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Wooo! Update!

I don't think he deserves her, either, but a little part of me keeps saying, "He should find a way to take her to his inner world and then they can have a threesome!"

Then I'm sane again and root for Hollow-san! He's so deviously sexy. I like how you described what brought him 'into existences' for Orihime. I could feel the darkness in her soul.

I love this fic. <3

this fic...first time ive properly read a ShirosakixOrihime smut fic and hot dang. All the negative emotions here...the anger, the betrayal, the angst, the darkness, the suspense...aaaaaaaaaaaaaah all this darkness makes my heart wail in joy and my skin tingle in delight! Its been ages since ive read such a nice non-fluffy smutlet! CARRY ON MY FRIEND! :D More hate, anger, rage and all the other negativity! This fic is one HELL of a dark roller coaster ride! :D And i love that even with alllll the shit storm goin on, the characters are still more or less IC. Now for THAT, you deserve cookies. A WHOOOOOLE truck full of em :D

Bravo yet again for another amazing chapter!

Your abilitity to deliver angst laced chapters in high quality at record speeds astonishes me. Not many authors can do that at all. Well yes this time the last two chapters are going at an even pace and everyone ESPECIALLY Orihime is IC so great job for everything. I really wonder how long this fic is going to to run because if you say Rukia will find out in a couple of chapters then there will be alot of *private* time for Hichigo and Orihime.

This story is so great I'm on my toes wondering what will happen next, honestly my brain is running in circles trying to figure out how this is going to end, but know you it will most likely end like a favorite soap full of drama, suspense and the ocasional treat of sex (threesome?)

Thanks if it weren't for you I would've given up Hichi/Ichi x Orihime due to the lack of interaction lately.

ch13 & 14 rocked again. agree w/one of your reviewers about getting kick out of hichi's hatred of rukia's scent, and just being revolted by her in general. your description of his reaction is almost like mine whenever i come across yet another ichiruki fanfic or opinion piece. poor hichi has to force himself to act so opposite of how he wants to its funny. storage room sex is hot & dangerous. I was expecting uryuu to walk in worried that ori had been gone too long. guess he may walk in next chapter and find her still w/legs spread & leaking fluids. that would be horrible! I see now how badly ori wants to let her inner wanton sex goddess out after being repressed, happy face, put others before herself orihime. again, really want the girl to have a happy ending, even if just in fanfic (what manga does to her is criminal!). and of course, glad to hear rukia (and ichi) will get a well-earned lesson in here at some point (and hopefully it will be suitable painful as payback for the grief they have caused). kudos to your imagination!

It's getting interesting! I'd like to see what'll happen next!

ok. kudos for this fic & for updating quickly. personally, ichiruki makes me vomit. don't know why--don't hate rukia, just can't stand the pairing. seeing conflict in that rel'ship makes me smile. i so want them both to acknowledge to themselves their own guilt in creating situation where orihime would go for hichigo. rukia went for ichi knowing ori was in love w/him forever--makes her a bitch and a half, since she was supposedly her friend. ichi only notices her when hollow makes a play for ori, then is so harsh after learning of their hookup. Its not like ori could have fought him off anyway, so part of her may just have convinced herself she wants it too to make situation more palatable in moment. rape trauma is no joke, so rationalizations would be less scarring. lastly poor ori just wants to be loved, by anyone, and hichigo was only one paying attention to her, so no one has right to be so judgy. I hope there's a happy ending in here for ori, and suffering for rukia (in fic, again, not manga rukia). if people don't like hichihime pairing then don't read fic, but to say it should be boycotted is ridiculous. keep on writing & we'll keep on reading....

This is so awesome! I love how you go into detail during the smut! I love this pairing!!! More please!

ch13

I found Hichigo's insight in this chapter surprisingly... well, insightful, for him.

Seeing him interact with Rukia cracks me up. I know it's not meant to be funny (or maybe it was), but I love how he can't stand her scent and just her in general. I heartily agree with, but still feel bad about her finding out about what's going on.

I absolutely LOVED Ichigo's jealousy and hope you're right about the next chapters. XD

Also, I like how Tatsuki was the only one paying attention enough, outside of Rukia, to notice the subtle differences in Ichigo/Hichigo's mannerisms. The fact that she knows it's Ichi's Hollow just adds to the suspense.

Sorry for the long review! Can't wait for the next update! <3

Ugh, that was so incredibly hot. Storage room sex. *drools and goes to smoke a cigarette*

Also, you left yourself in bold there. ^_~

That was just soooo hot!

Nice! I like!