rate_review Reviews

You're not being too harsh on her at all! I actually think that this is too damn realistic. Everyone is acting/responding as I would imagine them doing. I'm glad you like my image of her on a pike. XD

Also, Ulqiuorra! Omg, I can't wait to read that one. I'll be sad when this one finishes, but all good things must come to an end.

You've done so beautifully well. I'm sure your next will be nothing but spectacular!

Aw, I really like this story. It's one of those stories that get me more and more curious at every chapter! Keep up the good work!

Well, in reference to rukia in this fic, knowledge she was the "other woman" in the past w/a married man--not even a boyfriend, but a husband, makes her pain at moment her karmic due. I already thought she had it coming for going after a man she knew her friend was in love w/especially w/hindsight knowledge that ichi was dense as poop & just hadn't "seen" orihime before. W/o rukia chasing him, he probably would have ended up w/ori. So now its doubly offensive w/knowledge of affair. So, hard to be sympathetic. She may not be evil, but her behavior was f'd up, so she's now feeling the pain her actions inflicted on the women that were supposedly friends. Repeat, really hard to feel sympathy, its more like satisfaction of cosmic payback (though only in fic do people really get what they deserve, unfortunately). Can't wait for next chap.

Holy cow, English is your 2nd language?! No kidding. You write so well; like you were born in an English-speaking country.

Anyway, more please! I want more juicy smut! *lips smacking*

Whooohoo another update! I swear I feel happy to see your fic come a long way from it's small beginning to become this full blown drama packed fic. I really look forward to your continuation.

Well I'm going to be honest I was hoping for Ichigo to get some real action with Orihime but you said before that it is too late for him, understandable but sad. Oh I wish! and the certain struggle is now coming around it's self and it's quite sad to see all the people surrounding Orihime break their minds to see what is going on with her and the hollow. I'm just confused as to the Hichigo's true intentions (does he have more than lust for her?)

And the threesome...heck yea that sounds deliciously deviant! Have the best of both worlds, Orihime will most likely die of bliss. Well however which you go with your story is fine by me because Your style is very realistic and sexually explosive I think we all feel like we need to have a cigarette after ready your fics.

Have fun and can't wait for the next chapter.

P.s can I guess the guy Orihime is going to end up with NOT be Ulquiorra or something like that because that would just ruin the whole show. I'm tired of seeing this pairing. -_-#

very interesting pairing! 17 soon!

I think I nearly fainted from the dream.

Poor Ichigo could never be as sadistically sexy as Hichigo, though. He could try but it just wouldn't be the same and everyone knows it... Except Ichigo, lol.

I actually liked this chapter a lot. It was good to see Tatsuki and Ichigo talking it out and the little delegation was much-needed.

Thanks for the update!

Hmm, can't wait for the next chapter!

Man, now what will happen next?!

Hm, now Ichi's getting obsessive over Orihime! Nice!