Immortal Coil
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Adult ++
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10
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Chapter 9
Review Replies- shadowkittae: This chapter is going to be face-paced as well... Just because I don't want to be repetitive with the manga, although I am going to talk about it.
MasterAkira: Renji has a list for this. 1)Rescue Ichigo 2)Defeat Aizen 3) ??? 4) Smex with Ichigo!!!
Kai: Yeah, I love dorks. They have certain charm to them =D
VioletEyes: Renji is very cute... Almost as cute as Ichigo.
Yakumo: haha, I might do a KenseiIchi fic... but only after I get through all the ones I have going on right now =D
ShadowofLight: I theorize that he isn't dead. Because I'm stubborn like that.
INTERESTING YAOI FACT!!! In every Bleach movie so far, Ichigo has ‘ridden’ Renji’s ‘sword.’ >=3
Anon Replies- Blacksebonzakura2: I do feel a bit bad for Nnoitra and Tesla… I think Ichi is the ultimate tough uke. He kicks ass and takes names (not that he can remember all of them).
I am not going to bore my readers with details that they have probably already read in the manga, or seen in the anime. I could write long elaborate fight scenes (which you’ve already seen, therefore not original on my part), but I prefer not to.
Immortal Coil: Chapter 9
The big fight turned out to be a little bit of a let down for Ichigo. As soon as the vizards showed up, the four top espada and their Fraccion were too outnumbered to do much. It was a bit of a surprise that Yammy was the ‘zero’ espada, but despite his enormous strength, he wasn’t very smart so he was easy to outmaneuver and destroy, courtesy of old man Yamamoto.
Ichigo, who had gotten a few hard swats on his ass by the large espada, was not sad to see him go up in flames. He was a little bit relieved that Stark and Lilinette were able to escape because he never had anything against them and neither of them been the type to fight anyways. Stark’s “escape” consisted of him yawning and deciding that he would much rather sleeps then deal with all of the shinigami and vizards.
Barragan was harder to get rid of. In the end Hachi had to get help from Soi Fon to kill him, and only then after he promised to lock Urahara up for three days. Ichigo silently agreed on this issue and only hoped that he would get to watch, with popcorn.
While Captain Komamura attacked Tousen with Shuuhei’s aid, Shinji went directly for Aizen. Gin tried to interfere but both Renji and Kensei took him on, and left Shinji to his devices. After Gin dealt an almost-fatal blow to Hiyori, Shinji was beyond pissed. He was enraged at her almost death and slashed at Aizen, easily tearing through his illusions, despite how they might have advanced.
Ichigo actually got stuck slashing at minor hollows that Wonderweiss called forth, and then after Wonderweiss himself. He felt slightly bad for the childlike arrancar, but that didn’t stop him from being amused when Mashiro kicked him around like a soccer ball and destroyed his favorite hollow.
Hitsuguya was one of the few captains that easily accepted the vizard’s presence. It made Ichigo respect the captain even more that he didn’t harbor too much prejudice over them. Hitsuguya and Lisa struggled with Harribel, partially because the female arrancar was even more embodied with passion over concern for her Fraccion. Commendable as her emotions were, Hitsuguya was more concerned over his subordinate who was injured by Harribel’s Fraccion.
In the end, with Lisa’s hand to hand combat used as a distraction, Hitsuguya froze all of the water in Harribel’s body and she shattered into a million pieces. He sheathed his zanpakuto and without a backward glance, flash stepped to Matsumoto.
Thanks to the arrival of the vizards, there were no fatalities, just casualties that consisted most notably of the loss of Soi Fon’s arm. Once the barrier fell, returning Karakura back to the real world, and the spell barring escape from Hueco disappeared, the shinigami returned to Soul Society. The vizards remained in the real world, for however long it took for the shinigami to decide that they may be a threat and come after them.
Nobody asked questions about Orihime Inoue staying in Hueco Mundo, except for Tatsuki who demanded answers. For the brief amount of time where Ichigo was holed up in Urahara Kisuke’s shop after the final battle, he had to deal with Tatsuki who was intent on not letting him rest.
Renji finally stepped in and told her to back the fuck off and that the ‘big breasted chick’ was in Hueco Mundo with her ‘lover boy.’ He got to experience first hand why Ichigo tried not to make the girl angry when she delivered a hard blow to his face. His cheek throbbed but he fought the urge to lash out and instead felt a pang of sympathy as she stormed out of the shop with tears running down her face.
Ichigo shot Renji a look in irritation but the red head just shrugged and tried to discretely scoot closer to Ichigo as they sat around the tea table.
Rukia was one of the few shinigami who stayed in Karakura to make sure that everything went smoothly after the other shinigami pulled out. She continued to stare at Renji incredulously and it made Renji a little uncomfortable. Ichigo felt a small pang in his chest at the teasing relationship they had, and wondered if they used to date. His fears seemed to be confirmed with how touchy-feely Rukia was with Renji and ended up standing up and leaving so he wouldn’t have to watch them anymore.
Rukia stared after him in confusion while she leaned against Renji’s arm and Renji just stared after him.
“You really are an idiot.” Kensei commented, making Rukia more confused and Renji irritated.
“Shut up.”
“You know if Ichigo liked me like he likes you, I would be all over him in a second.”
“Shut up!”
“Whoa, Ichigo likes you, likes you? Like romantically!?” Rukia asked in surprised and Renji jerked out of her grasp.
“No, he doesn’t…”
“Yes he does, and this idiot likes him as well.” Kensei said with a snort.
Shinji and Kisuke who were also in the room made no comment, but they did feel slightly bad for Rukia who looked slightly hurt.
“You’re gay?” She asked in a whisper and Renji glanced at her with a scowl.
“Do you have a problem with that?”
“But…I thought that you had always liked me.”
Renji furrowed his brow and glanced at his old friend that he had used to find so captivating but now seemed so plain in comparison to Ichigo.
“I used to like you…but I like Ichigo now.” Saying it out loud made his throat want to seize up and stop working, but once he said it, a sense of relief washed over him. “I like Ichigo.”
“Yeah, we get it.” Shinji snorted and watched in amusement as the realization crossed Renji’s face.
“I like Ichigo.”
“We heard you the first time, Abarai-san.” Urahara fanned himself as Rukia’s look of horror grew and Renji grew even happier.
“I like Ichigo!” Renji stood up and shouted. Kensei sighed and shot his leg out, knocking Renji of his feet and onto his ass with a grunt.
“Then go do something about it you idiot.”
Renji needed no more encouragement to scramble to his feet and chase after Ichigo through the doorway he had disappeared through minutes before.
Rukia still looked like she was in shock and she jerked in surprise when Urahara forced a cup of hot tea into her hands. She had thought that with Renji back in her life, she could take chances where she hadn’t before. Orihime who she had always liked but had never had the guts to ask out ended up with an espada while Renji was in love with another.
“You never really notice what you have right underneath your nose.” Urahara commented as Rukia nodded, still in a daze. “I’m sure that Kuchiki would love it if you returned to Soul Society now.”
“But I haven’t said good bye to Renji…” She forced her mouth to work and winced at her whining voice.
“Perhaps it’s time for you not to need to.” Urahara said and smiled as she nodded again. The girl would be alright. She wasn’t the first to suffer heartbreak, and she still had another who she had unknowingly stolen the heart of.
…
“Ichigo wait!” Renji cried out at he finally caught up to Ichigo who was running along the warehouses that the vizards used as their base of operations.
Ichigo finally stopped and turned around to scowl at Renji. “Shouldn’t you be cuddling with your girlfriend?”
“Rukia isn’t my girlfriend, and she never was.” Renji said and frowned at Ichigo who continued to scowl at him.
“Oh? What would you call her then? Your lover?”
“Tch, never, she’s just a friend I haven’t seen in a long time.”
“Whatever.” Ichigo looked away from Renji with red rising to his cheeks. “It’s not like I care anyways.”
“Oh?” Renji smirked slowly. “But it kind of looks like you do.”
“I don’t!” Ichigo snapped and turned his head to look at Renji again, then inhaled sharply and took a step back when he realized that Renji was right there.
“No?” Renji stared into Ichigo’s eyes and didn’t look away as he took a step forward, forcing Ichigo to move back until his back hit the wall of a building. “I think you do.”
“Renji…” The red head in question braced his hands on either side of Ichigo’s head and shifted closer until his face was inches away from Ichigo’s. “I don’t-” The rest of Ichigo’s words turned into a muffled gasp as Renji pressed their lips together.
Ichigo tensed at first but Renji coaxed him into relaxing with light pressure and gentle flicks up his tongue in between Ichigo’s only slightly parted lips. Renji finally pulled away and caressed Ichigo’s jaw as Ichigo tried to slow his breathing.
“Open your mouth.”
Ichigo groaned as they kissed once more and leaned up to wrap his arms around Renji’s neck and entangled his fingers in Renji’s hair, pulling the tie to let the red mane fall in wild locks around his shoulders. He opened his mouth as Renji requested and moaned as Renji’s tongue slipped in between his lips and began to languidly explore his mouth.
Ichigo uncertainly tried to follow what Renji was doing, but he was quickly overwhelmed and was content to let Renji lead the action, at least at the moment.
They parted again to calm down their heated bodies that were pressing against each other so tightly.
“We shouldn’t do this here.” Ichigo murmured quietly but made no action to move away from Renji. Renji nodded and reluctantly untangled their limbs before slipping his hand in Ichigo’s to tug him forward.
“Let’s go back to the base.”
Ichigo nodded, not trusting himself to speak as fire coiled in his body and his groin ached. The idea of doing anything sexual with Renji made his pulse quicken and he was afraid Renji could hear his heart pounding as close as they were together.
Renji sent him a cocky smirk and Ichigo scowled despite the shiver it sent down his spine. He was going to sleep with Renji.
LINE
The next chapter is the final one, and yes it will contain smut and a full lemon.
Please review!!!
MasterAkira: Renji has a list for this. 1)Rescue Ichigo 2)Defeat Aizen 3) ??? 4) Smex with Ichigo!!!
Kai: Yeah, I love dorks. They have certain charm to them =D
VioletEyes: Renji is very cute... Almost as cute as Ichigo.
Yakumo: haha, I might do a KenseiIchi fic... but only after I get through all the ones I have going on right now =D
ShadowofLight: I theorize that he isn't dead. Because I'm stubborn like that.
INTERESTING YAOI FACT!!! In every Bleach movie so far, Ichigo has ‘ridden’ Renji’s ‘sword.’ >=3
Anon Replies- Blacksebonzakura2: I do feel a bit bad for Nnoitra and Tesla… I think Ichi is the ultimate tough uke. He kicks ass and takes names (not that he can remember all of them).
I am not going to bore my readers with details that they have probably already read in the manga, or seen in the anime. I could write long elaborate fight scenes (which you’ve already seen, therefore not original on my part), but I prefer not to.
Immortal Coil: Chapter 9
The big fight turned out to be a little bit of a let down for Ichigo. As soon as the vizards showed up, the four top espada and their Fraccion were too outnumbered to do much. It was a bit of a surprise that Yammy was the ‘zero’ espada, but despite his enormous strength, he wasn’t very smart so he was easy to outmaneuver and destroy, courtesy of old man Yamamoto.
Ichigo, who had gotten a few hard swats on his ass by the large espada, was not sad to see him go up in flames. He was a little bit relieved that Stark and Lilinette were able to escape because he never had anything against them and neither of them been the type to fight anyways. Stark’s “escape” consisted of him yawning and deciding that he would much rather sleeps then deal with all of the shinigami and vizards.
Barragan was harder to get rid of. In the end Hachi had to get help from Soi Fon to kill him, and only then after he promised to lock Urahara up for three days. Ichigo silently agreed on this issue and only hoped that he would get to watch, with popcorn.
While Captain Komamura attacked Tousen with Shuuhei’s aid, Shinji went directly for Aizen. Gin tried to interfere but both Renji and Kensei took him on, and left Shinji to his devices. After Gin dealt an almost-fatal blow to Hiyori, Shinji was beyond pissed. He was enraged at her almost death and slashed at Aizen, easily tearing through his illusions, despite how they might have advanced.
Ichigo actually got stuck slashing at minor hollows that Wonderweiss called forth, and then after Wonderweiss himself. He felt slightly bad for the childlike arrancar, but that didn’t stop him from being amused when Mashiro kicked him around like a soccer ball and destroyed his favorite hollow.
Hitsuguya was one of the few captains that easily accepted the vizard’s presence. It made Ichigo respect the captain even more that he didn’t harbor too much prejudice over them. Hitsuguya and Lisa struggled with Harribel, partially because the female arrancar was even more embodied with passion over concern for her Fraccion. Commendable as her emotions were, Hitsuguya was more concerned over his subordinate who was injured by Harribel’s Fraccion.
In the end, with Lisa’s hand to hand combat used as a distraction, Hitsuguya froze all of the water in Harribel’s body and she shattered into a million pieces. He sheathed his zanpakuto and without a backward glance, flash stepped to Matsumoto.
Thanks to the arrival of the vizards, there were no fatalities, just casualties that consisted most notably of the loss of Soi Fon’s arm. Once the barrier fell, returning Karakura back to the real world, and the spell barring escape from Hueco disappeared, the shinigami returned to Soul Society. The vizards remained in the real world, for however long it took for the shinigami to decide that they may be a threat and come after them.
Nobody asked questions about Orihime Inoue staying in Hueco Mundo, except for Tatsuki who demanded answers. For the brief amount of time where Ichigo was holed up in Urahara Kisuke’s shop after the final battle, he had to deal with Tatsuki who was intent on not letting him rest.
Renji finally stepped in and told her to back the fuck off and that the ‘big breasted chick’ was in Hueco Mundo with her ‘lover boy.’ He got to experience first hand why Ichigo tried not to make the girl angry when she delivered a hard blow to his face. His cheek throbbed but he fought the urge to lash out and instead felt a pang of sympathy as she stormed out of the shop with tears running down her face.
Ichigo shot Renji a look in irritation but the red head just shrugged and tried to discretely scoot closer to Ichigo as they sat around the tea table.
Rukia was one of the few shinigami who stayed in Karakura to make sure that everything went smoothly after the other shinigami pulled out. She continued to stare at Renji incredulously and it made Renji a little uncomfortable. Ichigo felt a small pang in his chest at the teasing relationship they had, and wondered if they used to date. His fears seemed to be confirmed with how touchy-feely Rukia was with Renji and ended up standing up and leaving so he wouldn’t have to watch them anymore.
Rukia stared after him in confusion while she leaned against Renji’s arm and Renji just stared after him.
“You really are an idiot.” Kensei commented, making Rukia more confused and Renji irritated.
“Shut up.”
“You know if Ichigo liked me like he likes you, I would be all over him in a second.”
“Shut up!”
“Whoa, Ichigo likes you, likes you? Like romantically!?” Rukia asked in surprised and Renji jerked out of her grasp.
“No, he doesn’t…”
“Yes he does, and this idiot likes him as well.” Kensei said with a snort.
Shinji and Kisuke who were also in the room made no comment, but they did feel slightly bad for Rukia who looked slightly hurt.
“You’re gay?” She asked in a whisper and Renji glanced at her with a scowl.
“Do you have a problem with that?”
“But…I thought that you had always liked me.”
Renji furrowed his brow and glanced at his old friend that he had used to find so captivating but now seemed so plain in comparison to Ichigo.
“I used to like you…but I like Ichigo now.” Saying it out loud made his throat want to seize up and stop working, but once he said it, a sense of relief washed over him. “I like Ichigo.”
“Yeah, we get it.” Shinji snorted and watched in amusement as the realization crossed Renji’s face.
“I like Ichigo.”
“We heard you the first time, Abarai-san.” Urahara fanned himself as Rukia’s look of horror grew and Renji grew even happier.
“I like Ichigo!” Renji stood up and shouted. Kensei sighed and shot his leg out, knocking Renji of his feet and onto his ass with a grunt.
“Then go do something about it you idiot.”
Renji needed no more encouragement to scramble to his feet and chase after Ichigo through the doorway he had disappeared through minutes before.
Rukia still looked like she was in shock and she jerked in surprise when Urahara forced a cup of hot tea into her hands. She had thought that with Renji back in her life, she could take chances where she hadn’t before. Orihime who she had always liked but had never had the guts to ask out ended up with an espada while Renji was in love with another.
“You never really notice what you have right underneath your nose.” Urahara commented as Rukia nodded, still in a daze. “I’m sure that Kuchiki would love it if you returned to Soul Society now.”
“But I haven’t said good bye to Renji…” She forced her mouth to work and winced at her whining voice.
“Perhaps it’s time for you not to need to.” Urahara said and smiled as she nodded again. The girl would be alright. She wasn’t the first to suffer heartbreak, and she still had another who she had unknowingly stolen the heart of.
…
“Ichigo wait!” Renji cried out at he finally caught up to Ichigo who was running along the warehouses that the vizards used as their base of operations.
Ichigo finally stopped and turned around to scowl at Renji. “Shouldn’t you be cuddling with your girlfriend?”
“Rukia isn’t my girlfriend, and she never was.” Renji said and frowned at Ichigo who continued to scowl at him.
“Oh? What would you call her then? Your lover?”
“Tch, never, she’s just a friend I haven’t seen in a long time.”
“Whatever.” Ichigo looked away from Renji with red rising to his cheeks. “It’s not like I care anyways.”
“Oh?” Renji smirked slowly. “But it kind of looks like you do.”
“I don’t!” Ichigo snapped and turned his head to look at Renji again, then inhaled sharply and took a step back when he realized that Renji was right there.
“No?” Renji stared into Ichigo’s eyes and didn’t look away as he took a step forward, forcing Ichigo to move back until his back hit the wall of a building. “I think you do.”
“Renji…” The red head in question braced his hands on either side of Ichigo’s head and shifted closer until his face was inches away from Ichigo’s. “I don’t-” The rest of Ichigo’s words turned into a muffled gasp as Renji pressed their lips together.
Ichigo tensed at first but Renji coaxed him into relaxing with light pressure and gentle flicks up his tongue in between Ichigo’s only slightly parted lips. Renji finally pulled away and caressed Ichigo’s jaw as Ichigo tried to slow his breathing.
“Open your mouth.”
Ichigo groaned as they kissed once more and leaned up to wrap his arms around Renji’s neck and entangled his fingers in Renji’s hair, pulling the tie to let the red mane fall in wild locks around his shoulders. He opened his mouth as Renji requested and moaned as Renji’s tongue slipped in between his lips and began to languidly explore his mouth.
Ichigo uncertainly tried to follow what Renji was doing, but he was quickly overwhelmed and was content to let Renji lead the action, at least at the moment.
They parted again to calm down their heated bodies that were pressing against each other so tightly.
“We shouldn’t do this here.” Ichigo murmured quietly but made no action to move away from Renji. Renji nodded and reluctantly untangled their limbs before slipping his hand in Ichigo’s to tug him forward.
“Let’s go back to the base.”
Ichigo nodded, not trusting himself to speak as fire coiled in his body and his groin ached. The idea of doing anything sexual with Renji made his pulse quicken and he was afraid Renji could hear his heart pounding as close as they were together.
Renji sent him a cocky smirk and Ichigo scowled despite the shiver it sent down his spine. He was going to sleep with Renji.
LINE
The next chapter is the final one, and yes it will contain smut and a full lemon.
Please review!!!