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YOU ROCK AUTHOR!!! love this very muchh... thank youuuu for writing this~~ i feel really blessed to have found this fic, tho it was kinda late as i read this in 2016.. still, I can't thank you enough for this fic~~ you did a very good job!! :3

So, I actually read this. I reviews Salvation on ff.net but since this story is only here I'm doing it this way. I said I wasn't going to because of the angst but it actually wasn't that hard to read. Salvation is more angsty than this. Of course I read this because I'm so desperate for more Salvation. I enjoyed this story. I liked how you describe everyone's psychological state and why they're doing things. Orihime was kinda OOC with her violence, which I am only accepting because you explain the reason for how she got to that point, and it makes sense. I liked the Kaien tie in; I always felt like Rukua was crushing on him, and the manga implies her projected feelings every time a new character met Ichigo (well the ones who were close to Kaien like Jushiro and Byakuya) so that as a motivation for Rukia was really well thought out. I would have liked to see Rukia come clean to Ichigo about unfairly using him, because she so owes him a huge apology for that. This story makes me super mad at everyone except Ichigo. It's because Orihime was mad at Ichigo for not giving up control of his body. Like, that's a huge thing to ask of someone, and that she thought it would be okay makes me super mad. Plus everyone overlooks this, and instead focuses on how hurt Orihime might be without thinking about Ichigo. I'm really glad you address this in Salvation because not only was Ichigo used, but people who are supposed to care about him want him to be used. Like they want the Hollow Ichigo more than their long time friend. Anyways I'm writing this on mobile and starting to cramp so I'll end this. I did really like the story despite my criticism, and if you want to reply PM me on ff.net

Soooooo, this was awesome. And I highly, highly suggest you upload it to FF.net. But anyways, you've done a wonderful job, especially for someone who's first language isn't even English! I swear, I had no idea until you said something at the end of the one of the chapters. Thank you... for doing a wonderful job in giving up this. :)

Thanxs! :) :p ;)

I curse you because i stayed up untill three in the morning reading these stories, but i praise for the amazing chapters you took the time to write. I just fucking loved it, now onto Salvation.

Too lazy to log in on my phone, lol.
But I am one of those dreaded shadow readers.....until I hit the end of the story or the end of current updates.
VERY good fic. Loved how Orihime finally got a backbone. I hate the fics where she's walked on throughout the whole thing. And Ogichi is always nice to read about ;)
Good job!!!

Wow! Took time out today and read this entire story start to finish. This story was AH-MAY-ZING. Seriously it's one of the better Orihime centered stories I've read. Outstanding job =)

I loved it!
Never read an Orihime/Hichgo.
It was amazing how Orihime evolved and started to become her own person! Ogichi, interesting name... Loved the little twist with Rukia, not a big fan of hers, but i liked what you did with her character.
One of the best and memorable moments was Orihime bitch slapping Rukia! LOVELY!
well done! Loved how you tied the ending in! One of my favourite fics now!

I just finished reading Reflection and I must admit that it completely rocks! I felt sorry for Ichigo and 'Hime from the beginning, but as things progressed, I started really feeling something for Ogichi (who you have made into a completely rocking character I must say.)

The whole piece is really great. Thanks so much for sharing it with us all. I'm off to read the next piece. :happy dance:

Im sorry i havent been reviewing, got caught up with other things. I just read the last 3 chapters, so good! I loved seeing them getting to know each other in the apartment, it was so cute! And rukia's presence didnt seem awkward to me in the end, it seemed necessary. She is in their circle of friends, and they had to patch things up. Also rukia was the only one i thought might rat ogichi out to the soul society. Well you ended it beautifully, thank you!

It's *sniffle* all *sob* oooover! *cries brokenly*

Thank you very much for such a compelling and heartfelt story. I cannot wait to see more from you and I know that you were thinking about a sequel...with Ulqiorra? If that's wrong, then I'm sorry for the mistake. Either way, I look forward to your other stories!

*bows*