a crushing grip and slammed her against the wall. The hollow didn’t have a chance do to more damage though before all of the vizards were on top of Ichigo and tearing off his mask.
“Tch, you really can’t control it at all, can you?” Renji drawled in a bored voice and patted Ichigo’s orange hair. “We can teach you how though.”
Ichigo swallowed and the others got off of him while Renji tugged him to his feet.
“Join us, Ichigo.”
“I can’t…I’m a Shinigami…”
“You aren’t. What loyalty do you owe them? They tried to kill you and your friend.” Shinji said with a frown and glanced at Renji who looked away at the mention of Rukia.
“And I’m just supposed to give my loyalty to you?” Ichigo asked incredulously.
Renji glared at Ichigo and grabbed his shirt, lifting him off his feet so their faces were inches apart. “Listen, punk, we’re giving you a great opportunity here. If Soul Society found out what you are, they will kill you, your family, and all of your friends. Just to make sure you haven’t infected them with the hollow.”
Ichigo recoiled from Renji and tried to pry his hands off of him but Renji only held him tighter. “That bastard Aizen Sousuke forcibly turned all of us into vizards and they-” he gestured at the others “-were sentenced to death for something they couldn’t even control. If I hadn’t escaped, when I did, I would have had the same fate. So stop your useless whining and decide. Do you want to be Soul Society’s bitch and risk being killed by them or taken over by your hollow, or will you join us and keep your life, as well as your family’s life, safe.”
Ichigo stared at Renji who had unknowingly let black and gold creep into his eyes and his voice develop a sharper edge.
He nodded.
Renji let him go and Ichigo slumped to the ground and stared at Renji who stomped off. Shinji sighed and rubbed the back of his neck. “That kid…”
“Renji’s as much of a punk as the kid.” Kensei muttered to himself and grabbed Ichigo and hauled him up once again.
Ichigo cursed as his feet dangled for a second before Kensei set him onto his feet. “You’re kind of light, pansy, don’t you have any muscle?”
Ichigo scowled and brought his elbow back and whacked Kensei in the chest, making him take a step back. “Piss off! Not all of us can be muscle heads like you.”
“What the fuck did you call me!?”
Shinji stared in exasperation as Hiyori joined the fray and started hitting Kensei and Ichigo with her sandal alternatively. What a crazy bitch. He didn’t know why he put up with her…He grunted as she kicked him in the stomach.
“What the hell!?”
“You’re talking out loud, you bastard!”
…
Aizen tapped his fingers on the armrest of his throne as he went over all the different paths the final battle could take. He had already sent Ulquiorra and Yammy to kill Ichigo Kurosaki in the human world, but he had strangely disappeared. Aizen remembered the fluctuating power he had felt when he was in Seireitei and he knew that the boy was a vizard. The others that escaped must have Ichigo and were hiding Ichigo from him.
But this posed a new problem. If the vizards were interested in Ichigo, which meant that they were possibly interested in the war. Aizen had already started his plans for retrieving Orihime Inoue to block the full Gotei 13 from interfering in Karakura town, but if the vizards came, it would pose an even larger problem. So now he had to consider how to separate the vizards as well, and he already had an idea on how to do it.
…
Ichigo’s friends in the human world and in Soul Society were frantic. Ichigo disappearing so close to an outbreak of war and when arrancars were showing up set everyone on edge. Nobody knew what happened to him. There was some speculation that he had been killed, but Urahara said that his reiatsu hadn’t vanished, it had disappeared. Whatever that meant.
Orihime was on edge and nervous, fearing for Ichigo’s life but not knowing what to do. Rukia, who had come to investigate his disappearance, was just as worried. She tried to find words to calm the other girl down but Orihime was too bent on the dramatics without considering that Ichigo would be fine without her.
It hurt Rukia a little to know that her crush so blatantly liked another, but she could bear with it. After all she had lived through her first crush, Renji, disappearing completely from Soul Society, so she could handle watching Orihime crush over Ichigo.
There was also the troubling description that the humans gave Rukia about the transfer student that showed up just when Ichigo disappeared, and hadn’t been seen or heard from again. Red hair, tattoos and a pissy attitude. It sounded like a friend she had thought was long gone, but now she wasn’t so sure. Wherever Ichigo was, Rukia knew that if Renji was there with him things couldn’t be too bad.
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Yes, Rukia has a little crush on Orihime. I think it’s the boobs.
If there is anybody who would like to be on the email notification list for this story, please leave your email in a review because AFF sometimes hides them. Thank you, and please review!
ShadowStryke: I do think there is a darkness to Renji that is never really addressed… despite the flashbacks and fight scenes, he still has a lot more character development that could be done.
Mizubenten: Yo! Thanks =)
Usmorgan: Thank you!
MasterAkira: Finally Renji will be Ichigo’s man, and not just a secondary character that is a threat to Ichigo’s seme!
Shadowkittae: Actually I am secretly a brain sucking alien that steals everyone’s thoughts and ideas >=3 Or we just think alike.
Tiramisu: I don’t have a universal update list, but I will add you for the Crush collection since you’re already on the Cherry Lips update list.
Kai: I only make so many one sided RenIchi stuff because I love him so much! Honest.
ChappyTheRabbit: The twistedness reflects the madness within 8D
Yakumo: I like KenseixIchigo… they are both so hot.
Xgangsofasiax: This is the one I was telling you about, I’m glad you like it.
VioletEyes: Thank you! You are now added, I hope you got the email.
Beta’d by WarriorNun- thank you!
Immortal Coil: Chapter 2
Ichigo woke slowly and with a headache. He groaned and sat up, frowning as he didn’t recognize his surroundings. He stood on shaky legs and glanced down to see his was still in his pants but his shirt was missing. He yawned and rubbed his eyes before padding over to the door and sliding it open.
Immediately something small and fast hit him in the stomach, making him grunt and fly back to hit the wall. The small and fast thing turned out to be a girl with blond hair in pig tails and a single fang jutting out over her lip.
“It’s about time you woke up, berry-head!”
“Don’t call me that.” Ichigo gasped out as he tried to regain his breath. “And who are you, snaggle tooth!?”
“I’m-”
“Hiyori, you bitch!!!”
Shinji tackled her from the doorway, sending the girl flying across the room.
“I told you not to be so rough with him at first!”
“Fuck off; if he’s so weak then we don’t have a use for him anyway!”
As they argued Renji slipped inside the room and eyed Ichigo who was rubbing his head and scowling at the two. His eyes moved over his bare chest and then snapped to his face with a smirk. “Get dressed and come meet the others.” He tossed Ichigo a shirt and turned to leave without waiting for Ichigo.
Ichigo grabbed his sword and yanked the shirt on as he followed Renji, realizing that he was still in his spirit form. He mentally cried at the knowledge that Kon was going to be in his body again, doing who knows what sort of things. Actually, Ichigo did have an idea what Kon was doing but he was trying not to think about it.
Ichigo followed Renji to a room that looked very similar to the one in Urahara’s basement and glanced around to see several figures lounged about. “This is Hachi, Love, Kensei, Lisa, Rose and Mashiro.” Renji said, gesturing vaguely to them. “They’re all vizards like us.”
“I’m not a vizard.” Ichigo growled.
“Yes you are.”
“Not this again.” Shinji walked up behind them and sighed dramatically. “You’re a shinigami who has hollow powers. That makes you a vizard, Ichigo.”
Ichigo scowled at him. “I’m a shinigami.”
“You know if you don’t get the proper training, your hollow will eventually consume you and take over your body, then kill your friends and family. Do you want that?”
Ichigo shook his head and Shinji grinned. “Then let us train you.”
“Tch, fine.” Ichigo looked away from them and crossed his arm over his chest.
“Then call out your hollow.”
“Er, what?”
Hiyori narrowed her eyes at Ichigo and snorted. “If you can’t even do that, then we really are wasting our time.”
“I’m not going to call out that monster!”
“Then I’ll just have to make you.”
Ichigo narrowed his eyes as Hiyori materialized her mask and pulled it over her head.
“You better call your hollow out or I’m going to fucking kill you.”
“Like fuck I am!”
Ichigo grabbed his sword and pointed it at the girl. “I don’t care what the fuck you guys are, but I’m not going to let him out.”
“Heh, suit yourself.” Hiyori lunged forward and Ichigo narrowly dodged and brought his sword up to parry her blow.
“Bitch!”
“Orangey!”
“Snaggle tooth!”
“Fag!”
“Whore!”
“Maybe we should break this up.” Hachi said timidly.
“Shut your trap and throw some barriers up, Hachi!” Hiyori yelled. Hachi sweat dropped and did so, cringing as Ichigo was flung through a wall. “I told you to put them up!”
“I tried to…”
“Whatever.” She snorted and then her gold and black eyes widened as Ichigo lunged forward through the hole, laughing maniacally as his hollow took over. His mask didn’t even cover his entire face as he grabbed Hiyori’s throat in a crushing grip and slammed her against the wall. The hollow didn’t have a chance do to more damage though before all of the vizards were on top of Ichigo and tearing off his mask.
“Tch, you really can’t control it at all, can you?” Renji drawled in a bored voice and patted Ichigo’s orange hair. “We can teach you how though.”
Ichigo swallowed and the others got off of him while Renji tugged him to his feet.
“Join us, Ichigo.”
“I can’t…I’m a Shinigami…”
“You aren’t. What loyalty do you owe them? They tried to kill you and your friend.” Shinji said with a frown and glanced at Renji who looked away at the mention of Rukia.
“And I’m just supposed to give my loyalty to you?” Ichigo asked incredulously.
Renji glared at Ichigo and grabbed his shirt, lifting him off his feet so their faces were inches apart. “Listen, punk, we’re giving you a great opportunity here. If Soul Society found out what you are, they will kill you, your family, and all of your friends. Just to make sure you haven’t infected them with the hollow.”
Ichigo recoiled from Renji and tried to pry his hands off of him but Renji only held him tighter. “That bastard Aizen Sousuke forcibly turned all of us into vizards and they-” he gestured at the others “-were sentenced to death for something they couldn’t even control. If I hadn’t escaped, when I did, I would have had the same fate. So stop your useless whining and decide. Do you want to be Soul Society’s bitch and risk being killed by them or taken over by your hollow, or will you join us and keep your life, as well as your family’s life, safe.”
Ichigo stared at Renji who had unknowingly let black and gold creep into his eyes and his voice develop a sharper edge.
He nodded.
Renji let him go and Ichigo slumped to the ground and stared at Renji who stomped off. Shinji sighed and rubbed the back of his neck. “That kid…”
“Renji’s as much of a punk as the kid.” Kensei muttered to himself and grabbed Ichigo and hauled him up once again.
Ichigo cursed as his feet dangled for a second before Kensei set him onto his feet. “You’re kind of light, pansy, don’t you have any muscle?”
Ichigo scowled and brought his elbow back and whacked Kensei in the chest, making him take a step back. “Piss off! Not all of us can be muscle heads like you.”
“What the fuck did you call me!?”
Shinji stared in exasperation as Hiyori joined the fray and started hitting Kensei and Ichigo with her sandal alternatively. What a crazy bitch. He didn’t know why he put up with her…He grunted as she kicked him in the stomach.
“What the hell!?”
“You’re talking out loud, you bastard!”
…
Aizen tapped his fingers on the armrest of his throne as he went over all the different paths the final battle could take. He had already sent Ulquiorra and Yammy to kill Ichigo Kurosaki in the human world, but he had strangely disappeared. Aizen remembered the fluctuating power he had felt when he was in Seireitei and he knew that the boy was a vizard. The others that escaped must have Ichigo and were hiding Ichigo from him.
But this posed a new problem. If the vizards were interested in Ichigo, which meant that they were possibly interested in the war. Aizen had already started his plans for retrieving Orihime Inoue to block the full Gotei 13 from interfering in Karakura town, but if the vizards came, it would pose an even larger problem. So now he had to consider how to separate the vizards as well, and he already had an idea on how to do it.
…
Ichigo’s friends in the human world and in Soul Society were frantic. Ichigo disappearing so close to an outbreak of war and when arrancars were showing up set everyone on edge. Nobody knew what happened to him. There was some speculation that he had been killed, but Urahara said that his reiatsu hadn’t vanished, it had disappeared. Whatever that meant.
Orihime was on edge and nervous, fearing for Ichigo’s life but not knowing what to do. Rukia, who had come to investigate his disappearance, was just as worried. She tried to find words to calm the other girl down but Orihime was too bent on the dramatics without considering that Ichigo would be fine without her.
It hurt Rukia a little to know that her crush so blatantly liked another, but she could bear with it. After all she had lived through her first crush, Renji, disappearing completely from Soul Society, so she could handle watching Orihime crush over Ichigo.
There was also the troubling description that the humans gave Rukia about the transfer student that showed up just when Ichigo disappeared, and hadn’t been seen or heard from again. Red hair, tattoos and a pissy attitude. It sounded like a friend she had thought was long gone, but now she wasn’t so sure. Wherever Ichigo was, Rukia knew that if Renji was there with him things couldn’t be too bad.
LINE
Yes, Rukia has a little crush on Orihime. I think it’s the boobs.
If there is anybody who would like to be on the email notification list for this story, please leave your email in a review because AFF sometimes hides them. Thank you, and please review!