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By: Gabby18
folder Bleach › Het - Male/Female
Rating: Adult +
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Desire and All good plans…

AUTHOR: Gabby0214
TITLE: Surprise! Chapter 12
RATING: M/ NC 17
PAIRING: RenIchi and other pairings
WARNING: Language, Sexual Innuendo, Boy Sex, Yaoi
SUMMARY: Ichigo’s 20th Surprise Birthday, Desire and All good plans…
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Bleach, wish I did! All persons written in my stories are above the age of 18. This is a fan fiction based on fictional characters that have grown older, and are of legal age. Ichigo in this story is 20.
ADDITIONAL INFORMATIION: Karin in this story is 18, I know she would not be 18, but please understand I added her to the story after already coming up with Ichigo’s age. What can I say Writer’s Liberties, I guess.
BETA BY: Vindictivefreak


Surprise
Chapter Twelve


Author’s note: This chapter takes place in two locations. Upstairs with Ichigo and Renji and Downstairs with the Group of Friends.

Upstairs in Ichigo’s Apartment:

After a few moments Ichigo lifted his head and looked at Renji, “So how do ya want to do this?” with his arms still lightly wrapped around Renji. Renji’s eyebrow arched at the question and smirked. Ichigo realized that hadn’t come out right. He brought his hand up and ran it through his hair. “Shit, I didn’t mean that I don’t know how to…” Ichigo blushed causing to Renji snicker. “Damn it, I meant who’s the seme and who’s going to be the uke.”

Renji brow creased in contemplation for a couple of seconds, “Which do ya prefer, Ichi?”

“Huh,” Ichigo eyes opened wide at the question, “me? What do I prefer?” He bit down on his lower lip nervously. “Umm, it doesn’t matter.”

Renji was puzzled by Ichigo’s reaction so he asked, “Ichigo, what’s goin on?”

“What nothin, why do ya think something is goin on?” he said harshly. His hands fell from around Renji’s waist.

Renji backed away from Ichigo and stared skeptically at him, “Oh, I get it.”

“Nani?” Ichigo sneered.

“Ya still a virgin, Ichi?” Renji asked carefully looking Ichigo directly in the eyes.

“I, uh,” breaking the eye contact as he looked away to stare at the bed, “what if I am? Does it make any difference?” Ichigo muttered.

Meanwhile Downstairs in the Billiards Room:

“Since that is agreed upon, let’s get back to business, how many of you will be attending tonight?” Toru asked over the speaker phone.

“Where are we going?” inquired Ishida who wasn’t around when Ichigo has asked everyone about going to Toru’s club.

Karin turned to face him and answered, “Ishida-san, Toru was so nice to invite Ichigo and all of us to go to his club.”

“Oh, arigato Toru-san, but I don’t think…”

Being interrupted by Orihime, “Ishi, come on it will be fun!”

“Didn’t I ask you not to call me that in public.” Ishida pleaded with Orihime.

“Gomen nasai (sorry) Uryuu,” giggling Orihime. “But I really, really, want to go!” while running her hand down his back to his ass and squeezing the cute round cheek.

Rolling his eyes, “Inoue, am I ever going to win with you?”

“Nope, but it’s cute when you try, Ishi!”

Ishida stood there shaking his head back and forth and gave into the inevitable, “Fine, we’ll go, but please stop calling me Ishi okay Inoue.”

“Hai!” she answered with a little grin on her face.

Upstairs:

Renji cupped Ichigo’s chin and made him look at him. “Ichi, I’m not gonna lie to ya. Hai, it does make a difference.” Ichigo just gaped back at him, his eyes flooded with emotion and uncertainty. “But not how ya think it does. I still want ya. It’s just…, it being your first time it should be special.”

“But this is special,” Ichigo interrupted.

Renji smiled sweetly back at him, “I know it is, but what I mean is we should take our time and savor the moment.”

“So what does that exactly mean?” Ichigo glimpsed at him hesitantly.

“It means that right now we don’t have that kinda time, but that doesn’t mean that we can’t have any fun!” Renji grinned as he ran his hand over Ichigo’s erection.

“Oh, …ohhh,” Ichigo sighed, his eyes fluttering closed.

Downstairs:

Watching the two lovebirds interact made Karin smile, she quickly glanced at Toushirou and returned to back to the conversation on the phone. “So including Ishida-san and Orihime-san that makes it fifteen, Toru.” She stated.

“Good, good I’ll make sure you’re expected at the door. You remember the drill, right?” And before giving her a chance to answer Toru said, “Well, if you don’t I know GrimmJow does. So it shouldn’t be an issue.”

Karin peered at GrimmJow in shock. “You’ve been to his club, Cookie?” she asked flabbergasted.

Upstairs:

Renji seized Ichigo’s mouth and thrust his tongue through the captured lips as he brought his hands to Ichigo’s shoulders. He pushed Ichigo backwards onto the bed. Ichigo landed with his heals pressed into his ass raising his hips at a higher angle towards Renji, his arms flung out over his head with Renji bent over him. Renji discontinued the kiss, realizing that he just placed Ichigo in an awkward and most likely an uncomfortable pose. “Ah, sorry did I hurt ya?” he asked concerned giving Ichigo room to change his position.

“Nah, I’m fine.” Ichigo responded not bothering to move.

“But that looks very uncomfortable, fuckin hot, but uncomfortable.” remarked as Renji ogled the strawberry.

“Did ya forget that I’m extremely flexible, Ren?” he answered with a gleam in his eye.

“Ichi, I don’t think I’ll ever forget that,” with a sly smile, “I just didn’t full realize the full application of it.” Renji said smugly as he leaned forward and licked the tip of Ichigo’s cock.

Downstairs:

GrimmJow actually blushed and retaliated, “Yeah, Ichigo dragged my ass there twice.”

They heard laughter coming from the phone, both asked at the same time “Nani?”

“Did she just call you, Cookie, Grimm?”

GrimmJow face became cherry read, “Oh, FUCK!” he spat. “Don’t ya go thinkin you can call me that, ya fairy!”

“That wasn’t very nice, Grimm. Just for that I won’t let you tie me up this time.” Toru replied in a low deep seductive voice that literally sent shivers down everyone’s spine.

“What the hell?” hollered GrimmJow, “I never did that!”

Upstairs:

“Fuck!” Ichigo groaned as he watched the red head.

“Mmm, I always knew ya would taste good.” Renji murmured smirking at the strawberry.

“God, Renji!” Ichigo gasped.

“Ya know, it’s kinda of a shock that you’re still virgin, Ichi.”

Ichigo raised his head and balanced himself on his elbows peering at Renji, “why?’

“Cause ya seem very, umm, popular with the guys. And the way ya dance, it’s amazing.”

“Ya like my dancing?” Ichigo asked looking pleased

“Well yeah,” Renji blushed.

“About being a virgin, I might still be a one but, that doesn’t mean I’m innocent, ya know.” Ichigo said with a grin upon his face.

“Really!” Renji responded cocking his eyebrows.

Downstairs:

“Grimm, or should I say, Cookie, that hurts that you would deny our love.”

GrimmJow was completely losing it, “Give me the God damn phone, Karin”

Making a grab for it while Toru continued on, “Oh, remember what we did the last time? God I’m getting hard just thinking about it.”

Karin yelped and pulled away from GrimmJow, and ran away yelling, “Tell us more Toru, us Yaoi girls want to hear it all! “

All the rest of the girls in the room, including Yumichika, screamed “YES, want more!”

Upstairs:

Ichigo rolled his hips to his right side stretching out his legs freeing them from underneath him. “It’s not like I haven’t had the opportunity. It was my choice to stay one.” he stated to Renji.

Renji asked, “So you’re sayin ya never been tempted?” as he swung his leg over Ichigo’s stretched out legs, straddling him.

“No, baka, that’s not what I’m saying.” Ichigo cracked.

“So ya have been tempted.” Renji’s hands started to roam over Ichigo’s body.

“Uh, yeah. There was this guy and we were both drunk and things got a little out of hand, but thank god we both came to our senses.”

“Would that guy be, Toru?” as he bent forward and licked Ichigo’s nipple.

“Mmm,” softly moaned Ichigo. “Why, are ya jealous Ren?” he asked trying to not give in to Renji’s ministrations, but at the same time running his hand through Renji’s hair. “No, Toru and I have a different kind of relationship.”

“Want ta expand on that?” Renji prodded lightly biting the nub.

“Ggodd,” biting down on his lip, “not really.” Ichigo gasped.

Renji replied, “Okay,” then tugged the nipple between his teeth. He released the taunt nub and murmured into his chest, “what about the guy ya almost had sex with. Whose he?”

“Shit,” groaned Ichigo beginning to give into the slow torture and sputtered, “I can’t tell ya.”

Renji lifted his head an asked, “Why not, ya don’t remember?”

Ichigo’s hand slid from Renji’s locks and glided over his shoulder, “No, we made a promise to each other not ta say anything to anyone; we both realized what a mistake it was. And since he’s straight and all…”

“I see.” nodding in understanding while moving to the neglected nipple.

“Why are we talking,” Ichigo flung his head back gasping for air as Renji sucked in his nipple harshly, “about my non existent sex life anyways?”

Renji let go of the moist nipple moving forward towards Ichigo answering, “Cause I’m curious about my strawberry?”

Ichigo lifted his head imploring, “your strawberry!”

Downstairs:

“Always knew there was a reason you liked the club Karin-san! “ cackled Toru in response. ‘Well, what would you guys like to know? How good he is in bed? The size of his cock? Or how he whimpers when you lick his ear?”

“What the FUCK!” screamed GrimmJow pulling at his hair.

“How good is he, oh, and what about the size?” Screamed Rukia

GrimmJow spun around and snapped, “Rukia! What?”

She looked sheepishly back at him, “Wouldn’t hurt to know?”

“I never fucked him! I don’t swing that way?” he snapped and resumed his pursuit of getting a hold of that damn phone.

Toru mentioned “That’s not what Ichigo told me, Cookie.” He teased while listening in on the phone.

GrimmJow stopped abruptly in his tracks from his pursuit of Karin and responded with a,

“Huh,” completely caught unaware by the statement. Thoughts started swirling through his mind, Would Ichigo have…? Nah, he wouldn’t! But how did…? This bastard is just playing with me. “Stop the shit, Toru? I really mean it!” growled GrimmJow.

“Ahh, your no fun GrimmJow, I know your as straight as an arrow.” Pouted Toru through the cell phone.

Making Ishida ponder, was that a barb at me? No, he doesn’t know I’m a Quincy.

Upstairs:

“Ya heard me, MY Strawberry!” replied Renji as he locked his lips with Ichigo. The kiss was dominating, demanding, asserting his claim. Renji was imprinting himself forever to the birthday boy. Abruptly Renji broke the kiss and slowly moved off of Ichigo and scooted back on the bed.

In a hoarse tone, Renji commanded, “Spread em’, Ichigo!”

Ichigo quickly complied with Renji’s order. Renji proceeded to bend his head to the side and maneuvered to the base of Ichigo’s cock letting Ichigo see his eyes. Renji’s hair cascaded over Ichigo’s inner thigh, and he closed his eyes and waited. He let his warm breath caress over the base of the strawberry’s arousal.

Ichigo bit down on his lip to keep from moaning as he felt the warm air brush against him. “Oh god, Ren, ya like teasin me?” Ichigo choked.

Renji’s eyes opened and pierced the substitute shinigami’s gaze with a lustful glare. With the tip of his tongue, Renji swept up the underside of Ichigo’s shaft to the mushroom head.

“Damn, that feels so good.” whimpered Ichigo as he watched Renji tease the shit out of him.

Renji teased, “What ya think, Ichigo?” answering Ichigo back.

“More Renji, I want more,” pleaded Ichigo.

“What’s the magic word, Ichi?” licking around rim of Ichigo’s throbbing cock.

“FUCK!”

“Nope, ain’t it.”

“Please…please more god dammit!” yelped Ichigo grabbing for Renji’s head to bring that tantalizing mouth back to his swollen arousal.

“Good boy!” snickered Renji letting Ichigo pull him down. Renji engulfed the head into his mouth rolling his tongue around and over the tip of Ichigo’s dick.

Downstairs:

Everyone heard over the cell, “Who are you picking on now, Toru?

“Oh, you caught me, I was just picking on GrimmJow, he’s Ichigo’s friend I told you about.” saying the word friend as if it had an entirely different meaning.

“You mean the hot straight one you mentioned? Oh, is Ichigo coming by tonight? I haven’t seen him for awhile.” said the stranger.

“Hai, and he’s bringing his friends and Renji!”

“We get to meet the elusive Renji?

“Who ya talking to Toru?”, and why does his voice sound familiar, inquired GrimmJow.

“Oh, gomen nasai (sorry) guys this is my partner Ryuu. Ryuu say hi to Ichigo’s friends.” Toru said.

Upstairs:

“Ya killin me,” Ichigo stuttered when he got his breath back.

“Hmmm”, was Renji’s only reply as he slid his mouth over the stiff, hard cock.
Ichigo was instantly overwhelmed by the sensations coursing through his body. Renji’s hot, moist mouth surrounding and sliding acrossed his aching flesh was driving him to the brink of madness. Hoarse moans and growls were expelled from his throat. Ichigo tried to thrust his hips deeper into molten heat, but Renji held them down. Ichigo watched as Renji’s head bob up and down over him while his long hair brushed his sensitive skin. The combined sensations of the actions bringing him so funkin close to exploding, and then Renji gently scrapped his teeth over him.

“Ren, I’m so close, so very close!” mewed Ichigo.

Downstairs:

“Konnichiwa (Hello) everybody! Toru, I actually came over here because they’re having a problem in the back that needs your personal attention. (wink, wink)” flirted Ryuu.

“Oh, really, MY personal attention.” Talking back into the phone, “Well, duty calls. Nice talking with all of you. It’s been entertaining. I’ll see ya all later. Oh, and Karin can you make sure everyone’s attired properly for this evening.” trying quickly to get off the phone.

“Not a problem,” answered Karin, “have fun, Toru!”

“I always do!” he laughed hanging up the phone.

Upstairs:

Renji immediately slipped off his throbbing cock, and gripped it pumping rigorously.

“Ren, whhyyy?” whimpered Ichigo.

“I wanta see ya, Ichi” growled Renji. “Come on, cum for me,… just let go!” pumping harder, faster. “Howl for me!”

Ichigo just couldn’t, had to …, flinging his head back and screamed, “Rrrennji!” as he burst into a million pieces. As he came his reiatsu blasted through out the room.

Taking it all in, Renji was riveted by Ichigo’s orgasm. He’s absolutely funkin beautiful when he cums. “God Ichi, ya don’t know how much I have dreamed of seeing that.” Renji expressed.

Ichigo laid there with his eyes closed, his chest heaving, and smiled. “Renji that was…,” his body still in overdrive, “ ..amazing!”

“Glad ya enjoyed it,” Renji smirked as he made is way over and gently caressed Ichigo’s face.

Ichigo’s eye parted and gazed at him, “Just give me a sec, and then it’s my turn to watch!”

Back Downstairs:

Toushirou asks out loud, “What kind of club did we agree to go to?”

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