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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
totally freeking sweet story should totally write a longer one
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September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hm, well, good story. Still, there are some grammatical errors and misused vocabulary (just one of those that I saw), but with some editing and revising it will be fantastic. Very nice visuals! :) (:
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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't like RenXRuk pairings ( I just plain can't stand Rukia, lol) but this one is pretty good. I would love to see where this goes, especially if there's some Big brother trouble thrown in there ^_~
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I like were this story is going and the overall theme. I do have a concern. It seems that maybe you are rushing this. Take you time and fill in the gaps, small details that will help pull the fic together. Other than that keep up the good work and I hope to read from you soon.
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally another RenxRuki story on here. I loved it. I t was a good length and the lemon scene wasn't rushed at all.
I hope she's pregnant too, that would make for one hell of a story.
I hope she's pregnant too, that would make for one hell of a story.