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for The Sweetest Downfall

by Crya2Evans

person Yakumo
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, 'zuru smells like strawberries and cream. Renji and 'zuru were made for each other, ne?
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There's nothing wrong with writing for yourself, love. *grins* I liked this chapter. Poor Renji, I just wanna grab him up and hide him away sometimes, for his own good.
"Always the knight, never the prince"--that line killed me. And Gin's parting kiss? (I actually LIKE Gin; he's not easy to read at all, and one has to wonder just where KT's going to go with his character development. I can't see him as purely villainous; so what is HIS reason for betraying Soul Society?)
Anyhow, I look forward to the next chapter. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas!
person satterb
schedule December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OK, now it's getting busy. I'm glad you didn't let Renji fall into Kiras abyss. But it was promising to see Renji say "It's not supposed to hurt without feeling good"! Thanks for the great chapter. Ya know, you should write for yourself more often. LOL Thanks again!
person satterb
schedule December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was half expecting Ichimaru to be watching them. LOL Renji's about to get himself into a whole mess of trouble. I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Anise
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
(4) There are times when I wish that we got to know what Gin was thinking because it seems to me he knows way more than he let's on and has even been guiding Renji towards Kira at times. You know he's playing a game but it's always a little hard to pin down exactly what it is that he's getting up to. I'm also kind of curious about how it all ended between Kira and Gin, did he actually say something to him or did he just stop getting together with him. I'm guessing the latter since Kira just seems confused, hurt and lonely - on the plus side he did make a move finally, albeit a drunken one. I wonder if he'll even remember in the morning, the upcoming chapter will definitely be interesting, can't wait for the next update :) Happy Holidays!
person Kuromei
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now it's safe to call him a vice-captain. lol X3 Oh, the things we miss that're right in front of us. XD I've had it happen so many times... lol

But hooray for complications! rofl XD But if Kira liked Renji, why was he playing tonsil hockey with Ichimaru? A kind of "can't be with the one you love, love the one you're with," deal? ..... Oh, I want another chapter already! XD *om nom nom*

And yes, I'm pretty sure Ichimaru changes from fic to fic. X3 But that's not necessarily a bad thing. He's just so... Well, let's call him multi-faceted and easy to interpret in different ways. lol XD I've never seen so much fanfic potential in one man. X3 *hugs Draco-san*
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay I cant wait for Izuru and Renji to get together!! I love this story I am so happy you updated it!
person Yakumo
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I swear, you write the best Gin evar. ^.^ He's awesome!
person satterb
schedule December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, to be a fly on the wall in that room! I love your Ichimaru. The kinkier the better. He's by far my favorite character. I'm really curious to see where you're going to take this story, and what kind of response Kira is going to have to the situation. I look forward to more. Thanks for all your hard work!
person Spacetoy
schedule November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Renji and Gin are my favorite. Hope u can explore their relationship a bit more, so that it doesn't land in the pwp category. I would love to see Renji actually start to like Gin and vice versa..well as much as Gin can like someone lol. But of course i'm not sure where ur going with this exactly, even though Kira is a darling, i'm more for the other two, for I haven't read a pairing of them before, and ur doing a good job. :)