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January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hurray! an update at last. checked weekly. would have loved if ichi & hichi were able to fuse so hime could be w/both of them--ichi's her first love & while he's been dense for years, he's finally aware of her. ichi/hichi together would meet all her desires/needs. but i guess its not going that way. if hichi gets his own body, then he & hime can have a real relationship (until SS sticks their holier-than-thou hypocritical noses in it). look forward to next chap (and mind-blowing reconciliatory lovin hopefully).
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October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
just wondering if the story would be finished (especially given A.N. about being tired of unfinished dark ichi/hime stories)...
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October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gah! You must continue this soon!
ch20
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September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice!
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September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hurray for hime calling out rukia (despite first having to get beaten down)! Was waiting for this scene with baited breath. Thought the number of physical strikes should have been more equitable but I hope hime's one was a nice solid wollop... will this have an hichiXhimeXichi vibe? just wondering if now that ichi's eyes are opened (and I hope he was conscious during the rukia/hime fight & heard it all, including the fact that rukia went after him only after learning hime loved him) will he really SEE hime & have real feelings for her?
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September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice!
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*puts Rukia on a pike and dances around*
Burn her! Ha ha, just kidding. I actually loved this chapter, but I guess that's nothing new. I loved the way you wrote Rukia going slowly crazy.
His eyes, oh god, the eyes. *shivers*
Perfect!
Burn her! Ha ha, just kidding. I actually loved this chapter, but I guess that's nothing new. I loved the way you wrote Rukia going slowly crazy.
His eyes, oh god, the eyes. *shivers*
Perfect!
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice!
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's P.ours and thanks for reviewing my fic, so sweet any how on an important note your two last chapters BLEW ME AWAY. How bad I wanted Rukia to find out this way and I knew it that she had an affaire with Kaien. Woah good one. I am impressed with this storyline I kind of dont want it to end.
Posase bring moré!
Posase bring moré!
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
my review is longer than your chap--almost.
Wow, short but AWESOME chapter. The reveal at last & confrontation was flawless ('cept wish hime had not been slapped, rather shiro steps in & saves her in my imagination). Still want someone to call Rukia out on her f'd up behavior--hime is too nice to do it, & shiro isn't in control, but now that the sh't has hit the fan, maybe tatsuki or one of the other nakama can provide rukia w/an accurate presentation of how f'd up she was, objectively speaking. Some lessons need to be painful, & right now even though she had that brief mental insight of the now occurring b/c of past affair, she seems to be very easily deflecting the blame again. To call hime a whore for behavior that is less grievous than her own is an order of magnitude greater than calling her a hypocrite (don't know enough vocab to find what is worse than regular hypocrite label). Love how you write the characters & their internal thoughts/emotions--makes them really easy to imagine & 3-dimensional. Please let poor shiro/hichi catch a break--him I'm very sympathetic towards, despite how harsh he can be w/hime--that's just their kink, but he clearly cares for her in his own way--her sadness is like acid to him--love that imagery. Great job.
Wow, short but AWESOME chapter. The reveal at last & confrontation was flawless ('cept wish hime had not been slapped, rather shiro steps in & saves her in my imagination). Still want someone to call Rukia out on her f'd up behavior--hime is too nice to do it, & shiro isn't in control, but now that the sh't has hit the fan, maybe tatsuki or one of the other nakama can provide rukia w/an accurate presentation of how f'd up she was, objectively speaking. Some lessons need to be painful, & right now even though she had that brief mental insight of the now occurring b/c of past affair, she seems to be very easily deflecting the blame again. To call hime a whore for behavior that is less grievous than her own is an order of magnitude greater than calling her a hypocrite (don't know enough vocab to find what is worse than regular hypocrite label). Love how you write the characters & their internal thoughts/emotions--makes them really easy to imagine & 3-dimensional. Please let poor shiro/hichi catch a break--him I'm very sympathetic towards, despite how harsh he can be w/hime--that's just their kink, but he clearly cares for her in his own way--her sadness is like acid to him--love that imagery. Great job.