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by CryptJo

schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hah! Wonderfully entertaining. Thanks for sharing this, it brightened my day a little.
person ashpik1
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG Poor Renji! He should of thought it all through alittle more. Nice job.
person Tennak
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uhh! Poor Renji! He would probably be the first to laugh tomorrow!
Your are very skilled in doing these short and enjoyable stories,
please write more of this kind! We need your kind of stortelling!
I humbly bow before your storytelling genius!
Thanks so much for sharing!
^_^
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious! That ending totally caught me! So did the "port in any storm" comment. Reminded me of something my roommate once said to me when I asked for a synonym to "plays on both sides". I liked it very much so.