Without You

Well I edited this. I wrote this fan fiction so long ago, and I absolutely hate it! There 's really nothing good about this chapter, at all. If you would be so kind, I would love a beta. And to 'NightFox':
Thank you so much for the review! I really needed some criticism! I did not know that there was so many mistakes! And I am taking your advice and am trying to find a beta. I do have Mozilla Firefox. But when I wrote this, I didn't and I put it on a different site, so I didn't really see the mistakes. Excuses aside, this chapter, and probably the next ones to come, suck. Once I am finished editing this one, I am going to the second chapter and editing that one as well. Wish me luck, because I have a feeling that it is as bad as this one.

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Renji was sitting on the cliff overlooking Ichigo's hometown. He'd forgotten what it was called, but he'd have to call it home too for now. He sighed, falling back and laying down on the grass wet with the morning dew. He thought of Byakuya, his boyfriend of seven months, and punched the ground.

'It's been a week since I last saw him. It was just another hollow. Why is it taking this long? He can't be hurt because he's...him.' He sighs, remembering the last day they had together.

'It was October seventh, which means that today is our eight month anniversary. God, he can't be hurt! We had plans to go to and celebrate. Rukia had been so happy to see her brother after almost a year without any contact what-so-ever. Damn, who's going to tell her?!'

Then he felt a pang of pain from the bond he has with Byakuya. He jumped up and grabbed his chest.

"Byakuya" he whispered, "What the hell have you gotten yourself into this time?" He stood up and started walking towards Ichigo's apartment, starting off slow and calm; then the pain started to get worse and he started to sprint with tears threatening to flow from his eyes.

Turning one last corner he bumped into someone, causing him to fall backwards and hit the pavement with a startled cry. "The hell, man?!" He yelled, getting over his shock and looked up. "Jesus Christ, Renji. We've been looking all over for you! Where the hell have you been?!" Ichogo screamed, but held out his hand to help his friend up off the ground. Renji took it and dusted himself off.

"Somethings wrong. I can't sense Byakuya's spirit energy. It's usually easy to find." He stated, looking at Ichigo's soon to be wife, Rukia.

"What the hell's going on, guys?" He asked slowly, afraid of the answer. Ichigo looked at Rukia then to him.

"Look Renji, Byakuya...he's...well..he's in the hospital." Renji just stared at his lips in distress and anguish as he spoke the next words. "He's not doing well Renji. A hollow attacked him." Nothing mattered. The world momentarily stopped and all Renji could was sit back and watch. Byakuya was dieing. His Byakuya, his mate, his life..his love.

Another stab of pain; the pain was getting worse. "What's wrong with him?! I can feel everything through our bond. Damn-it! What the hell are they doing to him?!" All he could think of was Byakuya. What the hell is happening? Why didn't he tell me something was wrong? What the hell did I do to deserve this!?

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