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for The Sweetest Downfall

by Crya2Evans

person Kuromei
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
.... Yay~ 8D

OMG I love this chapter. X3 .... I've loved 'em all so far, but that's beside the point. ^/////^;

Only two more updates left? Wow, that's two fics close to completion for you, isn't it? X3 *sigh* Good times, good times. -//w//- See ya later, Draco-san! *hug*
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohs I cant wait =D I love this story whole lots!!
person Yakumo
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that you made Izuru aggressive when he was kissing Renji. X3
person Anise
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(6) Love the idea of a predatory Izuru, Renji won't stand a chance and he'll have no idea what hit him ;) It's nice to see the progression of Izuru's change he's really starting to remind me of the Kira from the academy days which can only be a good thing :)
Funny that you should use the phrase 'calm before the storm' because the whole time I was reading the chapter I kept thinking how everything's so sweet and perfect and going so well that I couldn't help but wonder what was going to happen to ruin that calm. Can't wait for the next chapter, I think it's going to get very interesting ^_^
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a super sexy chapter!! I love this story so much it makes me so happy Izuru and Renji are so sexy!!!
person Yakumo
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy Renji and 'zuru were able to spend a little fluffy moment together. I'm looking forward to Ichimaru's appearance next time. ^__^
person Kuromei
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, smut! lol X3 I want Izuru to get stronger, too. I'd love to see him give Ichimaru a piece of his mind. Or at least raise his sword to him and keep it steady. X3

Will the mind-games never end? But I still want to see the next chapter. I have to see it! lol X3 See you then. ^w^ *hugs Draco-san*
person Anise
schedule December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(5) I don't even think I could begin to tell you everything I loved about the interaction between Gin and Renji but the way Gin was trying to guide Renji and Kira together and how Renji reacted to him, it was just too good :) Also I like your Kira, he may be hurt and maybe a little lost (who could blame him) but you can see that he still has his strength and confidence he just needs someone to help remind him of his old self. And Renji seems perfect for that job and despite the violence and yelling it seems that the two of them have actually started to make some progress :) Great chapter I really loved it, can't wait for the next one ^_^
person Kuromei
schedule December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, consistent updates are coming! XD *squeak!*

Okay, now that Ichimaru's out of the way, let's get Renji and Izuru together! XD And, as you say closer. lol X3 I wonder what that could mean~ ;3

See ya later, Draco-san! XD *hug*
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH yay im so happy I love this story I cant wait until you update I want Renji and Izuru to live happily ever after teehee ~_^