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January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WAHHHH NEEDS SEQUEL!!!!!
D: I miss it already!!!
D: I miss it already!!!
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January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Truthfully. I think this is a perfect ending. Ichigo did ignore her feelings. For years. The only reason he felt anything for her was because of Hichigo. I think the pain he is feeling is something that is to prove that he is human. But I would hope that maybe he got back with Rukia, maybe an encore at another date. I think that would be a good surprise to help them both move on and forgive one another. It would be a good way to show how strong they are for eachother. Every amazing relationship has to have a down fall and all of the stuff that happen with Hichigo and Orihime opened there eyes to look at how they feel more. Great job, I am glad it ended great for the two. Orihime went through enough pain that I think she deserved a happy ending with her lover. Art is soon to come.
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January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
stupid site killed my review when i tried posting (and it was long!!)
i am fine w/ending as is b/c karma is a bitch & if he made her suffer due to his stupidity for years, him feeling the same pain (though i'm sure it won't be years) is just fair.
also there is promise of sequel at some point, so he'll find his bliss at some point in near future in this universe.
there's a fic called 6 ways to say their names or something like that, & its a grimichihime 3some one-shot. it has echoes of what i think a 3some in the reflection universe would be like. i'd expect this hime to try to build a bridge in broken/strained ichi & ogi relationship, & her & ichi of course. they'd bond to point where hime would suggest bringing ichi into fold of her & ogi's relationship (intimacy-wise) & probably be the one that initiates initial seduction (w/ogi as active participant of course). in mentioned fic, grim initiates sex w/ichihime couple, but is confused by emotions post-act, & its hime that reaches out to him, bringing him in fully, accepting him.
even if sequel goes a totally different route, hope some writer out there is inspired to write the 3some version of the characters in reflection universe...
loved the story btw--may be favorite completed multichap hollowichi/hime fic i've read (& i think i've read'em all.)
i am fine w/ending as is b/c karma is a bitch & if he made her suffer due to his stupidity for years, him feeling the same pain (though i'm sure it won't be years) is just fair.
also there is promise of sequel at some point, so he'll find his bliss at some point in near future in this universe.
there's a fic called 6 ways to say their names or something like that, & its a grimichihime 3some one-shot. it has echoes of what i think a 3some in the reflection universe would be like. i'd expect this hime to try to build a bridge in broken/strained ichi & ogi relationship, & her & ichi of course. they'd bond to point where hime would suggest bringing ichi into fold of her & ogi's relationship (intimacy-wise) & probably be the one that initiates initial seduction (w/ogi as active participant of course). in mentioned fic, grim initiates sex w/ichihime couple, but is confused by emotions post-act, & its hime that reaches out to him, bringing him in fully, accepting him.
even if sequel goes a totally different route, hope some writer out there is inspired to write the 3some version of the characters in reflection universe...
loved the story btw--may be favorite completed multichap hollowichi/hime fic i've read (& i think i've read'em all.)
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January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this is not a flame but I hate that I read this story. The only reason I disliked it was because it kinda twisted one of my fav couples. I will always be for ichihime. But I just couldn't stop reading it, it is well written, and oddly believeable, orihimes turmoil was moving and I really felt for her. So much that i felt ichigo got what he deserved. So you are a good writer, I felt I needed to say that. Though I still kinda wish I never started it.
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January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i like fluffy, mushy, lovey dovey stuff between hime & ogi & don't apologize for it. I loved his little inner monologue on all things hime. I didn't care for the rukia section b/c i just can't stand her here--yeah, you're messed up psychologically--fine--still would never let her w/in 50 feet if a real life friend behaved so atrociously.
as far as sequel, still vote for ichihimeogi 3some. yum!
as far as sequel, still vote for ichihimeogi 3some. yum!
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January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cool!I cannot wait! I love this story still lol. Hope to read more soon.
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January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please don't tease about a sequel if you don't mean it--but i highly encourage & hope you do write a part 2.
i loved confirmation chap. the ichi/hichi convo on love was perfect. ogichi's explanation of his feelings was beautiful and blunt and swoon-worthy (wish i had a real guy that passionate!). ichi's realization at last of how shitty his behavior has been & understanding that he has no clue what love is when compared to his hollow was so satisfying to read. still have dreams of a 3some--how about a lemony drabble w/ichi, hime, & ogichi?
given how hime's neighbors are itching to toss her out of building b/c they think she's a floosy, since ogichi is gonna live there, why not at least have them pose as if married so she doesn't have to suffer the whispers & rumors that are sure to follow? she'll take a lot of heat otherwise, and hollow is likely to kill someone if he sees them making her cry.
loved urahara in this chap too btw.
waiting for next 2 chaps w/baited breath (sad it is ending--such an entertaining fic!)
i loved confirmation chap. the ichi/hichi convo on love was perfect. ogichi's explanation of his feelings was beautiful and blunt and swoon-worthy (wish i had a real guy that passionate!). ichi's realization at last of how shitty his behavior has been & understanding that he has no clue what love is when compared to his hollow was so satisfying to read. still have dreams of a 3some--how about a lemony drabble w/ichi, hime, & ogichi?
given how hime's neighbors are itching to toss her out of building b/c they think she's a floosy, since ogichi is gonna live there, why not at least have them pose as if married so she doesn't have to suffer the whispers & rumors that are sure to follow? she'll take a lot of heat otherwise, and hollow is likely to kill someone if he sees them making her cry.
loved urahara in this chap too btw.
waiting for next 2 chaps w/baited breath (sad it is ending--such an entertaining fic!)
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your appreciation. XD The story does get a lot of hits. I just hope people are enjoying it the way you do.
I'm not going to lie, Hollow-san's speech about love made me want to cry a little. It was...touching. Very. I will be very sad to see this end in a couple chapters, but all good things do.
If you do write something with Kisuke, I can assure that I'll be right there reading it. XD
I'm not going to lie, Hollow-san's speech about love made me want to cry a little. It was...touching. Very. I will be very sad to see this end in a couple chapters, but all good things do.
If you do write something with Kisuke, I can assure that I'll be right there reading it. XD
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"I wish someone could do some art for this fic though =( "
I would love to do some art of this fan fiction if I could. Email me please Kauserudk@ymail.com No joke I would love to do some art of this for you so please do email me when you get the chance. I love this story so much, he is soooo cute! all I think of is the song two of the lucky ones...any who great job can't wait to see more!
I would love to do some art of this fan fiction if I could. Email me please Kauserudk@ymail.com No joke I would love to do some art of this for you so please do email me when you get the chance. I love this story so much, he is soooo cute! all I think of is the song two of the lucky ones...any who great job can't wait to see more!
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January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Im glad you didnt change hichigo too much, he still sounds sexy. Wish i could see a pic of him the way you described. I could probably make one by altering a regular hichigo pic lol. And it was so cute seeing him get used to his human body! And hime's reaction was priceless. Looking forward to the next chapter as always.