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for The Sweetest Downfall

by Crya2Evans

schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What indeed?

I thought the play between the two was well done and both of them seemed in character. The chapter flowed smoothly as well, which is always a nice thing to see. I find it amusing that Kira is the one coming for the pleasure and it is something I can see in his character. I am definitely interested in the next chapter.
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was really great! Nice characterization of Renji. I eagerly await the next chapter :D

Kay~
person Yakumo
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I adore Kira so much! I'm so happy to see a story where he is one of the main characters. <3
person Kuromei
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O______O More. ..... Please? I'll even get on my knees! I need more! DX *grovels*

It's been a long time since I've read the early volumes of Bleach, so it's a little weird to see Aizen as a "good guy" again. BUT! Since this is before Renji's promotion to vice-captain, I can understand having it in here. XP

I'm rooting for you, Renji! Go get Kira back from that snake bastard! ...Although, that Gin/Renji thing worries me... *hugs Draco-san, then waves an R/K flag*
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg I cant wait for more!! I think I know what doujinshi your talking about I seen it on youtube hmm well I cant wait to see how it goes mmmm Gin is sexy..... o.O
person satterb
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I know exactly which doujin you read that made you write this. I agree, the possibilities of more of the story are great. Thanks for sharing this work. I love your stories, and even though I don't always review, I still read everything.
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You got an excellent piece of work going on here and I think you caught everyone's personality perfectly. I would personally like to see more.
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I really liked this! Ichimaru/Renji sounds really sexy, I cannot wait for more~! Poor Kira, I hope he's not being abused.

Aizen is just so...I don't know, he's just Aizen I guess...I feel like he's setting Renji up. He probably is in cahoots with Ichimaru. This looks really good!

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