rate_review Reviews

Wow, first and foremost this has become my absolutely favorite fic to follow. Everything about screams sexual angst and the way it's written makes it even better. I have to admit at first it didn't impress me but with every new chapter it just grew on me until chapter ten. Then I knew this fic had some serious potential, it is so sexually charged but tastefully written. I have to say you've done a great job.

Only qualms I have is Tatsuki's hostility towards ichigo, don't forget that he does have a special place in her heart but more as a older brother type of way. So even if she did punch him before it wasn't just all about Orihime dissapering it also had to do a big deal of Ichigo not connecting with her as they useto before he became a shinigami.

First off, I'm sorry I missed reviewing last chapter, but damn was it worth the wait! Ichigo's jealousy-caused angst is a beautiful, beautiful thing.

I can't wait to see what Hollow-San does now. And I kind of feel bad that Rukia's gonna find out. I dint like them as a pairing because Rukia bugs the absolute shit outta me, but she's gonna be crushed.

I eagerly await the next update!

Hmm, it's dark yet very good. I like!

Ha! With all that sweet Hichigo action, I completely forgot about the shirt.

But as for Orihime's first time, I thought you did well. Every woman's experience is different.

Damn, Hollow-San is one sexy beast. Thanks for the incredibly hot chapter!

Ah! What a cliffie! *hangs on the edge*

And don't worry! No trouble for me at work. I use my phone. >_>

:D Can't wait for the update! Thanks!

wow, I read your AN and you're super lucky your boss didn't fire you for reading fics at work! there is so much electronic monitoring of employees these days. anyhow, I'm not sure what triggered that AN (was someone talking trash about this fic? I honestly can't think why they would do this...it's a hollow ichigo fic, so you should pretty much know what to expect coming into it...)

Assuming you even deal with the future between the character (as opposed to ending the fic at pure sex) I do wonder what's going to happen with Ichigo going forward...even if they are technically 2 separate personalities, I don't think it's going to fly with Rukia to "share" her BF. And now that Ichigo has seen Orihime in a sexual light, I'm not sure if he can really suppress that anymore. (I've never really been able to stomach the idea of Ichigo and Rukia together anyhow, but I can overlook the pairing as long as it's not the main focus of the story).

How can they flame it? It's such an awesome story. Make it as controversial as you want! I can handle it!

I loved this chapter and think I should have waited and not read it at work, but oh well! Looking forward to the next update!

I am very sorry to hear that someone caused you to dislike yournown work. I'm assuming it has something to do with your Grim/OC fic, though I don't know why people insist on flaming or bashing. Don't like, don't read, yeah? I hope continue writing both fics at your own pace, so you don't get tired of either of them.

Anyway, enough of that. A slow, but necessary chapter, I feel. It makes me wonder how much Orihimi effects Hichigo since he's "sitting beside her and 'quietly' talking to her." I'm interested to see if she freaks or if she goes mute from fear. Thanks for the update!

Kinky is always, always better. I like the reflection for Hichigo. It's a welcome change.

Can't it just?! *sighs happily* I liked this chapter. I really think you did well. You really nailed Orihime ((ha ha! Couldn't help it)) and her false brightness. Now, bring on the drama so we can ge back to smexy Hichigo and more smexy warnings to Ichigo to STAY AWAY. XD