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for Desperation

by Anestshia

person Arual
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Run Ichigo!!!! u have to save ur man!!!!! and im a little confused......are the characters like just normal kids? no soul reaper powers?
person Sindy
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please please continue this T.T
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm hooked. This story is just...wow!! I think I literally stopped breathing for a second at the end of chapter one when Ishida kinda died. I hope there is a chapter 4 to this.
person gaara89
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! You evil!!! How could you end it there!?! This story is great! Please continue as soon as possible. I really need to see how their reunion pans out. Soon please!


~Reigh~
person Sindy
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg uryu wke up, but ichigo knows now T.T what wuill happen you evil one! to stop there T0T
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far your story is great. I was a little upset at first because I had thought Uryuu was dead and you hadn't put the Death warning in your summary. When I finished though, I was like 'Oh, that's pretty good'. I thought it was honestly good since you gave no hint that he was falling asleep at all. That's just my opinion though.

I hope you continue.

~Koala~
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah shit it was a dream!!! scared me there for a second!!!! more please!!!
person kuriqa
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well, so far it's very very intriguing ^^ it makes me want to read more!!!! hurrah for a second chapter!!!! lol...
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person kuriqa
schedule March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY MOTHER FUCKING JASHIN-SAMA ARE YOU SERIOUS!!!!!!!! i was so crying my eyes out and EVERYTHING and just... i couldn't stop crying, even now i still have tears unshed... and then it was all a DREAM?! how cliche... but i'm glad for it ^^ wouldn't want uryuu to really die... at first i thought maybe it was zangetsu as an angel of death or something coming to ichigo and telling him he could go back and change things... that would have made it slightly less cliche, but oh well, this works too!!!! great story and i really really really really can't wait for more!!!! can't wait to see the rest of this develop... did grimmkitty give him a second dose knowing it would kill him? was he trying to dispose of uryuu maybe? like he saw he was wasting away and thought maybe it was far enough and get rid of him before uryuu could spill about him? maybe... hmmmm... we'll see ^^
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person Sindy
schedule March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my i was almost crying (sadly I have a condition at the eyes right now.. and I have cried all day long now when I want to cry i cant DX)

it was so sad, the show of the emotions of ichigo where really deep and i reaaly believe that ishida was dead

thank you for this chappie