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for Finding Home

by Daydreamer79

person Jennifer
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*blinks at last line*

*frowns at last line*

*SOBS*

NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! how could you do that to poor kira-kun???!!!

but i must admit that it makes a good cliff-hanger...*glares and crosses arms defensively*

heehee just kidding, this chapter was great...kira was staring at renji!! :D
person vbruce
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Loved Renji teasing him when he caught Kira staring. Poor Kira, just can't get a break when he's taking a break. Like the kid's name btw. ^_~ Since it's in one of my stories too. Well done as always. Looking forward to more.
person Yakumo
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
xD I love your depiction of Kisuke. I swear he's...perfectly in character. I love Kisuke a lot too by the way..a fic featuring him would be awesome. <3
person vbruce
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was too much fun and I'm frankly stunned that Renji bothered to draw Zabimaru in the first place and didn't just settle for beating the living crap out of Kisuke in the first place. Looking forward to more.
person Jennifer
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good god! renji on the loose! poor kisuke, he was only trying to help...in his own perverted sense

i liked this chapter too, good variation from kira's angstiness :D

nice job
person Jennifer
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was sweet, the world seems to be brightening up for kira, good thing renji stopped him...

i'm in love with this story, and please, coming home is perfect as it is...

and go with urahara please, although hitsugaya is also one of my favorites, please pretty please do kisuke...*^*'

mk, by for now, this is officially my favorite chapter now XD
person Jennifer
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh yes, i do think you should do grimmjow and ulquiorra as well, they had a very interesting relationship when we met them XD
person vbruce
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And we all give thanks for this lovely chapter. Yep, I can see Renji beating the living crap out of Urahara for this one. Nicely done as always.
person Yakumo
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One of the best sex scenes ever written... -faints from nosebleed-
person Jennifer
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved your pics by the way, they were sooooo awesome!

yeah! rejixkira kissing!!! :3 that was a really smokey scene! heehee

love the development in this one, especially when they were fitting the gigais!