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momo, how could you do that to toshirou???!!!...but then again, i could totally picture her doing that...

Kira was perfect in this chapter, it was nice that he wasn't...inflicting any bodily harm on himself...heehee

good to see he's recovering, nice update, hope to read more inspiring stuff (though, i think all your work is inspiring, and i mean it)

Aww..poor Momo-chan. I used to hate her but now I kinda like her. Renji's such a sweetie..-glomps him- I hope he takes good care of 'Zuru. <33 I forgot to mention I loved Gin's line about "wanting something salty" for lunch. That was a genius use of words and scenery (since he was going to the 6th division offices. xD) Can't wait for your next chapter! ^o^

Poor Momo. I could see this happening easily with her. Excellent as always.

thank you THANK YOU!! i have a couple chapters to finish before i can include the scene you're letting me use (i'm gonna include it in Odd Bird i think) You're mean for killing Momo but it's an understandable plot *smile* R and I are enjoying your story and hope you keep it up.

Affie and Ry

That chapter was so sweet. Renji and Izuru make such a great couple. <3

oh gods I almost spit cola all over 'ka-san's computer when i read about Kenpachi please put a don't drink warning next time *giggle* i'm just glad my mum was awake when i started laughing so i didn't wake her up i get in more trouble on my visits doing that *smile* anyway i might have to "borrow" that kenpachi dress up for one of my fics if you don't mind *giggle* it'd be fun to try. keep up the great work. Oh and as to the "dark content" I've noticed that love is one of the best ways to help somone that's dysmorphic (that's the term my psych student mate used for cutting) aside from medications and therapy.

Affie (rysh is taking a night off)

AH! gomenasai-gozaimasu!!! i'm soooooo sorry i didn't review yesterday...i kinda fell asleep doing homework, but you don't want to hear about that...

this chapter was magical, sorry, but on the verge of sounding cheesy, it just had this really nice vibe and...it was sweet

i loved how you had kira say 'ichimaru-taichou' to renji

wonderful chap, can't wait for more! :D

Thank you for continuing with this story/universe you have such a great discriptive style it's an easy read. Affie was right your talent keeps growing the more you write.

Rysha and Affie

if you had waited a week, i probably would have died!!! ...but this chapter would have been worth the wait :D

i love how you portray kira's...angst, i can never do that, but it almost made me cry D:

wonderful job, keep up the good work

btw, is there going to be any ginxbyakuya in this fic?

XDDDD Yachiru putting makeup on Kenpachi's face was awesome. I was so happy to see 'zuru laughing..he deserves it. I loved the little Hisagi cameo you had in there. The anime needs MOAR SHUUHEI!! D> Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.