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Sin

By: Rockyshores
folder Bleach › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 17
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Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach or make any money off of this story.
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Chapter 8

Review Replies- AnimeAngelSisters: well luckily I included in the AN who the sins are and their virtue =D
Tiramisu: What's not to like about balls?
Muny: Yay for my OTP KenIchi!!! It will be coming back into my story soon.
bijou: I love both meat *and* potatoes =3
BolognaAnChi: Starrk's personality seems to fit with Ichigo's nicely =)
VioletEyes: kukuku, I do like writing smut!
Aralaiqualasse: The sins are going to have feelings for Ichigo and the other way around, but it will take a while for everyone to see it.
Countrygirl10: Thank you!!!
Anon: I'll manage somehow...
Lynzee: Haha! Don't worry, Aizen will get his turn =D
MasterAkira: Whatever you do, never say that to Ichigo's face!

For those who were disappointed about the not-very-sweet sex scene between Starrk and Ichigo, I’m very sorry! I promise they will have a sweet sex scene as well.

Here’s an easy to understand summary of everyone’s sin and virtue (opposite of their sin, which needs to be ‘obtained’).

Ichigo- Sin: Lust, Virtue: Chastity.
Starrk- Sin: Sloth, Virtue: Diligence (Persistence, effort)
Nnoitra- Sin: Greed, Virtue: Liberality (Love or Charity)
Aizen- Sin: Pride, Virtue: Humility
Kenpachi- Sin: Wrath, Virtue: Patience
Shinji- Sin: Envy, Virtue: Kindness
Grimmjow- Sin: Gluttony, Virtue: Temperance (Self control)

I hope that helped! Also, the gods and goddesses that I refer to are from Norse and Germanic mythology. If you don’t know who they are and don’t want to look them up, just ask me in a review or PM, although they will be explained more thoroughly later.

Beta’d by the rockin’ Warrior Nun!

Sin: Chapter 7

Ichigo calmed down a lot after he stormed out of Starrk’s bedroom. Now he even felt a little guilty for storming out on Starrk, who had treated him so nicely and lovingly up until that point. He overreacted because he felt like Starrk treating him that way wasn’t making love, but just fucking. He had liked the sex a lot, and he ruined the afterglow because he wanted more than the espada could give. It wasn’t like hollows could love, anyways.

He sighed and looked around with a scowl as he realized that he had no clue where he was. His body was aching and sore from how sexually active he was recently. His soul healed a lot faster than his body did, but he could really do with a break and a long bath to ease his muscles, not to mention get cleaned. Now if he could only figure out where a bathroom was then he would be set.



Nnoitra soaked up Ichigo’s body with his eye greedily. The sin looked a little worse for wear, with his mussed up hair and body which he held stiffly like he had a wound. Nnoitra could guess from what since he was outside the room when Starrk was screwing Ichigo. He couldn’t hear or sense either of their reiatsu, but he could feel their sins which was centered only on lust and encompasses the atmosphere in epic proportions.

He couldn’t wait to get a piece of that shinigami tail, even if Ichigo had been passed around a few times. The little slut would probably enjoy getting taken by a real man like Nnoitra, not some pussy like the others.

He grinned broadly and stepped forward out of the shadows to let his presence be known. Ichigo, who was about to peak inside a room, froze as he caught sight of the espada from the corner of his eye. Fuck, he really sucked at sensing reiatsu.

“Er…” Ichigo trailed off as he turned to look at him, trying to remember the guys name who he recognized as a sin.

The espada was taller than even Kenpachi and was skinny, yet it was obvious he was also muscular. He had long black hair which was shiny and sleek, as well as an eye patch over his left eye. His grin was sharp and deadly. It reminded him of Kenpachi, which was probably not a good thing at all.

“Yo, shinigami.” The espada said, his drawling and cocky voice sounding very sexy to Ichigo’s ear. “Ya are Ichigo Kurosaki, right? The sin lust.”

Despite the way the espada practically oozed his confidence in his sexiness and want, Ichigo could hear the smallest amount of disdain in his voice. He couldn’t figure out where it came from and it was so bare that Ichigo decided to ignore it.

“Yeah, and you are?” Ichigo asked and the espada smirked before taking a step closer.

“Nnoitra Jiruga. Greed.” He took a step closer and Ichigo almost stumbled as his lust was reawakened. Couldn’t he ever catch a break? He hoped there was some leeway he got soon, he really couldn’t handle this.

The lust increased as Nnoitra drew closer. So much that Ichigo actually became disoriented and he slumped against the wall. His breath quickened and his eyes fluttered shut as he tried to regain control of his body. His knees trembled and would no longer hold him, making him slide down the wall.

Before he could hit the floor, however, Nnoitra caught him and unceremoniously threw Ichigo over his shoulder. Ichigo shuddered at his close proximity to Nnoitra and clawed at his back. An act that went completely ignored by Nnoitra except to stroke his ass.

Apparently the sin lust and greed didn’t go very well together. Or rather, they went too well together. Like with Kenpachi and Grimmjow, where the lust and the other sins built on each other to create more energy and power, the greed make Ichigo want more and more and more. They hadn’t even fucked yet and Ichigo wanted Nnoitra to keep doing it without stopping.

He wiggled around as Nnoitra carried him to what he assumed was Nnoitra’s room, making Nnoitra grunt in irritation. Getting away wasn’t Ichigo’s intention, however, and instead he slipped down Nnoitra’s body and wrapped his legs around the espada’s waist. Before Nnoitra could take a moment to enjoy the closeness of Ichigo’s face near his, Ichigo crashed his mouth over Nnoitra’s.

Nnoitra was actually a little surprised with Ichigo’s forwardness and aggressive nature (he was sure he would have to coax the little bitch into spreading his legs). Not that he was complaining, of course, but he didn’t want the slut thinking that he was topping Nnoitra.

He sonido’d to his room once he was close enough and literally threw Ichigo onto the bed, the force of which actually made the bed skid a few feet before hitting the wall. Ichigo winced only slightly as his sore body was reminded of his aches, but his attention quickly returned to Nnoitra who was now stripping.

It turned out that Ichigo’s first thought that Nnoitra was muscular despite being skinny was correct. Ichigo unabashedly drank in Nnoitra’s long, lean limbs and swallowed when his hakama were removed as well. His cock was the longest that he had ever seen although it was actually proportionate to the rest of his body. His girth wasn’t skinny by any means, but he was far more slender than seemed natural for as long as his cock was.

“Why are ya still dressed, Lust?” Nnoitra said with a smirk. He figured the sin wouldn’t like being called slut, so he went for the next best thing.

Ichigo’s eyes narrowed at the tone and he slid off the bed on steady legs. His entire body felt like it was pulsing with heat and desire. He wanted his body to be admired by Nnoitra and then he wanted to be fucked senseless by Nnoitra. He knew both of those things would happen.

He slowly untied his sash, which he had hastily tied only a little over an hour ago. A thought he pushed away in order to focus on the staring Nnoitra. He dropped the sash on the ground next to the bed and then slid the kosode and shitagi from his shoulders and let it drop to the floor.

Bite marks and hickies still covered his body, as well as scratches from where Grimmjow got a little rough. Nnoitra actually glared at the marks and didn’t allow Ichigo to finish undressing before he crossed the space in between them and shoved Ichigo back onto the bed.

Ichigo groaned and opened his mouth into the ferocious kiss while reaching down and taking a hold of Nnoitra’s dick. Nnoitra’s hips slightly in surprise at the touch but didn’t push his hand away. Nnoitra reached down and grabbed the sash of Ichigo’s shihakusho. He wrapped it around Ichigo’s wrists and then tied it to one of the bars of the bed’s headboard.

The action made Ichigo freeze mid-kiss and pull away to scowl up at Nnoitra. “What are you doing?”

“I’m tying ya up.” Nnoitra said nonchalantly and then slid down Ichigo’s body to undo the belt of his hakama. “Don’t worry, I won’t tie your legs apart, I want to be able to move them around.” He gave a smirk that made Ichigo worry more, not less.

Ichigo wanted to protest, but it seemed like far too much effort when he could be spending it on other things. Like right now when Nnoitra shoved his cock into Ichigo’s face.

“Be a good sinner and suck.” Nnoitra gripped Ichigo’s hair and lifted his head up before shoving a pillow underneath his head. Ichigo was mildly surprised that Nnoitra cared enough about his concern to do so.

The head of Nnoitra’s cock bumped against his lip and Nnoitra pumped his engorged member a few times until pre-come began to leak from his slit. He smeared the tip over Ichigo’s lips and around them while enjoying the very provocative sight of Ichigo’s large brown eyes staring up at him with lust.

Ichigo opened his mouth and flicked his tongue out to taste Nnoitra. He was getting used to the odd bitter taste now and didn’t grimace as it exploded over his taste buds. Because he was unable to use his hands he had to tilt his head forward to take more of his long cock into his mouth.

The implications of having his hands bound dawned on Ichigo a little. When in this position and giving a blow job Nnoitra would be doing all of the moving. Ichigo wouldn’t be able to pull his head back or hold Nnoitra’s hips down if Nnoitra choked him either, which made Ichigo a bit apprehensive.

Nnoitra noticed the realization and nervousness and grinned broadly before thrusting his hips forward. Ichigo moaned around the cock in his mouth and sucked at the long organ which had ropey veins on the bottom which reminded Ichigo of Kenpachi. It was strange to be thinking of Kenpachi in this instance as he sucked off another man, but he couldn’t help but compare the two.

Nnoitra was cut, where as Kenpachi was uncut. Nnoitra was smooth and almost completely hairless while Kenpachi had a smooth chest, but was otherwise very hairy. Kenpachi was thick, Nnoitra was long. Kenpachi fucked Ichigo passionately while Nnoitra was almost cold.

The two were very different indeed, but it was something to think about as he fought not to choke when Nnoitra thrust too much of himself into Ichigo’s mouth. It seemed like he was trying to test how much Ichigo could take before gagging him. It took him a few minutes before he got the hang of Nnoitra’s rhythm and cock, but then it was much easier.

He sucked and licked Nnoitra’s cock while keeping his eyes gazing up at Nnoitra who was gritting his teeth and cursing Ichigo’s hot, wet mouth. Ichigo smirked slightly at the way he was able to control Nnoitra even though his hands were tied above his head. Unfortunately Nnoitra caught the smirk and knew exactly why Ichigo was smirking.

A wet sound came from Ichigo’s mouth as Nnoitra removed his cock and Ichigo wiggled his jaw a little from the ache that had developed there. Without further ado, Nnoitra spread Ichigo’s legs apart and lined himself up to that tight entrance he had been obsessive over.

“Wait, aren’t you going to prepare me?” Ichigo asked uneasily as Nnoitra gripped his hips and leaned down so their faces were inches apart.

“I doubt ya need stretching again, Lust.”

Ichigo scowled at him but didn’t protest again as Nnoitra rubbed the head of his cock against Ichigo’s tight hole. Ichigo squirmed and his face flushed as he tried to push his hips back to take him. Nnoitra laughed and nipped lightly at his neck where there was a bite mark before pushing forward.

“Oh fuck, ya are tight, bitch.” Nnoitra hissed at the pleasant surprise as he sank into Ichigo. Ichigo bit his lower lip and arched his neck at the pain. His saliva coating Nnoitra’s cock as well as Ichigo being fucked not too long ago did help ease the penetration.

He locked his legs around Nnoitra’s waist and jerked him forward to take more of his long cock. He could feel Nnoitra’s sin pressing at him to act as he became greedy for more of his long member. The fifth espada openly laughed and gave Ichigo what he wanted with a single thrust.

Ichigo inhaled sharply and clenched around Nnoitra in pleasure. He had never been so deeply penetrated before that instead of hurting, felt erotic and pleasurable. Nnoitra’s width made it so that he wasn’t pressing as hard against his prostate, but the long slide and constant pressure against it more than made up for it.

“Ah! Ah!” Ichigo could hardly believe that the wanton and sexy sounds being made were coming from him. He couldn’t help it though, not when Nnoitra was fucking him so hard and so rough without stopping. The bed was actually being smashed hard into the walls with every thrust and Ichigo wondered how much more the bed could take before breaking.

Ichigo came embarrassingly quickly, and without even being touched. He didn’t know why but it felt so good to have Nnoitra deep inside of him and touching where nobody had ever touching him before.

Nnoitra actually stopped his thrusts for a few seconds in order for Ichigo to get his breath regulated once again. Nnoitra’s chest clenched painfully at the sight of Ichigo beneath him with a heavy flush and half-closed eyes. The shinigami shifted and gasped when Nnoitra’s length pressed against his prostate.

The sin greed smirked and began to piston his hips once more, immediately picking up the same pace. Ichigo wasn’t complaining though. He was bruised and aching from the rough treatment, but Ichigo didn’t even realize it. He was too busy lifting his hips to meet Nnoitra’s thrusts and thinking about how fucking fantastic it felt.

“Oh, gods, yes, don’t stop!” Ichigo begged Nnoitra who only grunted in reply. He was hunched over Ichigo, bracing himself on his forearms which were underneath Ichigo’s shoulders. He was close to coming as well and was trying to make it last, but that was next to impossible with Ichigo so pleasurable to be inside, to see him looking so fucking delicious and to hear those noises he made.

He bit down onto Ichigo’s shoulder when he came, making Ichigo wince but accept the now familiar action without comment. Ichigo was still hard, and Nnoitra was still inside of him keeping his come inside of Ichigo shuddered at the sensation but said nothing. Then he blinked as he realized that something was different about Nnoitra now, after he came, something that he would have noticed right away if his observational skills were up to par.

“Are you in your released form Nnoitra?” Ichigo asked in confusion at the six arms and horns jutting out of his head, not to mention it was now apparent his mask and hollow hole was what was underneath his eye patch.

Nnoitra blinked in surprise and then smirked. “I suppose they call it a ‘released’ form for a reason, don’t they, pet?” He drawled and rocked his hips as he began to harden again. “I suppose ya bring that out in me.”

Nnoitra realized a second later that it sounded actually a bit sappy and romantic so he ended the short conversation with a jerk of his hips. Ichigo cried out and his back bowed. The fifth espada smirked and they began to dance all over again.



Despite what Loki thought or assumed, Odin was very much aware of the ‘bet’ going on between him and Freya. He had in fact, instructed Freya to persuade Loki to bet over the shinigami and hollows. If he had simply asked Loki, he knew the deceitful god would find a way to mess it up or sabotage his attempts. Therefore it was necessary to make Loki think that it was mostly his idea.

Odin didn’t like that he had to use Loki, in fact he despised it, but the god had certain gifts and abilities that Odin needed to make use of. Freya made a deal with Loki that if she chose the seven people, he would be allowed to use his magic to make them personify their sins.

The bet between Freya and Loki was whether or not seven spiritual beings once driven by a sin, would not be able to obtain the virtue parallel to their sin. Freya said that they could, Loki said they couldn’t. They were allowed to influence the seven chosen ones in any way except for using magic to take away their will.

Loki believed that it was just a bet between him and Freya over Freya’s necklace, which Freya agreed to give him if he won. If she won, however, Loki would have to spend a year as a mare. The true reason for the bet, however, was much more important. Odin needed for Freya to win. The very fate of the world depended on it.

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I have been getting questions about this in reviews, so I will explain at least a little. Some of you want to know about the bet going on between the gods and what it has to do about the virtues. I am doing this on purpose because I don’t want to give away EVERYTHING about the plot all at once. You will learn some things about it slowly, so please be patient. For those of you who are too confused without the information, or just want to know, feel free to ask in a review or PM.

Here is a hint though… it has to do with the ‘special’ eighth sin corruption and its counterpart virtue which is justice.

There will be more smut with Ichigo and Nnoitra in the next chapter! Yes, Aizen will be coming in soon.
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