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for Finding Home

by Daydreamer79

person Jennifer
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
heehee...hee...he...URAHARA YOU PERV!!! ...but a very smart perv at that... ^-^

yay! lemon! don't be nervous, it was great, seriously

btw, can there be icy steam?
person Afrieal
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful (i snuck on the system before it got torn down for the move *smile*) you're so good at this it's not even funny. Did we remember to tell you about mugwart? (i'm not sure i'm spacey with planning the logistics of moving family members) Anyway it's one of the herbs that can be used in a limited fashion for depression and i think anxiety it might be a good thing for Kira. If we told you about it sorry for the repeat if not you have a new bit of trivia to play with. I'm sorry to tell you i'm not sure if i'll be able to read and review for a few days (maybe even a week or so) i'm moving my Okaa-san and since i'm using her 'puter right now i'm kinda stuck without internet till it's set up *sigh* sometime in the next week.


je ne

Affie
person vbruce
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter. Sorry it's been taking me so long to post reviews, work is really bad just now. Love it as always.
person vbruce
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You would be surprised how much psych sticks with you over the years. I still have bits and pieces of general psych rolling around in my head even though my field is criminal psych. I think Renji's idea of taking Kira out of soul society for a while is a good one. Wonder if Urahara can set them up in a cozy little apartment instead of them being stuck at his place. Excellent as always.
person Jennifer
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very clever, very clever, i like this storyline, more than coming home, i think

this is one of the few stories in which the sequel is just as good or is even better than the original, wonderful job on your part:D

please keep up the great work XD

btw, awesome job with renji, but the byakuyaxgin smutness was better, heehee @.@ *drool*

meh, i had a mistype, sorry i deleted the first review...
person Yakumo
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Izuru and Renji on vacation! Yay!!! <333
person Jennifer
schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooooh o.O wonder what trouble they'll find in Karakura town! heehee

will ichigo or rukia be in here as well?

loved this chap, it's one of the happier ones ^-^

anywho, keep writing your awesomeness
person vbruce
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I think your take on Momo is spot on. And there actually is a school of thought in the psychology field that theorizes it is possibly a modified version of Stockholm syndrome that keeps the abused with the abuser. Often as well it is financial as abusers tend to be controlling on all kinds of levels. Sorry, you don't need a mini psychology course. I can also see Hitsugaya reacting the way he did to Momo's death. Very well done. I'm glad that Renji followed Kira home. Sometimes those who need it most can't ask to be saved. Excellent job.
person Afrieal
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll do that..I have to get Ami (my OC) out of the fuge state that the psychotic mime's poision put her in first... so it will be in two chapters. The chapter hit me hard and made me cry (glad i took the time to have a hankerchief nearby this time) in a good way it reminded me how blessed i am to have my friend and my mate by my side and i'm looking foreward to the next few chapters. thank you again for sharing your vision of the bleach universe.

Affie and Rysh
person Jennifer
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
t'was intense indeed, heehee

poor kira, that last scene (with kira and renji, of course) was very very very sweet! XD

please keep up the wonderful work, this story is really turning into something, hope to read the next chapter soon :D