stalker lover
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Bleach › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
5
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22
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Currently Reading:
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Category:
Bleach › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
5
Views:
6,556
Reviews:
22
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
1
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first close contact
Kit451 (Email Hidden) 2007-01-08 id # 3000012473
really good story but needs some tweaking. even if english isnt your first language your really good at it. But capitalization and spacing need a little work. If you would let me I'd like to be your beta. Im not saying you're a bad writer, I'd just would like to help. Please e-mail me if you take my offer! Please update ASAP! Night time to go to sleep Kit451
-Thank you for your offer, and maybe this is an stupid question, but what is a beta exactly?-
KillerKim 2007-01-08 id # 3000012478
Hey :D
Chappie 3 is really funny hahaha :P I love it (one again XD)
And I knew Klaha wasn't a perv haha :P :P
Can't wait for the next :D
I'm almost done with the second chapter of my FMA story ;) (But I have to do Steno first :S:S -.-')
~xXx~ K.K.
-Thanks master 0.~ I am glad my work is still op to your standards, and I hope that you will be happy with this chapter (evil Steno)-
Yaoi is in the air (Email Hidden) 2007-01-08 id # 3000012479
I Adored this chapter, sneaky cheeky Ichi-chan! XP
And you know what I found out? Ik ben ook Nederlands! Woehoe! What a small world it is! Waar ik je wel ff op wil wijzen is dat je whell, zonder -h- schrijft en mutch, zonder -t-. Verder is ut allemaal wel goed!
Ik vin ut zo melig; ik heb ook vaak zo'n stalkerverhaaltje in mun hoofd gehad, maar nooit geschreven. En dan doet un mede-(perverse)-Nederlandertje ut ook!
Ik heb ook wel un verhaaltje maar die staat op de normale fanfiction, Ok ok, hij's wel rated M vanwege de yaoi ^^U
Maar ik hoop dat je weer snel update of ik zal aan mijn leverrr gaan knabbelen en stuur de restanten naar jou op, be afraiiiiid, be very afraid.
-Weet je hoe vet da is da jij ook Nl bent! vind ik egt leuk XD idd zeker small world, jij bent al mijn 2de nederlandse fan, naast natuurlijk KillerKim.
Dit is eigelijk de eerste keer dat ik egt aan een stalkerverhaal dacht, en maybe kan je me ook een beetje uithelpen met het verhaal. als het je wa lijkt voeg me dn gewoon toe op je msn, als het goed is staat mijn adres gewoon op de site.
sorry nog da het wa langer duurde, school is weer begonnen hier,maar heb hem wel langer gemaakt dus please stuur me nie je leverrestanten op 0.o-
ficfan3484 2007-01-08 id # 3000012481
O.O....That pervert Kalha, hehe, he was too slow and Ichigo got his clothes on *groans in disappointment* I like it, update soon please.
-as you wish 0.~, maybe Ichigo will get naked again, who knows-
Chapter 4:first close contact
The clothes fit Ichigo as if they were custom-made for him.
The pants were nicly accenting his long, firm leg and left almost nothing to the imagination. The shirt was an old-fashioned one,like the ones in the middle-ages with laces in the front. This one wasn’t so tight and long enough to hide Ichigo’s manhoud from unwanted looks (he already had enough of them anyway)The shirt was a midnight blue, the pants the deepest black he had ever seen,making Ichigo a look bit paler then usual.
’what?no red?’’Ichigo asked since Klaha still wasn’t over the shock.
This got Klaha’s mind out of the glutter again, since he was already thinking of how he could get Ichigo out of the clothes to see if his haircolor was natural. His face was still a bit red but it was fading fast.
He couched behind his hand ashamed befor answering.
’No not this time.The red in the room is to always remind me of my little strawberry,while black and blue brings your haircolor to their maximum’’
‘’well if you don’t start explaning you will be black and blue’’
really, the boy had no pacience.
‘’Yes, I think some explanation would be in order’’
/geesh, you think?/Ichigo thought,but now he would finaly get the guys story!
‘’Whell, Guess I have to start from the front.About 10 years ago
BEEP!!BEEP!!BEEP!!BEEP!!BEEP!!
‘’aaargh!’’Ichigo fell out of his bed.
/Wait a minut,bed?/ Ichigo looked around him.
He was on the floor,next to a bed....shit this was his own room.
/Damnit,just when I was going to get some info on the bastard/
He was so frustrated,he just..
’ICHIGO MY BOY A NEW DAY HAD STARTED.COME AND LET ME GIVE YOU A WARM HUG LIKE REAL MAN,CHEST TO CHEST!!!”
...suddenly his day became a lot better....
10 minuts later his dad was lying on the floor of his room,with 4 teeth less and with a lot more bruises then when he came in this morning, and Ichigo leaving the room in his uniform and a better mood then before.
/Don’t get me wrong,I’m still pissed.Now I have a guy stalking me and I still don’t know anything about him!/
He wasn’t very hungry anymore en just left the house with only his books.
It was a dark,rainy day,but Ichigo just continued to walk,not even bothering to run,since he was getting wet anyway.
When he passed the allyway he had capcured Kon...ichigo’s eyes suddenly got bigger when he rememberd.
/Shit Kon!!I forgot to ask that weird guy go give him back!/
’Now who are you calling weird?’’ shit,why did the guy always catch him off guard?
Ichigo quicky spun around and saw the person he was just looking for.
In the shadow of the ally stood Klaha, leaning casually against the wall.
This time he was clothed in a darkred jacket just like the others,only thistime it was made from leather,his pants were the same color, also from leather and as tight as Ichigo’s pants in the dream...
Blood filled Ichigo’s cheeks, he couldn’t help it.
’well,someone is happy to see me’’
the man laughed softly. Suddenly rage filled Ichigo, the guy sure had some guts!
’why you teme!’’
Ichigo now ran to the man,his fist raized and aiming for the bleackhaired mans face.
Klaha grabbed the fist flying at him and flew Ichigo in the wall he was leaning onte just a second ago.
Ichigo couldn’t help but to let out a small whimper from the pain, damn that hurt.
When he wanted to fight back Klaha grabbed both of his wrists and forsed them above Ichigo’s head in one hand.This startled the orange boy, and now mather how hard he pulled, he couldn’t get his hands free.
He held the other mans breath in his ear when he whispert:
’I wanted to go slowly on you, letting you get used to me, but you had to go and seduce me.’’
’seduce wha hmmm!’’
Befor he could even finish his sentence Klaha’s lips where forced over his,licking his cherry lips,asking for permission.
Ofcourse Ichigo held his mouth stifly closed.
Suddenly he felt a hand closing gripping between his legs, he opened his mouth trying to protest, but only getting a tongue slipping between his lips. He tried to get free, to run away, but without any succes, he was just to strong.
Ichigo began to get scared.He couldn’t deny that he liked the kiss, hell even loved having the mans tongue in his mouth,but it was just wrong,so wrong. He was to scared to even react to the kiss, just standing there and let the man do his thing.He began to tremble from fear and frustration.
God.Klaha was in heaven.The boy tasted to good, like everything and nothing, and he wanted more of it. He just loved the taste of the boy,the way he was moving against his trying to get free,trembling...
/Wait a minut/
He pulled back from the boys mouth to look at him.
His little strawberry was trembling all over, his eyes tightly shut and his hands were now smal fist. His lips were swollen from the assalt on them. The blackhaired mans eyes filled with concern over his loved one.
He didn’t want this. He wanted Ichigo to love him back, to be his forever.
But it seemed he just wasn’t ready for it.
Again he leaned in to whisper in the trembling boys ear.
’I’m sorry Love, you were just to tasty to let go, I will go now and let you think about this, but first...’’
He couldn’t let Ichigo walk around freely for everyone to take, he had to make sure that everyone knew that the boy was his.
For a last time he leaned in, this time to suck at the boys neck.
Ichigo let out a smal gasp and quickly opened his eyes,while turning his head away from the man, giving him more skin to assault instead of getting away from the lips.
After a few second Klaha let go of the boys neck and looked at the result of his work.
High on Ichigo’s neck was now a big hicky for everyone to see and admire.
He looked the boy in the eye,forcing Ichigo’s eyes to lock with his.
''I will come back for you love''
He pushed Kons capsule in Ichigo's hand.With that Klaha disapeared again, leaving Ichigo shocked and trembeling standing in the allyway
sorry I didn't update sooner,school started again (school's evil)
because of that I made it a extra long chapter.I hope you enjoyed it
please review, even if you don't want to 0.~
really good story but needs some tweaking. even if english isnt your first language your really good at it. But capitalization and spacing need a little work. If you would let me I'd like to be your beta. Im not saying you're a bad writer, I'd just would like to help. Please e-mail me if you take my offer! Please update ASAP! Night time to go to sleep Kit451
-Thank you for your offer, and maybe this is an stupid question, but what is a beta exactly?-
KillerKim 2007-01-08 id # 3000012478
Hey :D
Chappie 3 is really funny hahaha :P I love it (one again XD)
And I knew Klaha wasn't a perv haha :P :P
Can't wait for the next :D
I'm almost done with the second chapter of my FMA story ;) (But I have to do Steno first :S:S -.-')
~xXx~ K.K.
-Thanks master 0.~ I am glad my work is still op to your standards, and I hope that you will be happy with this chapter (evil Steno)-
Yaoi is in the air (Email Hidden) 2007-01-08 id # 3000012479
I Adored this chapter, sneaky cheeky Ichi-chan! XP
And you know what I found out? Ik ben ook Nederlands! Woehoe! What a small world it is! Waar ik je wel ff op wil wijzen is dat je whell, zonder -h- schrijft en mutch, zonder -t-. Verder is ut allemaal wel goed!
Ik vin ut zo melig; ik heb ook vaak zo'n stalkerverhaaltje in mun hoofd gehad, maar nooit geschreven. En dan doet un mede-(perverse)-Nederlandertje ut ook!
Ik heb ook wel un verhaaltje maar die staat op de normale fanfiction, Ok ok, hij's wel rated M vanwege de yaoi ^^U
Maar ik hoop dat je weer snel update of ik zal aan mijn leverrr gaan knabbelen en stuur de restanten naar jou op, be afraiiiiid, be very afraid.
-Weet je hoe vet da is da jij ook Nl bent! vind ik egt leuk XD idd zeker small world, jij bent al mijn 2de nederlandse fan, naast natuurlijk KillerKim.
Dit is eigelijk de eerste keer dat ik egt aan een stalkerverhaal dacht, en maybe kan je me ook een beetje uithelpen met het verhaal. als het je wa lijkt voeg me dn gewoon toe op je msn, als het goed is staat mijn adres gewoon op de site.
sorry nog da het wa langer duurde, school is weer begonnen hier,maar heb hem wel langer gemaakt dus please stuur me nie je leverrestanten op 0.o-
ficfan3484 2007-01-08 id # 3000012481
O.O....That pervert Kalha, hehe, he was too slow and Ichigo got his clothes on *groans in disappointment* I like it, update soon please.
-as you wish 0.~, maybe Ichigo will get naked again, who knows-
Chapter 4:first close contact
The clothes fit Ichigo as if they were custom-made for him.
The pants were nicly accenting his long, firm leg and left almost nothing to the imagination. The shirt was an old-fashioned one,like the ones in the middle-ages with laces in the front. This one wasn’t so tight and long enough to hide Ichigo’s manhoud from unwanted looks (he already had enough of them anyway)The shirt was a midnight blue, the pants the deepest black he had ever seen,making Ichigo a look bit paler then usual.
’what?no red?’’Ichigo asked since Klaha still wasn’t over the shock.
This got Klaha’s mind out of the glutter again, since he was already thinking of how he could get Ichigo out of the clothes to see if his haircolor was natural. His face was still a bit red but it was fading fast.
He couched behind his hand ashamed befor answering.
’No not this time.The red in the room is to always remind me of my little strawberry,while black and blue brings your haircolor to their maximum’’
‘’well if you don’t start explaning you will be black and blue’’
really, the boy had no pacience.
‘’Yes, I think some explanation would be in order’’
/geesh, you think?/Ichigo thought,but now he would finaly get the guys story!
‘’Whell, Guess I have to start from the front.About 10 years ago
BEEP!!BEEP!!BEEP!!BEEP!!BEEP!!
‘’aaargh!’’Ichigo fell out of his bed.
/Wait a minut,bed?/ Ichigo looked around him.
He was on the floor,next to a bed....shit this was his own room.
/Damnit,just when I was going to get some info on the bastard/
He was so frustrated,he just..
’ICHIGO MY BOY A NEW DAY HAD STARTED.COME AND LET ME GIVE YOU A WARM HUG LIKE REAL MAN,CHEST TO CHEST!!!”
...suddenly his day became a lot better....
10 minuts later his dad was lying on the floor of his room,with 4 teeth less and with a lot more bruises then when he came in this morning, and Ichigo leaving the room in his uniform and a better mood then before.
/Don’t get me wrong,I’m still pissed.Now I have a guy stalking me and I still don’t know anything about him!/
He wasn’t very hungry anymore en just left the house with only his books.
It was a dark,rainy day,but Ichigo just continued to walk,not even bothering to run,since he was getting wet anyway.
When he passed the allyway he had capcured Kon...ichigo’s eyes suddenly got bigger when he rememberd.
/Shit Kon!!I forgot to ask that weird guy go give him back!/
’Now who are you calling weird?’’ shit,why did the guy always catch him off guard?
Ichigo quicky spun around and saw the person he was just looking for.
In the shadow of the ally stood Klaha, leaning casually against the wall.
This time he was clothed in a darkred jacket just like the others,only thistime it was made from leather,his pants were the same color, also from leather and as tight as Ichigo’s pants in the dream...
Blood filled Ichigo’s cheeks, he couldn’t help it.
’well,someone is happy to see me’’
the man laughed softly. Suddenly rage filled Ichigo, the guy sure had some guts!
’why you teme!’’
Ichigo now ran to the man,his fist raized and aiming for the bleackhaired mans face.
Klaha grabbed the fist flying at him and flew Ichigo in the wall he was leaning onte just a second ago.
Ichigo couldn’t help but to let out a small whimper from the pain, damn that hurt.
When he wanted to fight back Klaha grabbed both of his wrists and forsed them above Ichigo’s head in one hand.This startled the orange boy, and now mather how hard he pulled, he couldn’t get his hands free.
He held the other mans breath in his ear when he whispert:
’I wanted to go slowly on you, letting you get used to me, but you had to go and seduce me.’’
’seduce wha hmmm!’’
Befor he could even finish his sentence Klaha’s lips where forced over his,licking his cherry lips,asking for permission.
Ofcourse Ichigo held his mouth stifly closed.
Suddenly he felt a hand closing gripping between his legs, he opened his mouth trying to protest, but only getting a tongue slipping between his lips. He tried to get free, to run away, but without any succes, he was just to strong.
Ichigo began to get scared.He couldn’t deny that he liked the kiss, hell even loved having the mans tongue in his mouth,but it was just wrong,so wrong. He was to scared to even react to the kiss, just standing there and let the man do his thing.He began to tremble from fear and frustration.
God.Klaha was in heaven.The boy tasted to good, like everything and nothing, and he wanted more of it. He just loved the taste of the boy,the way he was moving against his trying to get free,trembling...
/Wait a minut/
He pulled back from the boys mouth to look at him.
His little strawberry was trembling all over, his eyes tightly shut and his hands were now smal fist. His lips were swollen from the assalt on them. The blackhaired mans eyes filled with concern over his loved one.
He didn’t want this. He wanted Ichigo to love him back, to be his forever.
But it seemed he just wasn’t ready for it.
Again he leaned in to whisper in the trembling boys ear.
’I’m sorry Love, you were just to tasty to let go, I will go now and let you think about this, but first...’’
He couldn’t let Ichigo walk around freely for everyone to take, he had to make sure that everyone knew that the boy was his.
For a last time he leaned in, this time to suck at the boys neck.
Ichigo let out a smal gasp and quickly opened his eyes,while turning his head away from the man, giving him more skin to assault instead of getting away from the lips.
After a few second Klaha let go of the boys neck and looked at the result of his work.
High on Ichigo’s neck was now a big hicky for everyone to see and admire.
He looked the boy in the eye,forcing Ichigo’s eyes to lock with his.
''I will come back for you love''
He pushed Kons capsule in Ichigo's hand.With that Klaha disapeared again, leaving Ichigo shocked and trembeling standing in the allyway
sorry I didn't update sooner,school started again (school's evil)
because of that I made it a extra long chapter.I hope you enjoyed it
please review, even if you don't want to 0.~