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for Finding Home

by Daydreamer79

person vbruce
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Jealousy, interruptions and Hollows, oh my! Sorry, had to be done. Excellent as always. Looking forward to more.
person Afrieal
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh our fave hangover torture (besides bagpipe music at dawn yes we are that sadistic) is dragging the unsuspecting victem to the local mall and into one of the shops that specialize in perfumes or other strong smelling products or thru the food court *snicker* combo of loud teenagers smells and the lights are killer *grin* (oh and bright sunlight is good too) keep up the great work i'm looking foreward to reading from my home base soon.

je ne
affie (rysh is getting better and said thanks for the well wishes)
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Renji-kun!!! He's getting what he deserves. lol. Go Kira! Make him pay.
Im still loving the story, and its progressing beautifully. I cant wait to see what Izuru-chan has in store for Renji next. ^^
person vbruce
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah hungover people really do provide excellent entertainment. I was always amused when one of my brothers would come home completely sloshed and at about 6 a.m. the other two would bounce on his bed and scream at him to wake him up. Of course, it woke everyone else up as well but that just meant we could join the fun of boozer baiting. Thank you so much, I needed a laugh this morning. Enjoying this as always.
person Yakumo
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Drunk Renji is hilarious..and I'm looking forward to the juicy lemon. ~_^
person satterb
schedule December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I was hoping to see more about Grimm and Ulquiorra, but not in a bad way (wink, wink). Thanks again for updating so quickly...Yay you!
person Jennifer
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
jealous renji=hot renji, heehee

poor kira, but in a good way :D

sorry, i have no idea, but it was before ikkaku joined...that's all i know

please update soon, and keep up the awesome work!
person Afrieal
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry i didn't get a chance to review Rysh was down sick and my 'ka-san's internet was interupted with moving (and an idiot at the cable company that didn't know his head from a hollow hole ah well never thought i'd be grateful to dial up) I sat and read all the updates and went from giggling to drooling to sniffles you're doing a great job. As for the Kenpachi info check bleach exile (don't have the url sorry) I found the info i used for several of my fics there.

Affie
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I just started the story because I had to read "Coming Home' first. ^^; Its was slow going to find time before or after work and trying to write myself. But this is a nice escape. ^^ I love the plotline and even though Im only on chapter two, it looks to be progressing well. Keep up the great work, its awesome!

Oh and a side note: Kira's zanpakutô is male. Wabisuke roughly translates into "miserable man". Im not trying to be a bitch/asshole/whatever you wanna call me or anything. I just wanted you to know. ^^;
person Yakumo
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
xD I love how you made 'zuru act at the club. I could totally see him being all shy and unsure of himself..so adorable. <3

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