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for Underneath his Hands

by ghostraven

person Vyper
schedule April 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is a beautiful story. I wish it was longer.
person Asylus
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I was a total nerd and listened to the song as I read this. Xd
I really liked it. The story, I mean.
It's sweet.
person Yakumo
schedule April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I could totally see Byakuya playing the piano. I thought you did a great job, the only glaring problem I saw was that there weren't many paragraphs and it was kinda like scaling a wall of text. >_< I hope you decide to continue this somehow, it's hard to see it just ending there.