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Surprise

By: Gabby18
folder Bleach › Het - Male/Female
Rating: Adult +
Chapters: 15
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Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach, nor the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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First Kiss

AUTHOR: Gabby0214
TITLE: Surprise! Chapter 13
RATING: M/ NC 17
PAIRING: RenIchi and other pairings
WARNING: Language, Sexual Innuendo, Boy Sex, Yaoi, OOC
SUMMARY: Ichigo’s 20th Surprise Birthday, First Kiss
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Bleach, wish I did! All persons written in my stories are above the age of 18. This is a fan fiction based on fictional characters that have grown older, and are of legal age. Ichigo in this story is 20.
ADDITIONAL INFORMATIION: Karin in this story is 18, I know she would not be 18, but please understand I added her to the story after already coming up with Ichigo’s age. What can I say Writer’s Liberties, I guess.
BETA BY: Vindictivefreak

To all those who have read and reviewed thank you! I’m so glad you’ re enjoying the story!

Surprise
Chapter Thirteen


All of a sudden everyone felt Ichigo’s reiatsu flare through the room. Most of them just stood there frozen by the powerful blast and when it finally subsided, Matsumoto made the comment, “I don’t think we have to worry about those two anymore,” which was met with a round of laughter.

After recovering from the powerful spiritual pressure and laughter, Karin addressed Toushirou’s question concerning Toru’s club. “It’s a dance club with a kick.” Karin smiled at Toushirou. “I’m thirsty after that lug head,” pointing at GrimmJow, “chased me around. You want to get a drink?”

“The sounds fine, but how about we do one of those body shots and make it interesting,” he asked.

“Ya, want to do a body shot,” she staggered looking at him.

“Isn’t that what I said Karin?” Toushirou smugly stated.

“Well, yeah.” scowled Karin. “But who’s going to do the shot?”

“We both can if you like?” Toushirou answered with a gleam in his eye.

“Well, I guess that’s fair then.” shrugging her shoulders. “I’ll just go get the drinks,” Karin mumbled nervously. She wasn’t really comfortable with doing body shots. It would mean she would have to take off her top since she wasn’t as well endowed as some of the other girls in the room. But she didn’t want to miss the opportunity of seeing Toushirou with his shirt off again, and this time she would be able to taste that beautiful skin.

Karin started to walk over to GrimmJow to ask if he would help with the drinks when she noticed he was in a conversation with Rukia that was getting very heated.

Rukia turned to GrimmJow, “Why are you moping?”

Grimm faced her and sneered, “Why! Ya need to ask me why? After that asshole did what he did? And you! You didn’t help. You actually encouraged that fruit cake! “

“Well, I was just going along with the moment, Grimm. Don’t get your panties in a twist.” She secretly hoped he would stop with this line of questioning.

“What ya saying I wear panties?” snapped GrimmJow still sensitive because of what Toru had just done.

“It’s an expression, ya boke!” Rukia snapped back.

“Whatever…let’s get back to you encouraging Toru! Why did ya wanta know the answers to those questions?” Ha, the shoe is on the other foot now!

“Damn, Grimm, or should I say Cookie,” sneered noticing Karin walking over to them from across the room. “I was just playing.”

“Is that all it was, really?” Grimm asked as he followed her line of sight and saw Karin slowly approach them. He smiled to himself, hmm, the plan is working she’s getting jealous! Maybe I should take this to the next step. He stepped closer to her so Rukia focused her attention back to him and smirked, “Cause if ya weren’t I would mind showin ya the answers.” He said in a husky voice.

Rukia blanched, “I, umm, …how the hell am I suppose to answer that!” as she regaining her stature and snapped.

GrimmJow smirked and stepped even closer now only mere inches separated them, “A simply yes would do!” Reaching out and capturing her chin, he leaned down and kissed her.

Rukia was floored and just stood there in shock! She didn’t return the kiss, and when GrimmJow pulled away she realized he was examining her. He had a look of confusion and sadness on his face. She quickly recovered and tried to express why she didn’t react, “I, ah, I’m sorry you just caught me by surprise.”

And in a very gentle voice he asked, “So ya ‘kay with this?” His finger tips lightly caressed her cheek.

“Hai, I’m okay with it.” Rukia answered and GrimmJow beamed and kissed her again. This time she kissed him back, she opened up for him and the tongues glided with one another in a slow sensuous tango. Everyone around them openly gaped at the pair. Karin just smiled and turned away to get the drinks on her own. The couple slowly broke away from each other and noticed those staring at them. Rukia blushed and GrimmJow stood there like the cat that caught the canary.

Karin went about making the drinks when she was approached by Chad who asked, “What are you doing Karin-san?”

Karin replied, “Shado, I’m making shots for Toushirou and I,” as she took a bottle from the counter.

Chad was very concerned and stated in his mono tone, “I don’t think Ichigo would want you to do body shots Karin-san. I can not allow you to do that.” He stated reaching out for the bottle she was holding.

Karin head shot up and glared at Chad. “Nani! You’re not my keeper Shado,” snorted Karin

Chad looked down at her. “Karin-san please do not get upset, I’m only doing what Ichigo would want me to do. Plus you are like family to me and I just can not allow you to do this.” Chad took the bottle from her grasp.

“Men, why do you always think ya have to protect me! I can take care of myself! Damn it!” Karin slammed down the glass she was holding in her other hand and growled, “Ah, I can’t take it anymore!” Karin spun and kicked Chad as hard as she could in the shin. Chad stood there and acted like he didn’t feel a thing while Karin bent over and grabbed her foot grimacing in pain.

“Karin-san are you hurt?”

“Of course not, ya dumbass!” Karin yelled as her face twisted in agony.

“Sorry Karin-san!” apologized Chad.

“What ya sorry for, sorry for being a dumbass.” sneered Karin looking up at him
still holding her aching foot.

“Sorry for you hurting your foot.” Chad answered her back.

Karin threw her hands in the air in aggravation unconsciously dropping her sore foot to the ground. She squealed, “I told you I’m not hurt, are you deaf!”

“Sorry.” mumbled Chad biting his lower lip trying not to laugh at Karin.

“If you say sorry again Shado I’m gonna kick your ass!” snapped Karin getting more pissed by the second. She took a step closer and muttered, “shit” under her breath.

“Karin-san you sure you’re okay?”

“Fuck Shado!” As Karin started to shake in anger her reiatsu started to rise. GrimmJow quickly ran over, and pulled her aside. He ignored her whimpers as he dragged her to the wall away from the others.

“Karin, what the hell are ya doin get control of yourself.” GrimmJow insisted a hush tone.

Karin stared at him and her eyes widen in shock in realization at what just happened. “Cookie, I’m sorry I don’t know what happen I’m just on edge with everything and then he had to go and piss me off.”

“I always known ya have a short temp, but we mustn’t let them know about ya.” GrimmJow brought his hands to her shoulders and gently gripped them.

She glanced up at him and then looked away. “I still don’t understand why we got to keep it a secret. They’re our friends and …” her voice trailed off.

He released one of her shoulders and placed his hand under her chin and lifted it for her to face him. “Karin, ya have unique abilities and we’ve managed to keep them hidden, but we don’t know what Soul Society will do if they found out about them.”

“But we can’t hide them forever, and I want to be honest with them, with Toushirou. They’re going to find out about them eventually.” She whispered back to him.

“We just got to be careful for the time being, we really need to talk with Ichigo about this.”

She took a deep breathe, closed her eyes for a few seconds and opened them meeting his stare. “You’re right, Cookie, arigato. But it just pisses me off when people still treat like a kid.”

“What are ya talking about?” GrimmJow insisted.

“Shado won’t let me do body shots with Toushirou,” as she pulled her head away mumbling Karin.

“Is that what it was all about? snickered GrimmJow.

She raised her head and shot him an evil look, “Laugh it up, Cookie but how would ya feel if someone interfered in your relationship with Rukia.”

He smiled down at her in understanding, “I would be pissed too!”

Karin grinned and nodded her head and peering at the ground. “How am I going to explain this to Toushirou,” asked Karin thinking out loud.

GrimmJow reached out and placed his hand back on her shoulder remarking, “Hitsugaya, is a good guy he’ll understand.”

Karin lifted her head and meeting his eyes, “Ya, I know but it’s funkin embarrassing.”

GrimmJow pulled her into an embrace and hugged her and assuring her that it would be fine, and she held him back.

Toushirou was watching from where he was standing and crossed over to them. “Excuse me, Karin is everything alright?”

GrimmJow turned to him and said, “I’ll leave ya two alone,” with a smirk and made his way back over to Rukia.

As soon as he reached Rukia she asked him, “What was that all about?”

GrimmJow shrugged, “Oh, nothin just Karin’s famous temp getting a hold of her.”

Rukia glanced at him and then to the drink she was holding. “I’ve been wondering what’s your relationship with Karin-chan?” Rukia inquired shyly.

“Why are ya worried?” teased GrimmJow.

“No, why would I be worried,” she came back with.

He stood there smirking at her, “Rukia, Karin and I are very close, and I care about her a lot.”

“Oh,” is all she responded still peering at her drink.

“But we are just friends,” he added lifting her chin so she would meet his yes.

“Oh, that’s good to hear,” she smiled and moved forward, reaching for his head and pulled him down it to a kiss.

Ichigo laid there recovering from his mind shattering orgasm that Renji had just given him. Once his body settled down he sat up and leaned into Renji and kissed him softly on the lips, “I’ll be right back.”

“I’ll be right here,” retorted in a grin as he watched Ichigo get off the bed and head to a closed door. He laid back upon the bed still trying to cope with what had just taken place. He was with Ichigo. Ichigo! He lifted his hand that was covered in Ichigo’s cum and smiled in satisfaction. We’re finally together.

He heard a cabinet open and close and then the sound of running water, he must be cleaning himself off he thought to himself. And before he knew it, he saw Ichigo come out of the bathroom. He was freshly cleaned and still completely naked, if it was possible Renji harden even more as he took in all of Ichigo’s luscious body. When he noticed in one hand Ichigo had a wash cloth and in the other a small box. Ichigo handed him the wash cloth, and placed the box down on the bed.

“Arigato,” Renji said still not being able to take his eyes off of Ichigo. “What’s the box for?” he asked as he wiped off his hand with the wash cloth.

“It’s not the box, but what’s in the box, baka” snickered Ichigo in responds.

“Kay, then what’s in the box.” Renji asked with a chuckle.

“You find out,” Ichigo said as he crawled back on to the bed.







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